Okay, thanks so much to those of you who helped :) I have my plan set now :) So I have nothing else to say other than here is your chapter~M


Last chapter(Chapter 10)

"Tobias are you okay?" I ask him, looking up into his eyes.

"Yes and no, I am okay now. My arm still throbs slightly, and I am still a bit shaky. I think I have a bruise on my back from where she shoved me to the ground, will you check?" Tobias answers, sliding his shirt off.

As usual I see his tattoo then underneath that his wipe marks, which are scars now. When I look closer ,I see a new bruise forming.

I sigh and lay my hand slightly on his back, he winces slightly, which cause me to wince as well.

"Yes, there is a bruise but its no where near as serious as the wipe lashes, even as scars.." I say and he sighs as well. We walk to the bedroom and change quickly and then we take each others hands and head down to the pit. Ready to face whatever it brings us, as long as we are together.

Chapter 11

Tris's POV

After Tobias and I change, we head down to the pit, walking hand in hand the whole way. When the pit comes into view, I see several different colors mixed with the normal black, which is a weird sight.

When we actually enter the pit, I see that most of the initiates are down here, and have at least one family member here. I look around and see Taylor sitting by the chasm, all alone.

"Four, I will be right back. Why don't you go talk to some of the family's." I say, and he gives me a confused look, but nods anyway.

"Why though, aren't you coming with me?" He asks before he lets me go.

"Look Tay is over there by herself, I want to go talk to her really quick." I state, pointing Taylor out to him. He nods, before letting go of my hand and walking off.

I walk over to where Taylor is sitting, and sit next to her.

"Oh hey Six." She says turning to look at me, as I sit down.

"Hey Tay, no family members here for you?" I ask her and she laughs, it was a dry laugh.

"No my mom was a ass, my dad died when I was four, and I have no siblings." She answers, oh that explains it.

"So you didn't like your mom?" I ask her, and again she laughs.

"You are the only person I have ever told this, but I feel like I can trust you. My mom used to abuse me, that's why I left." Taylor explains, shaking her head lightly.

"I'm sorry Tay, just remember that if you try hard enough, we can be your new family." I say and she nods. I didn't give her much sympathy, for I know it doesn't help, and she doesn't want it.

She stands up and I follow her lead.

"I think I am going to go take a nap, catch ya later Six. Oh and please don't tell anybody." She says,before turning and leaving the pit, heading for the dorms.

I turn around, and look around for Tobias, but I don't see him. So I decide to walk around and talk a little.

I see James with his family, and decide to walk over there. You know just to scare the hell out of James.

I walk over there and say, "Hey James, why don't you introduce me to these people." I place my hand on his shoulder, just for the effect.

"Oh um right, uh this is my um, mom Selena, and my uh younger brother Jacob. Mom, Jacob this is my uh, instructor Six." James stutters, as he starts to shake slightly.

"Six? That's a stupid name." The kid Jacob says, ugh right James came from candor.

"Jacob it probably isn't the best idea to smart mouth her." James says looking at me, giving me a worried look.

"James here is correct, so shut it candor. Selena its nice to meet you. James has done fairly well. Although, he does need to get his prioritizes straight. Isn't that right James." I ask looking at him with a slight death glare.

"Uh, um yes ma'am." James replies, just as I feel a pair of arms wrap around me.

I instinctively stiffen, but then I hear a whisper, "Its just me Tris." Tobias, he said my name low enough that no one would here.

"And who is this?" Selena asks James, looking over at Tobias, or Four in this case.

"Oh uh, that's my other um, instructor. Uh his name is um Four." James gets out looking even more nervous now, as he should be.

"What you both have numbers for names? That's stupid." Jacob states, and I tense slightly, waiting for Tobias's reaction.

"What's your name kid?" He asks keeping his voice calm, which is a good thing for now.

"Jacob." the boy answers, looking up at Tobias.

"Well Jacob, I am an instructor here. You are in my compound for the moment, so I suggest you keep your candor mouth shut." Four expresses, letting go of me, and walking over to where he was towering over Jacob.

"Got it?" He asks, Jacob nods quickly and Four returns to his earlier position, his arms around my waist again.

"My name is Selena, since James didn't introduce me. I am his mother, so are you and Six together?" Selena asks, in a kind voice, ignoring Four's actions.

"Yes ma'am we are. We normally try not to show it to much during initiation, but this is Six's first time as a trainer, and my third, so we aren't great at hiding it yet." Four answers, with a small to keep his friendlier side out.

"Wait how old are you two?" Selena asks, her voice kind, yet curious, you can tell she has no filter.

"Oh, I'm seventeen and Four here is nineteen." I answer, not giving Tobias a chance.

"Oh, so how are you two trainers? I mean aren't you a little young?" She asks and I laugh, as does Tobias.

"No ma'am, age doesn't matter here." Four answers, I can almost feel his light smirk.

"Actually, Six there is something I need to talk to you about, so If you would excuse us, it was nice to meet you." Four states, before he takes my hand and drags me away.

When we are far enough away we burst out laughing.

"Did you see the look on James' face?" I ask in between laughs.

"That was hilarious." Four states after calming down.

"What did you need to talk to me about?" I ask him, tilting my head.

"Oh um well, I have something to show you, but first I wanted to know what's up with T." Tobias says, Tobias's nickname for Taylor is T, while I call her Tay.

"Oh okay, well I went and sat down with her and asked her if she had anyone coming. She laughed then explained how her mom abused her, her dad died when she was four and she has no siblings. After a bit of talking she went to take a nap" I explain and he looks shocked.

"I didn't see that coming, did you? I mean she was an amity transfer right?" He asks, shocked, and possibly a bit confused.

"Yeah, but I mean you don't see that coming from abnegation either." I answered, and he nodded in agreement.

"Come on, I have to show you something." Tobias says, grabbing my hand pulling me towards who knows where.

Tobias's POV

When Tris went to talk to Taylor, I walked around for a bit. I was looking to see if Tris's mom had came this year, like she did last year.

I see a flash of gray, I look to where I saw it. I see not only Natalie, but Andrew and Caleb as well. Well shit, this should be interesting.

I look around, to where Tris and Taylor where talking and see they aren't there anymore. I quickly find Tris and walk over to her. I pull her away from James and his family and talk to her then tell her I have something to show her.

I walk with her and let go of her hand, as I lead her in the direction I saw her old family last..

I spot them instantly, though I know Tris hasn't, considering she hasn't had a reaction yet.

We finally get close enough and Natalie sees us.

I nudge Tris and point, and she freezes in shock.

"Wait, I only thought my mom would come. Not my whole freaking family." Tris stutters out, completely in shock. (A/N: When I was editing this part it was weird, I didn't really know how to re-word it, so I just left it alone~M)

"Come on, they see us so we have to go talk to them." I state, pushing her forward slightly.

"Fine, but I swear if they call me by my full name I might slap one of them." She replies as we make our way towards them.

I smile and say, "That's my dauntless girl." Tris smiles, and grabs my hand in hers.

We finally reach them, and they smile...and glare.

"Hey mom,dad, Caleb. I didn't expect to see all of you here." Tris greets, as she stands in front of them with her arms crossed.

"Hello Bea..." Andrew starts to say, but Tris interrupts.

"That is not my name anymore, I go by Tris now. But you can call me Six since the initiates are around, that's what they call me." She snaps, yep that is how much she has changed.

"You did not just snap at me, did you?" Andrew says looking shocked, he isn't used to his daughter standing up for herself.

"Um yes I did. Now what were you saying." Tris says uncrossing her arms, and resting her hands on her hips. Her attitude clearly shows.

"I was saying hello six, how are you?" He spits out her name, I glance at Tris, and she something flash in her eyes, though I didn't quite see what it was.

"I am amazing, I have a new family here, I have amazing friends." Tris answers, with a smirk in place.

"And who is thi..." Andrew starts to ask, when Caleb interrupts.

"Wait Beatrice, is that a tattoo?" Caleb asks, pointing to the three ravens that you can see.

"First that is not my damn name, and second yes it is Caleb." She says crossing her arms again, she is getting extremely mad now.

"Caleb, don't interrupt me." Andrew states facing his son slightly.

"Sorry father." Caleb says looking down. Once abnegation always abnegation, unless you are Tris and I, I think to myself.

"Now I was saying who is this young man?" Andrew asks, and a light smirk appears on Tris's face.

"Oh, this is my boyfriend Four." Tris replies, kissing my cheek and grabbing my hand, I pull her to me and wrap one arm around her waist.

The looks on Caleb and Andrew's faces are hilarious, it takes all of my power not to burst out laughing.

Caleb looks furious, and Andrew has his mouth open. Natalie just smiles and laughs.

"Wait how old are you?" Caleb asks after a while of simply glaring at me.

"I'm nineteen," I answer calmly, in a smooth voice.

"No I don't approve of this, you are way to old for Beatrice. Beatrice, you are not allowed to date him." Andrew retorts shaking his head.

"I will date whoever in the hell I want to date! And for the last time that's not my damn name!" Tris screams at him, I can tell she is really angry, so I place my hand on the small of her back and rub light circles there, knowing it calms her a bit, I can almost see her relax.

"You will not talk to me like that young lady, I'm still your father." Andrew replies, anger laced in his voice.

"Yeah? Well guess what faction before blood!" Tris yells, though not nearly as loud as last time.

Then she adds, "I think its time for you to leave Andrew, you as well Caleb." Tris says, her voice dangerously calm.

"I think it is, it was nice to see you again sis. Bye mom, dad." Caleb says, then he walks away to the exit of the compound.

"I agree, good bye." Andrew adds turning to leave. Of course he gives a proper good bye, he is abnegation, he has to.

He walks a little bit before noticing, that Natalie isn't following him.

"Natalie, are you coming or not?" Andrew asks, his voice still laced with anger.

"No, I will be back soon Andrew. I can jump on and off trains, so I don't need to worry about getting on the stopped one, go ahead and go." She reassures him. He sighs before following Caleb towards the exit.

I must have a confused look on my face, 'cause when Natalie turned around she laughed, giving me a warm smile.

"I was born dauntless Four." She explains and I nod, giving a slight smile.

"Do we have some where a little more private to talk Tris?" She asks whispering her name, knowing not to use it in front of the initiates.

"Yeah, come on we can go to our apartment." Tris answers. We lead the way up the narrow pathways to our apartment.

"Oh I miss this place." Natalie sighs, as we walk the narrow paths.

"Why did you leave here mom?" Tris asks, as we turn down a hallway to our apartment.

"Love, that's all I can say. What apartment number are you?" She asks, as we continue down the hallway.

"Ten actually." I answer, smirking at the thought of our apartment.

"Do you two live together?" She asks and we nod.

"That's kinda funny cause Six plus Four is ten." Natalie says and we laugh.

"Yeah that is kinda our ship name, when people want both of us they say hey ten come here." Tris explains, as I unlock our apartment. We walk in and sit on the couch and Natalie takes the chair.

"So how has life been?" Natalie asks, her voice kind, and warm.

"Like I said great. Although training is kinda ruff, you know having to cut some of the initiates and such." Tris answers smiling slightly, trying to keep the small talk...well small.

"How so? Scared any of them yet?" Natalie asks and we laugh.

"Oh yeah, scared the crap out of a candor on the first day cause they said something about our names. Actually recently I have beat up a girl, and scared the crap out of a guy." Tris answers, her smile leaving at the mention of Emma and James.

"And why did you beat up a girl my I ask? Plus was she an initiate?" She looks slightly amused, though she can tell it is a serious subject.

Tris's POV

My mom looks amused as she asks me why I beat up the girl.

I looked to Tobias because I wasn't sure if he wanted me to tell or not. He simply nods his head so I continue.

"Well this initiate named Emma tied Four up and tried to rape him. I came in and beat the living crap out of her. Then untied Four. We took her to the infirmary, where they are patching her up and then she will become factionless." I explain and mom nods.

"You had a perfectly good reason, and what about this boy?" She asks, her slight smirk reappearing.

"Well his name is James. Before he knew Four and I were dating, Four went to grab us some breakfast, while I went to the training room and the initiates were already in there. James pushed me against the wall and started making out with me. Four walked in then beat the crap out of him. Today him and Emma had set it up because I was finishing getting ready, while Four was exercising down in the training room. As I made my way down there, James stopped me and pushed me against the wall. I grabbed his wrist and twisted it behind his back towards his shoulder blades and told him if he ever came near me again Four would kill him or he would become factionless. Lets just say he is really scared of us now." I say laughing at the end.

Mom smiles and laughs a bit.

"You had pretty good reasons for both. What stage of initiation are you on on?" Mom asks, opening up to us.

"Oh, well stage two started yesterday and will continue tomorrow." I answer and she nods, though she seems dazed, as if deep in thought.

"So, the fighting stage correct?" She asks after a minute and I smile.

"Yep the stage I hated last year." I say smiling and Four sighs a bit.

"Yeah, I hated that stage last year too because I had to watch you get beat up. I couldn't do anything about it and it made me so mad. You know I left the room during her fight with Peter because I almost got sick watching him punch her." Four adds nudging me.

"Yeah, but now thanks to my instructor, I can beat my instructor." I say nudging him back.

"I doubt that Tris." He challenges smiling.

"We will test it later." I say and turn back to my mom.

"You know you two are a cute couple. I hope you don't mind me asking, but what is your real name Four? You look very familiar." She asks, this can't be good.

"Oh um well please don't tell anyone not even Mr. Prior. I'm only telling you because you are Tris's mom and you two are really close. My name is Tobias Eaton. I transferred from abnegation three years ago. That's why I am familiar." Tobias answers, which shocks me, I didn't expect him to answer.

"Oh yes Marcus is your father." Mom says and both Tobias and myself flinch at his name.

"What is it? You both flinched at his name?" My mom asks, dang it I was hoping she wouldn't catch that.

I look to Tobias and he sighs, looking to the ground, then back up at my mother.

"Well, you know the rumor Erudite put out about him abusing me, yeah well it's true." Tobias explains, and my mom looks shocked.

"Really? Why didn't you report it?" She asks, and Tobias and I both sigh.

"I didn't report it because, no one would have believed me." Tobias answers and I grab his hand, knowing he needs the support right now.

"Do you have scars?" She asks, I have never seen her act curious, especially around people she doesn't truly know.

"Yes, but they are covered with a tattoo. I will show you them though if you wish. But like I said you can't tell anyone about this, and please don't talk to Marcus." Tobias says and my mom nods.

"Toby, are you sure about this?" I say putting my hand on his shoulder. Not wanting him to do something he is uncomfortable with.

"Trissy, this is your mom, and I want her to know I trust her and you trust her." Tobias explains giving me a reassuring look.

Tobias turns to where his back is facing my mom and pulls his shirt up, I immediately admire his tattoos that I love so much. My favorites are the flames that wrap around his sides, I love to trace them while we are lying in bed.

I hear my mom gasp, I glance to my mom, and she has her hand over her mouth.

Tobias lowers his shirt and turns back around, sitting down beside me once again.

"That is horrible Four, I am so sorry and I swear I won't say a thing. You are very lucky Tris, to have such a fine young man, and I want you both to know that I trust you." Mom says, and we nod and she gets up and hugs us both.

"I have to leave now, and you two probably need to go back down and talk to the rest of the initiates parents so goodbye." My mom says then she leaves our apartment.

I look to Tobias, who shrugs and gets up grabbing my hand.

He wraps his arm around my waist and kisses me. I pull back after a while and smile.

"I can't believe she didn't ask about your arm." I state, looking down at his sling.

"Yeah I know." He answers, then laughs and grabs my hand and pulls me back down to the pit.

When we get down to the pit, Dustin sees us and waves us over.

"Hey guys, this is my mom Susie, my dad Thomas, my younger sister Ava and my younger brother Evan they are twins by the way. Guys this is Four and that is Six, they are my instructors." Dustin says pointing to each person.

"Its nice to meet you. May I ask why your names are numbers?" Susie asks, her voice kind.

"They are nicknames." Four, answers simply not giving her anymore information.

She nods, understanding she won't get anything else out of that.

"Your son is doing very well. He got fourth during stage one, he is also very respectful." I say and Four smiles and nods. Wrapping an arm around my waist.

"Ah I see you two are together." Thomas says, as if he just figured out a math equation.

"Yes we are, we try not to show it to often during initiation." Four relies simply, looking down at me.

"Yeah, the only reason we found out was because this initiate named James cornered Six and made out with her when Four wasn't there, and Four walked in and then beat the crap out of him. We had no idea they were dating until then, because as Four punched James in the face he yelled I said get of my damn girlfriend. We were all shocked." Dustin explains and he smiles the whole time, as if it was the coolest thing ever.

"You are truly dauntless Dustin." I state smiling a bit, though it probably looked more like a smirk.

"Well we need to go talk to some other family's, it was nice meeting you." Four says, before going to lead me away.

"Wait!" Ava exclaims.

I look down to her and say, "Yes?"

"Why is Fours arm in a cast?" Evan asks instead of her.

"Well I was zip lining and I broke it when I dropped out of the harness, and landed on it wrong." Four answers, his voice kind to the small child.

"I have read about zip lining, it is very dangerous and only dauntless do it 'cause they are brave." Ava says smiling.

"I actually went zip lining it was so much fun. I didn't see you there Four." Dustin says, glancing at Four and I.

"We were both there actually, but since Four broke his arm we had to leave early, and there was like fifty of us there so no wonder you didn't see us." I answer smiling at Dustin.

Dustin nods in return and we turn and walk away.

We walk around the pit for the next hour talking to family members. Finally dinner comes around and all of the family's have to leave.

Four and I eat dinner before leaving and going to the apartment.

When I walk inside, I throw my shoes into the corner and fall onto our bed.

"I am exhausted." I breath and Tobias laughs.

"Me too." He replies. I hear him moving around and roll over so I can see him.

He takes off his shirt and is about to throw it down when I stop him.

"Wait give me your shirt." I say quickly, and he tosses it to me.

I walk into the bathroom and change into his shirt which serves as a good night gown. I walk back out and Tobias is laying down in the bed in pajama pants and no shirt, like always.

I smile lightly at him, and lay down next to him cuddling into his side.

He wraps his arms around me, pulling me closer as I lay my head on his chest, becoming comfortable.

He reaches over and turns off the lamp and then whispers, "I love you Trissy." Then gives me a light kiss on my forehead.

"I love you to Toby." I whisper, just before I am pulled into the oblivion of dreams.


okay so what did ya think? This was a really long chapter I hope it made up for me not posting for a couple of days:) Anyway any ideas or suggestions feel free to review or pm me and I will take them into consideration anyways please review :) I'm out peace ninjas :) ~M