Hello All!, I still need help with my next story, (see the bonus chapter)

So if you care to help please review!!!

Disclaimer: I don't own the Akatsuki

At school

Autumn ran into the music room panting, she didn't have a chance to eat breakfast,and she was still late.

"Thank you for finally deciding to join us Miss Autumn!" said the band director, "It's a pleasure to see you at rehersal for once!"

"I'm at rehersal!"

"Yes, symphonic rehersal, not jazz rehersal" Autumn sighed and took her place at the piano in the back.

School sucks, so let's skip 7 hours ahead
Autumn skated, through the tunnels heading west, she wasn't going home just yet. Along side her was her best friend May.

"Hey Autumn did you hear the news?" May asked. May looked a bit like Autumn, except she liked to wear her hair down, and it was really curly, and instead of brown, her hair was red. Also May's eyes, instead of brown, were a shocking blue.

"About what?" May gasped, how could she not know!?!

"The DANCE!!!"

"There's a dance coming up?"

"Well, duh! The Halloween Dance!"

"Oh, Halloween, I almost forgot about that."

"So are you going with anyone?" May was the type of person, who could get really worked up over one thing, and then... well you'll find out soon enough.

"Yeah,"

"OMG! Who?"

"The same people I always go with,"

"Who!?!"

"I'll tell you when you calm down,"

"I'M CALM NOW JUST TELL ME ALREADY!!!"

"...Okay,"

"Finally!"

"It's not that big of a deal,"

"Yes. It. Is." May glared at her with such intensity, Autumn couldn't see it, but she sure felt it, It was as bad as being sharingan glared at by Itachi.

"The Obsessionists,"

"No fair!"

"Why not? I thought you joined them last year?"

"No I met them last year!"

"... Oh well,"

"OH WELL!?! I'M GOING TO BE ALL ALONE!!!"

"No, you can go with... The group in the corner!" Autumn said thinking.

"Oh, heck no! I don't even know half those people!"

"... Yeah you do, The Group In The Corner, is where all of the Obsessionists started you know."

"SO?"

"Forget it." Autumn said as they surfaced from the tunnels on the other side of town.

"So are we still on for Sunday?"

"You know it!"

"Cool!" Autumn followed her friend inside, as they planned their trick or treat route

(If there's candy involved, you're never too old)

Autumn was taking the tunnels home, the way she was going was covered with rocks and other obsticles, she she couldn't skate, she walked instead. Autumn hummed to herself as she walked. It was a good thing she got her iPod this morning, or else she would have been bored.

"Hey Fall!"

"EEEEEP!" Autumn fell over and looked up, in the dark she could make out the face of... Daniel! Autumn watched as he laughed,until someone behind him smacked him over the head.

"Mandy!"

"Don't forget me!" a smaller voice said. Autumn looked past Mandy to see... Lyn!

"What are you guys doing here?" Autumn asked standing up and dusting off her clothes.

"We were on our way back from the library, until Daniel here spotted you... And how did he do that in the dark anyway?" Lyn explained. Turning to glare at Daniel at the end.

"I'm awesome like that," he said, he smile clearly visable in the dark.

"Well I'm honored that you would care!" Autumn said performing a mock-bow. "So, we're still going to the dance together, right?"

"Sure!"

"Of course!"

"Yeah!"

"Thanks guys!" The Obsessionists smiled and left. (If you haven't fiured it out yet, there you go)

Autumn looked at her watch for about a full minute before she remembered that she couldn't see in the dark, and pressed a button making in light up, so she could see it. 16:38 (4:38) her watch said, autumn double checked her watch before she started to panic. She had completely forgotten about the akatsuki! (Is that a good thing or a bad thing?) Autumn got over her moment of panic as soon as she remembered Sasori. Instead she just continued on her way, thinking about stopping for ice cream just to waste time.

After Autumn finally decides to go home... 4:52
Autumn scanned the perimeter before she dared to approach her house, she wasn't sure what was going to happen when she stepped through that door, but she was certain it wasn't going to be good. Autumn first stepped into the garage, and put away her skateboard, for the first time in months, and slowly walked toward the front door. Right before she even reached the doorknob Kisame opened the door, picked her up and threw her inside.

"Ouch..." Autumn muttered as she landed face first in her living room.

"You're late." Pein stated looking up from what he was previously doing, which was talking to the rest of the akatsuki. Apparently he was having a meeting.

"I was busy," She said, taking her some how not smashed ice cream bar out of her pocket, and biting into it.

"Doing what?"

"Stuff, seriously what are you my mother?" Pein glared at her motioned for Sasori to stand.

"As I mentioned this morning, this is Sasori,"

"Great, tell me something I don't know,"

"You should respect your elders, shoujo," Sasori said also glaring at her. Autumn's eyes scanned Sasori up and down, he wasn't inside his puppet, he was just wearing standard shinobi pants, and his akatsuki cloak. Autumn rolled her eyes,

"In technical terms, you're all about 2 years old, since the anime first premired in 2005, and it's curently 2007, 2 vs 12. I win, By the way, the next person to call me 'little girl' in any language, is going to get a bullet to the brain!" Autumn smirked triumphantly, until Deidara came and smacked her on the back of her head.

"Shut up, un,"

"My house, my rules,"

"Yeah, but we already broke those rules, un, remember?" Autumn thought about this for a second, before she spoke,

"Right, about that... I hate you all." Deidara shrugged and walked away.

"It's come to my attention that we've been too lenient on you, and your training." Pein stated all attention refocusing on him.

"What? No!"

"And because, my evaluation, is over we can focus on your actual training," Pein said. Deidara, Tobi, Kasame, and Hidan snickered. A strong sense of dread spread over Autumn as she realized for the first time that she was in a room full of S-class criminals, these people could actually kill her.

And, I wrote more, but the stupid thing logged me out before I could save. not fun. So this is it for now, I've been updating like crazy, so, Review Please!