Title: Come Undone
Author: desolate butterfly
Genre:
drabble, smut
Pairing: SasuNaru
Rating: R
Summary:
Sasuke likes to hear Naruto come, but Naruto isn't exactly obliging.
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Despite being a loudmouth nearly everywhere else, Naruto is surprisingly quiet in bed.
If left unprompted, Naruto would come with little more than a shuddered sigh and a few restless whimpers to show it. Sasuke prompts him though, because he needs it—needs to hear that he's doing things right, that he's not messing stuff up. Sasuke needs the validation of Naruto's voice just as much as he needs the thighs grasping around his hips and the hands twisting through his hair.
So Sasuke will ask—will command Naruto to speak, his mouth poised above Naruto's lips to catch and taste the words he wants to hear.
"Say it," he'll whisper, biting down viciously on Naruto's bottom lip, drawing blood. "Say it."
The results aren't as extreme as Sasuke might want. Naruto won't scream, refuses to. But he'll stutter out the syllables of Sasuke's name inside of a broken moan, or mutter 'Ah God' into Sasuke's hair before releasing with a muted hum of contentment.
One time Sasuke managed to startle an exclamation of 'fuck!' from Naruto's lips with a strategic tilt of the hips at just the right moment and some nails raking up the other boy's back, but it hasn't happened since.
Sasuke keeps trying though.
He figures there are worse things he could strive for.
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fin.
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