Hilo! I'm so sorry it's been so long again, but luckily, school is starting on Wednesday ( & ) and I'll be back in my normal routine so I'll be posting regularly again. I'm not 100% certain on which days I'll be posting but I think it might be something like Mondays and Wednesdays or maybe Mondays and Thursdays.
Also thank you to the following for the lovely reviews from chapter 12 (the last chapter);
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Sorry if I've missed anyone out, and thanks to everyone else who has reviewed in earlier chapters
Oh and there may just be a slight bit of swearing in this chapter and possibly future chapters.
Anyway on with the story,
Chapter 13:
What thE HELL IS GOING ON!
"Dan?! DAN!" Keri yelled at Dan who seemed to be in some sort of shocked trance.
The truth is Dan had been staring in shock unfocused on the real world and desperately trying to recalect what his dad might've taught him about cars and weaponry and engines and stuff before he left his mum for a younger, more attractive, face.
"Oh right, Keri, what?" Dan asked trying to keep his cool on. Which Keri wasn't, just to be clear on that. Keri just stared at him like he was missing the point that there was a BOMB IN THE CAR- THAT THEY ALSO HAPPEN TO BE IN!
"Are you taking the piss? What thE HELL IS GOING ON?!" Keri shouted trying to get into Dans head that there was an actual real-life bomb.
"Keri, it's ok. Before you come back at me with a sneaky comment listen, for just two minutes." Dan said trying to stay calm, which Keri was generally surprised about, so was Dan to be honest he'd usually be the one shouting loudest.
"But that's the thing Dan," Keri started, shaking slightly, with a worried tone, which is quite unusual for Keri. "We don't even have two minutes." She points at the radio/bomb/clock/countdown...
1 mins 30 secs till destruction.
"Oh my god." Dan whispers shocked. "ok, Keri I think it's going to be ok, my dad was an engineer then after he quit that he worked at this place selling cars and stuff," he pauses as he fiddles a little with the car lock.
"Dan, what's your point?" Keri asks calmer, but a bit impatiently.
"The point is, my dad wanted me to be just like him, he taught me all sorts like how to hotwire cars and whatever."
Keri looked hopeful now. Dan couldn't help but notice how her eyes literally lit up with hope. It was kinda cute.
Oh my god Dan, how can you be thinking about that in a time like this, seriously?!
"Any luck?" Keri asks hopefully.
"Yeah, yeah, I think so! It looks like the lock on this side of the car is just jammed, not completely locked!" Dan says enthusiastically.
"Really! Have you got it, is it open?" she asks so determinedly like there is actually a way that they might get out! Because Keri is just no good with cars, as her foster dad kindly reminds her sometimes.
"Got it!" Dan yells, so happily. He scurries out as fast as he can, offering his hand out to Keri.
But it's too late now.
All they hear is an automated voice countdown from 3, Keris scream and several, minor bangs, from several minor explosions.
Omg did I just go there? Oh I did! But don't worry I'm not that evil that id kill Keri off, I mean seriously, who'd even think about killing off Keri, one of the most likeable characters (in my opinion) don't worry m not as bad as that. Or am I?
Just messing with you!
Or am I?
Just so you know l'll be posting the next chapter sometime tomorrow
