Chapter Thirteen
Horror's from the past
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Dedicated to julie47, hpfan4life, Sweet-single, poembaby89, uzumaki misaki, and RainbowCookie318
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(A/N) Okay, here's the next chapter, I only dedicated this chapter to the people who reviewed on my last chapter.
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: Questions, Answers, and Comments :
(Chapter Twelve Comments)
hpfan4life: i love it! I wish this was real it would be awesome...how long is this story
going to be anyway? I hope its long I cant get enough! I am reading like 5 ff
right now and this is my fav. I check it every day to see if you updated...
Reply: (Blushes) Thanks! I dunno how long it's going to be… maybe like twenty-thirty chapters. Thanks for reviewing.
Sigi: I can't decide, I really like your story update soon please
Reply: Okay, thanks for reviewing.
X-X x0 EVIL POKER 0x X-XTHREESOME! THREESOME!
Reply: Okay! Lol, now we just got to see who else says A Threesome! Thanks for reviewing.
Uzumaki misakiOk...so Harry's a ghost and jack is a werewolf...alrighty then...
Reply: I emailed you personally about this… but I should tell everyone else. Okay… Harry's NOT a ghost… Jack is a different kind of Werewolf… or he's just some other kind of beast, I'll try to answer that all in this chapter! Cause I bet you're all wondering about Jack, and why Harry's alive… and ya…
RainbowCookie318: Awesome, a love triangle!! Can we get to know Jack a bit more before we try to decide who we like better? Update soon!
Reply: Shure, you can. Thanks for reviewing.
Irenii: OMG!! WOW!! So awesome!! You are an awesome writer! Can't wait for the next chapter! I like Harry and Jack better. I shall be waiting for an update:D
Reply: Thanks! But I'm not THAT good, but thanks for saying it. (Smiles) I'm glad you like my story!
(Chapter Eleven Comments)
RainbowCookie318: Wow, great chapter! Very intense. I loved the description of the cabin, I could see it clearly in my head as I read. Looking forward to the next update!
Reply: Thanks! (Smiles brightly) I had SO much trouble with inside the cabin… but I'm glad you liked it!
Poembaby89Yes update. Who is in the house with her? Im on the edge of my seat to know
Reply: Lol. I bet some people were on the edge of there seats too! Lol.
Hpfan4life: I NEED to know what happens next! This is awesome! I LOVE it! Please update!
Reply: Thanks! Lol. It's amazing how many people I left in suspense! Lol. I'm glad you think it's good! Thanks, it means a lot to me! (Smiles)
(Chapter Ten Comments)
RainbowCookie318Good chapter. I like Harry's outfit! Update soon.
Reply: Thanks! I didn't think the outfit Harry wore was her best… but thanks for saying you liked it!
(Chapter Nine Comments)
Sweet-singlewah? She keeps wanting to tell him but keeps getting sidetracked, makes me get annoyed but hey good thing going!!
update soon!!
Reply: lol, ya… she does! Lol!
RainbowCookie318 ahem Draco's eyes are not blue, they're grey. ;)
Reply: I don't remember if I mentioned this comment… but oh, well. Ya, I guess Draco's eyes are grey, but I never really pictured them grey… Seeing as I haven't read the Harry Potter books for a while, I forgot. Lol. Thanks for mentioning that.
(Chapter Eight Comments)
Nocturnal007Interesting story, I liked it. Will look forward to an update! If you have the time, check out my own HP fic "An Arranged Marriage" )
Reply: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. I'll check out your fan fic sometime! I bet it's very good!
Bellanee chanWow, poor Harry. She has to deal with so much angst in so little time... Great story though. Keep writing.
Reply: Ya, she does! I feel bad for her… Thanks, I am happy you liked it.
(Chapter Seven Comments)
Uzumaki MisakiAww sweet!
Reply: Thanks!
(Chapter Six Comments)
Julie47i think Harry should have a different name, now that he's a girl. Something like Hailey, or Hannah. It's weird that Draco calls her Harry.
Reply: I don't remember if I mentioned this review… I think I did… hm… well anyways. I don't know if I change her name. For me, I'm starting to get use to it… I don't know if the people who read it are… I might change her name, but then, I'll get confused! Lol.
Fifespice nice dream to have just when you get together with someone lol
Reply: I think I replied to this one personally, but I thought I'd stick it on here anyways. Lol, ya… it is a nice dream to have when you're together with someone. Lol.
RainbowCookie318Weird chapter in a good way. Too short, though. Make them longer! And update soon!! Like right now. Ready? Update!
Reply: lol, ya… I guess it is a weird chapter! Ya, I know it's short… sorry about that.
(Chapter Five Comments)
Sweet-singlelol update soon!!
Reply: I can't think of anything to really say for this review… Lol. I'm hopeless. Well, thanks for reviewing.
RainbowCookie318Glad you liked my last review ;). I liked the last couple of chapters. Harry/Draco is totally awesome, especially when Harry's a girl, lol. I so wanna see what Ron and Hermione say about Draco & Harry kissing! Update soon or I'll send my evil monster mushrooms to eat you! ...
Reply: Lol, I thought it was funny. Well… ya, I guess Harry and Draco are kool. This fan fic is my first Harry and Draco fics. I haven't read many Harry/Draco fics… Like maybe five… Lol, nice. I don't think I wanna get eaten by mushrooms! Lol.
Poembaby89I liked it. The Harry and Draco kissing was good to. Keep
updating
luv, Ash
Reply: Lol. Glad you liked it. Lol, A lot of people said Draco and Harry kissing was good, lol.
AngelofdarknessfireHahaha. I like the two of them together. Lol alot.
Reply: lol, everyone likes them together! Lol. I hope people like Jack and Harry as much. Tanks for reviewing
Kippers: Yes, they kiss! Update.
Reply: lol! Thanks for reviewing!
Omfgiluvtomfeltonomfg – funny - Harry nd Draco - harry as a girl – omfg - heaps good man
Reply: lol! Yep! I'm a man! Lol! More of a Women/Man. Lol! I'm hyper! Not good! Lol. Thanks for reviewing.
(Chapter Four
Comments)
FifespiceWell as i am a girl and have been one far longer than you i also hate make up but i love shopping though im kinda fussy about what i wear so i agree that not all girls like make up, And oh how sweet Draco is but if his parents find out he rescued harry id wager he'll be a dead boy walking
Reply: Most of the girls I know LOVE makeup and shopping! Ugh! I don't! It's stupid! Well, i was wondering… Has any ever thought you were like older, when you're writing? Tina does… for my story, she thought it was written by someone around the age of thirty! I don't think she believed me when I said I wrote it… lol. I'm never really fussy about what I wear, as long as it's clothes, and comfy, and baggy, then I'm comfy. Lol. I'm not one of those people who would like say EW to bones and blood, but I kinda hates bugs! Can't stand them… I have a good reason for it. Lol. When I was younger, a bee flew into by glasses and stung me! Before that I didn't hate them! Ya… lol. Ya Draco is sweet… I like him in the fan fics that put him in good light… like, Recnac Transfaerso by Celebony, Flawed Perfection by Celebony, and the Darkness Within by Kurinoone, and some others, but I forgot their names. Yes… He is now a target! Lol. Well, this was a long reply! Well, thanks for reviewing.
AngelofdarknessfireDraco & harry? I have to read.
Reply: Okay… and thanks for reviewing
Iz.darling.i like your story. It's different and that's a good thing and i don't like the people who are saying that there's a bunch of things wrong with it. Whatever. Please update?
Reply: Thanks! Me two, believe me you're not the only one who has a problem with the people who say there's stuff with it. I hate it, because it takes FOREVER to finish writing a chapter, I use my time and strength on it, and people just say you need to change this and this…sometimes its good advice, but some of the people who reviewed were jerks, and said it sucks! Thanks for reviewing! It means a lot!
Julie47loved the story. i second rainbowcookie318's remarks in poking you if you don't update soon.
Reply: Thanks! Lol! Nice!
Benson-luveri love it so far so please don't stop righting. There are not a lot of girl!harry fics so please update soon
Reply: Thanks for taking your time to review! And don't worry! I'm defiantly not going to stop writing! (Smiles Friendly)
(Chapter Three Comments)
Jacqueline: Nice story, I'm German so I can not understand all of your story but I think it is very interesting! Greets.
Reply: Thanks! Thanks for reviewing!
Poembaby89I like it keep updating
Reply: I'm glad you liked it! And yes, I will keep updating!
RainbowCookie318Hahaha, awesome chapter! I loved the press. "Ms. Potter." Brilliant. Update soon or I'll come over there and poke you! OO
Reply: I already mentioned this review in one of my other chapters, but I couldn't resist showing it again! Lol! I think it's funny! Lol! I hope you keep sending reviews like that! I enjoy them!
Fire DolphinPlease update soon!
Reply: Shure thing! Thanks for reviewing.
(Chapter Two Comments)
Gohan8k: It's an okay fic. You need to work on your grammar and British variation of the English language. There was also not the best way to present the timing of the events and the way they occurred, but your story line is good. And you could do to make the chapters longer
Reply: Well, I've never been to England, so I wouldn't know what to do. I'm Canadian, so I use Canadian variation. Well, I presented the events the way I wanted them. On my other Fan fic, Missing Me, a couple people told me to pick up the past a bit, so I did it with this one two. Okay. I'm working on making them longer.
AngelofdarknessfireHas few grammer mistakes, but still funny.
Reply: Kay, thanks for reviewing
Akroque91Interesting story. I look foreward to see where this leads to. Harry a girl. Does her name stay that name of Harry or does it change to something else.
Reply: Thanks. I dunno if I will change it.
RainbowCookie318Great chappie! I can't get used to Harry being referred to as "she" and "her". Update soon!
Reply: Thanks! Lol, are you use to it now? Since I've referred to her as a girl for twelve chapters?
(Chapter One Comments)
Angelofdarknessfire: Is really funny.
Reply: lol, thanks.
RainbowCookie318...Weirdest story EVER. I love it. Update soon!
Reply: lol, I guess so… lol.
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(A/N) Okay, I'm about to start the chapter! There was SO many reviews to put on here! Like thirty-five or something… If I didn't use your review it's probably because I already answered it if it was a question. The lyric I'm going to put is called accidentally in Love by Counting Crows. It sorta goes with Jake and Harry… because they're accidentally in love! Lol… Well, here you go!
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So she said what's the problem baby
What's the problem I don't know
Well maybe I'm in love (love)
Think about it every time
I think about it
Can't stop thinking 'bout it
How much longer will it take to cure this
Just to cure it cause I can't ignore it if it's love (love)
Makes me wanna turn around and face me but I don't know nothing 'bout love
Come on, come on
Turn a little faster
Come on, come on
The world will follow after
Come on, come on
Cause everybody's after love
So I said I'm a snowball running
Running down into the spring that's coming all this love
Melting under blue skies
Belting out sunlight
Shimmering love
Well baby I surrender
To the strawberry ice cream
Never ever end of all this love
Well I didn't mean to do it
But there's no escaping your love
These lines of lightning
Mean we're never alone,
Never alone, no, no
Come on, Come on
Move a little closer
Come on, Come on
I want to hear you whisper
Come on, Come on
Settle down inside my love
Come on, come on
Jump a little higher
Come on, come on
If you feel a little lighter
Come on, come on
We were once
Upon a time in love
We're accidentally in love
Accidentally in love x7
Accidentally
I'm In Love, I'm in Love,
I'm in Love, I'm in Love,
I'm in Love, I'm in Love,
Accidentally x2
Come on, come on
Spin a little tighter
Come on, come on
And the world's a little brighter
Come on, come on
Just get yourself inside her
Love ...I'm in love
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(A/N) Okay! FINALLY here's the chapter! Enjoy!
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Previously:
She broke off from the kiss. She looked into Jack's blue eyes, and beamed. She leaned back in, and kissed him again…
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Harry opened her eyes wearily, she looked around. Everything was unfocused. She sat up, and rubbed her eyes. Everything began to focus. She was in a bedroom, she'd never been in before. Things were scattered everywhere. Harry looked at herself, she was barely wearing anything. She clutched the blankets tighter around her. She turned her head, and saw Jack lying there. Harry looked away.
"Oh my god…" She whispered to herself. Harry jumped out of bed and got her clothes. She slipped them on. Harry was about to leave, but someone grabbed her arm. She first looked at her arm, and then looked at what was holding her. It was Jack. He let her arm go, but put an arm in the doorway, blocking her escape route. He put the other arm behind her, so she couldn't go that way, either.
"And where are you going?" Jack asked. Harry opened her mouth to answer, but no sound came out, she shut it again.
"You know, you don't leave a guys room, while he's sleeping… It's rude." Harry looked down at her feet.
"Sorry…" Jack gave a small laugh. He cupped her chin and forced her to look at him. She did, his eyes were soft and warm, Harry couldn't look away, even if she wanted to.
"It's alright… I shouldn't have scared you." Harry gave him a small smile, which he returned. Jack removed both his arms, and put one arm over Harry's shoulders.
"You can't leave now." Said Jack. He led her back to the bed, and sat her down.
"Stay…" He said. Jack turned and left, leaving Harry alone. Harry couldn't help but feel regretful… she didn't know why. It was probably because she hardly knew Jack, and she had just slept with him. She shuttered.
Jack came back in, holding a tray of food. He set it in front of Harry. It bore five slices of buttered toast, a cup of steaming tea, and a bagel. Harry began to ask Jack questions as she ate.
"How old are you, Jack?"
"Almost sixteen and you?" Said Jack.
"Fifteen." Jack nodded.
"Jack… Tell me about your past." Jack looked up at her.
"Why?"
"Cause I want to know." Jack gave a sigh.
"Fine, what do you want to know?"
"How about… do you got any siblings?" Jack shook his head.
"Where are your parents?" Jack shrugged, still not saying anything.
"Uhm… Okay… Who are your parents?"
"I don't know." Said Jack. Harry frowned.
"Okay… What happened to your parents?"
"Well… I've been adopted two times. My real mom was killed, and my father went evil or something. My first pair of adopted parents are dead, and my parents now are missing."
"Oh…"
"Ya…" Jack bowed his head sadly.
"Where were you born?"
"In Canada."
"Where in Canada?"
"Alberta. The town was I think… red deer… I don't remember."
"Where did you grow up?" Asked Harry.
"Uhm… Here… In this shack." Said Jack, looking around. Harry's brows knitted.
"Here?" Jack nodded.
"… Okay… I was wondering…"
"Would you like to go to Hogwarts with me?" Jack looked at Harry.
"Are you serious?"
"Yep!" Jack smiled. Harry gave a small smile back.
"Now, Harry. Tell me about yourself." Harry nodded.
"Okay."
"Uhm… Well… My parents were killed when I was only one."
"Oh… I'm sorry…" Said Jack. Harry just smiled at him.
"It's alright."
"How can it be alright? You lost your parents!" Cried Jack. Harry just stared at him.
"Well… Ya, I guess so. Now can I finish?" Jack nodded.
"Yes."
"Okay… So, I was sent to live with my Mother's sister. They treated my horrible for the first ten years! Then, I got my letter from Hogwarts! On the train I met Hermione and Ron."
"Your bestfriends?" Harry nodded.
"Yes. I was sorted into Gryffindor, and in my very first year, I got to be on the Gryffindor Quidditch team! As a seeker."
"Quidditch? I think I've heard of that… Isn't it like some kind of sport that you play on Broomsticks?"
"Yes. Well… then at the end of my school year I met Voldemort." Jack frowned.
"As in Tom Riddle?" Harry scowled.
"Yes… How do you know his real name?" Asked Harry. Jack's eyes widened and he looked at his hands, a blush creeping up his cheeks.
"I just do…"
"Right… Well, then in my second year, I met a house elf by the name of Dobby, he warned me not to go to Hogwarts. Of course, I didn't listen. Ron and I missed the train, so we flew his Dad's flying car, and as we were about to land, the car went off course, and smashed into the Whomping willow!" (A/N) I don't know how to spell the name of the tree… I think I got it right.
"Really?"
"Ya."
"I heard of that tree… It's vicious!" Harry gave a small laugh.
"Ya… Ya I guess it is." There was silence for a moment.
"So… Carry on…" Said Jack. Harry beamed at him.
"Okay… So, we got into the school and met Filch?"
"Filch?" Jack frowned.
"Argus Filch, are caretaker. Well, and then there was Ron's owl! It was so hilarious!" Harry gave a small laugh, Jack just smiled.
"Well, then that was Defence against the dark arts! Lockhart… Our Defence teacher at the time… He set a cage of Pixies lose…"
"Pixies?! Nasty little things!" Exclaimed Jack. Harry gave Jack a small grin.
"Ya… Well, then there was the Quidditch match… A Bludger that was charmed kept following me around… and then, it hit me in my arm. Lockhart tried a spell, and made me loose all my bones in my arm!" Jack gasped.
"Really?!" Harry nodded her blonde hair. Jack bit his bottom lip in anger.
"Carry on…" He said angrily. Harry gave Jack a look before continuing.
"Well, then… Mrs. Norris, Filch's cat, was petrified. I was blamed for it. Then, there was the dueling club. Draco and I dueled, and he sent a snake at me. That's when I learned to talk to snakes." Jack held up a hand to stop her.
"Wait a second… you're a parselmouth?!" Harry nodded. Harry scowled when Jack raised his eyebrow in disgust, his face scrunched up, and he looked deep in thought. "What?" Snapped Harry, getting annoyed. Jack looked up at her, and saw her expression.
"I'm not disgusted by you… it just brings back childhood memories." Harry nodded.
"Okay. Now can I finish?" Jack nodded, and let a small smile creep on his lips. Harry grinned back.
"Well… Then Hermione was petrified-" Harry began but Jack interrupted her.
"Hermione, Your bestfriend?" Harry sent a glare at him. Jack bowed his head. Harry gave smile.
"Yes… Well, I'm not going to tell you anymore." Jack looked up, horror etched across his face.
"What?!"
"Too many interruptions. I'll tell you more later." As Jack was about to say something back, the house began to shake. Pictures fell off the walls and fell to the ground, the glass shattering. Cracks began in the walls. Harry got up.
Suddenly, a chandelier fell from the roof. Harry didn't even notice it.
"Look out!" Just as Jack yelled, the chandelier fell onto Harry's back. She fell to the ground, a scream echoed out of her mouth. Glass shattered everywhere. Harry lay on the ground, the chandelier pinning her in place. Jack ran over to her. He grabbed the chandelier and picked it up. Beads of sweat began to form on his head as he picked up the chandelier. He threw it, and it went crashing through the wall.
He kneeled beside her, and turned her over. As he put a hand under her back, he moved his hand away quickly, as he felt something cold. He looked at his hand. Blood covered it. He looked at Harry.
Blood was coming from the corner of her mouth, and the corner of her head, and she had a scar just above her right eyebrow. It was pouring blood down her face, and landing on the floor. Jack felt a tear fall down his face. He saw Harry's hair was turning red.
"Harry…" He whispered, hoping she was going to answer. But, she said nothing. He felt for a pulse. He felt one, and gave a sigh of relief.
But, it was very weak. He put an arm under Harry's back, ignoring that blood that was now going down his arm, and but another under her legs. He stood up. Jack held Harry to his chest protectively.
As Jack ran out of the room, the house began to shake more forcibly. The roof and floor began to cave in. Jack ran, missing rubble, and jumping over gaps in the floor, as he went. Soon, he was out of the door.
Before Jack knew what happened, he was surrounded by more then twenty strangers in robes… Death Eaters. They had all their wands pointed at Jack. He glared around.
"Well, well… look what we have here." Said a deep cruel voice. Jack's eyes widened. A few death eaters parted, and another figure joined the fold. He had dark red eyes that wouldn't leave Jack's face. The man gave a smile.
"Hello Jack."
"Hello… Father."
(A/N) So SO SO SO SO sorry it took so long to update! I've been REAL busy! Hope you like how I ended this chapter. He he he. To tell you… I deleted the Author's note, because I didn't want people to get confused. Well, hope you like this chapter. So… the results for the poll are as following:
Harry/Jack: 2
Threesome: 1
Harry/Draco: 0
I'm too lazy to edit now. I'll do it later. Please review.