Ummm it was recently brought to my attention that I called Tobi a 'cereal' killer….it should have 'serial' killer….he doesn't kill people with whole grain breakfast folks…sorry….although that would make a great story!
Sakura: well lookie here, you're finding a lot of mistakes aren't you?
Me: get stuffed
Sakura: what did you say!?
Me: you heard me
Sakura: you wanna go bitch?
Me: taste my awesome cereal of death! *throws box of lucky charms at Sakura*
Kankuro: uhhh yeah…*turns to readers as Sakura and writer continue to fight* Ghostwriter9396 does not own Naruto
Gaara: but she does own an odd mind
Kankuro: that's the understatement of the year little bro, she owns the most bazar minds I've ever had the misfortune to be caught in
Me: Hey, I heard that you guys…*starts crying*
Lee: HOW DARE YOU MAKE MY FANGIRL CRY!
Gaara: but you can't deny that we're right
Lee: …*head down* no I can not
Konan: I think we all agree on that…oh well…here's the next chapter everyone
High School Is Murder
By: Ghostwritter9396
Ch. 13
Shikamaru was seeing red. His ears were ringing and he just made out the rest of Madara's words.
"He was in league with the bastard so I had to. Besides, it was fun. More fun than strangling that little puppy dog anyways."
Kiba fought to get to his feet, his teeth clenched but his stance steady. Before he could rush Madara however, Shino reached out and held Kiba close to him, refusing to release him. Ino had joined Temari's efforts in restraining Shikamaru which was proving difficult.
Madara looked over at the sudden movement. "Huh? Was it something I said?"
Kabuto, who was standing at the end of the line with the rest of the Snakes pushed his glasses up the bridge of his nose. Well, well. So it was an Akatsuiki member after all.
"Well done, Jugo. You passed the finals with flying colors. Those study tips I gave you came in useful after all, huh?"
"You kidding? It was just my awesome brain that got me through." Both of the them laughed.
Jugo felt a small tear run down his cheek as this memory came to mind. Asuma had been the only one who believed he could do anything other than walk dogs and beat people black and blue. The boy in black pacing in front of him and the others had taken that from him. And what was worse, he was showing no feeling about it. No joy, no anger, no remorse. He was just telling them like it was no big deal.
"Sarutobi's death was a warning to the bastard and the bitch, but did they heed it?" continued Madara. "No, they didn't. Just like no one heeded the warning I gave about the fighting."
"What are you talking about?" snapped Dosu, following the boy in black with his small beedy eyes.
"The bugs." Sighed Madara. "Of course, I didn't really feed that plant thing of Zetsu's, I didn't know how. But I took them in any case. I picked the lock during lunch, grabbed the bugs, and left. I would hope that it would serve a strong enough warning to the three points of the school to stop fighting each other. However, no one even took it as a warning." Muttered Madara disappointedly. "Ah well, they served very useful in the game I played this morning with bastard and bitch."
"What game?" asked Tenten, kneeling next to Neji, her body making a half shield.
"I killed them too. Only this time, I let Shino's and Kidomaru's bugs join in the fun. And it was fun, to hear their screams through the gags. To see the terror in their eyes as the bugs crawled inside their bodies and made little nests. I wonder if they've found the bugs yet." He said almost as an after thought. "I let them crawl in their skin for a few minutes while I took care of the finishing details. Then I reached in and examined their hearts. I was very curious you see what the hearts of betrayers and abusers looked like. They were weak, I barely had to apply pressure and they fell apart."
Karin felt light headed as she slumped against the wall, falling over to all fours and gaged as these words hit her. Indeed everyone looked at least five shades paler than before as Madara went into detail of what he had done to his, or rather Tobi's, parents.
"But you know," he said calmly, shrugging his shoulders as if to say 'no big deal', his head tilted to one side, eyes closed and that damn smirk on his face again. "I still had more fun examining that teacher. His organs were really weak. Ahahah, Simon Says don't even think about it." He added, leveling the gun at Karin as Jugo started running towards him. "Back in line hero. UMPH!"
While Jugo distracted him, Shikamaru had broken free from the girls and had rushed him. He slammed Madara to the floor, causing the gun, that thankfully was pointed now at the ceiling, to go off again. BANG!
"And there has just been another shot fired." Said the reporter, still standing at her post in front of the camera.
The parents of the hostages were now standing in a group, all looking up at the school, some crying, some stone faced and pale. Kakuzu's dad gripped his car keys tightly, leaving an imprint on his palm. Come on boy, walk out of that building. Don't you dare leave, remember the promise we made, just us guys till the end. God don't let it be the end.
Deidara's mother was clutching her daughter and was watching the building terrified. Kiri needs to know her brother, Dei-Dei. She needs to know the one she loves the most. Don't leave her now, not when she needs you the most.
Sasuke and Itachi's father was fixed, no expression, on the building. Itachi, you're always saving your brother and mother from me. Save yourselves this one more time. Do not disappear like your cousin. Do not leave me too. I promise, boys, I will never drink again, I'll give up on Madara and focus on you, just get out of their a live.
"It's no use, Sir. We can't get a clear view inside the building. We have to rush in."
"No!" shouted Yuura, pinching his nose in frustration. "Damn it is that line hooked up yet?!"
"We can't, sir, he's cut the lines!"
"Of course he has. Why would I think the bastard would actually want to talk to us?" he thought, and then looked over at Izumo and Kotetsu. "I have a plan, you in?"
Fifteen minutes later they were all looking at each other. "You sure this is going to work?" Kotetsu asked.
"You have another idea? We're still in the lines of procedure, but in a situation like this, where we don't even know what we're up against, it's tricky. If we make one wrong move, we're screwed and they're dead. Leave it all to me." Yuura said sighing heavily.
"Shikamaru!" all of them screamed at the same time. Even the Snakes, though they could care less, were horrified.
"Now then, Simon Says, no body move!" cackled Madara as he held a dazed Shikamaru by the ponytail, a sharp knife in his hand, glinting at Shikamaru's throat.
"Let him go!" begged Temari and Ino together.
"Again with this?" Madara muttered, an annoyed look crossing his face. He pressed the tip of the blade into Shikamaru's neck and they saw a trickle of blood appear. They fell silent. "If I keep letting people go, I won't have any control, now will I?" he whispered at them.
"You said you wanted to punish." Said Itachi. "Who do you want to punish and what for?"
"All of you." Shot Madara. "For weeping over that loser's body, for carrying more for him than Tobi, for letting Tobi get into that damn fight, for letting Tobi die!"
"How were we supposed to know? He never even told me." Cried Zetsu, tears running down his face. If only he had known, if only Tobi had told him. He could've, would've saved him and in doing so, Sarutobi, the dog, and Tobi's folks too. He should've seen it, should've seen the hurt and pain behind those cheerful eyes. But, how could he? He hid it so well you'd have to have been looking for it to have spotted it. Forgive me, Tobi.
I'm not dead. Yes you are. I'm in control. I don't want to play this game anymore, I'm scared, I want to be with Zetsu and the others. You're dead damn it, you wont be with anyone ever again.
Why wouldn't this kid just die already? He's getting weaker, Madara could feel that. But still, he needed to suppress him completely to ensure control. You wanted my help remember? You cried that night all those years ago and I came to protect you. His friends were hurting you and I killed them for you. But I got hurt more because of it. But you never had to be hurt by anyone but the bastard again, right. Yeah. Trust me, Tobi, I'm taking care of you. I'm hiding you so you wont be hurt anymore. You can't trust Zetsu or anyone else, they just want to hurt you.
There, that ought to restrain the little wimp for now, if he was lucky, for good. He felt the knife beneath his fingers, and he got an idea in his head. This would be really fun indeed, and it would finally punish them all, the ultimate torture before death, and then when he was done, thirty-three heads would lie at his feet, thirty-three identities would be erased.
Me: *turns to Sasuke* next chapter?
Sasuke: *nods*
Both: *start fighting*
Tenten: *groans*
Pein: WAIT! WHAT!? WHAT ARE ThEY PLANNING? WHAT'S MADARA GONNA DO WITH THAT KNIFE? WHERE DID THE GUN GO? I'M SO CONFUSED!
Me: *pokes head out of smoke cloud, still fighting Sasuke* for the last time just read *head goes back down in cloud*
Hidan: *claps Pein on shoulder* don't let it get to you man, it's not that good of a story anyways
Pein: I DON'T CARE! THERE ARE QUESTIONS UNANSWERED AND MY OCD WONT LET ME FORGET THEM! I HAVE TO KNOW!
Konan: down big boy, here, click the next button and it'll all be alright, okay? *turns to readers* don't forget to comment you guys!