Hello everyone! I decided to EDIT my fic mainly because I want it to be more presentable. My 2 first chapters are very short & so I combined them. The chapters will also decrease by 1. It's not much of a change. I don't want to make too many changes for my fic. The only thing I'm regretting is that I manage to erase all 50 reviews I got from you guys. Oh well, we can do nothing about it now. As long as you guys are reading my fic & liking it, I'm satisfied.
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(All Things Well)
Also, I have made another fiction. It's an RK fanfiction that mainly focuses on Kaoru. It's already complete with only 4 chapters. Yup, it's very short. I was actually planning on making it as ONE-SHOT only. But it got so long that I decided to divide it in chapters. I just made it not a while ago. The moment I finished typing it, I already uploaded them. But as you may know, takes a day to be updated. ( Oh & yeah, here is the site:
http : www. fanfiction. net /s/ 2150379 /1/ (Endless Sorrow) --- you'll know why I used that title. It's explained in the last chapter.
Let me guys warn you that it's very different from this fic which is light-hearted. I was planning on making Kenshin suffer but I felt sorry for him so it's kinda a happy ending. "kinda"
Thanks! Sorry for the trouble!
Chapter 9
A Visit To The Spirit World
CLASS 1-B
"… & so the tennyo got back her robe & fly to the heavens, her home, leaving her husband & children behind." Tanaka-san lectured.
RRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGG!
"Ok class, make sure you finish your homework when you come here tomorrow." The students stand up, thank him & bowed. After he left, the students began to disperse away.
(Eri, Yumi, & Kagome are in the same classroom, while Hojo is with Yusuke & Kuwabara. Hehehehe… How unlucky of him! )
"Wow that's a relief! Boy this school is really something else! Can't imagine that they'll give us homework on our first day." Eri exclaimed.
"Yeah! I better start doing it once I got back home." Kagome stated.
"You know Kagome-chan, you're a bright girl. If not for your absences & strange sickness, I think you'd have graduated with honors." Yumi said.
Kagome sweat-dropped but decided to keep quiet. As soon as they reached the school gate, she apologized to her friends that she'll be staying at school for a while. Her reasons, she's going to meet someone she knew that needed her help, which is the truth. Hojo was more than willing & very persistent to stay with her. She was grateful that her 2 best friends dragged him away & bid farewell without asking too much questions.
AT THE SCHOOL GATE
After her friends left, she pick up her cellphone from her bag & called her mother.
"Moshi moshi, mom? (pause) Yes, I'm fine. Anou, I'll be home late. I need to visit some place first. (pause) Yes, it's safe mom. Daijoubu. I'll be home by 7, I think. (pause) Hai! I'll be careful. (pause) Ok, I love you too. Ja! (click)"
While Kagome's waiting for Botan to come, she pondered what Yumi had said to her earlier.
It wasn't her fault that her life is a mess right now. At such a young age of 15, she was already given a duty that can likely, more or less, kill her. Not to mention, she's going to train & become a spirit detective. Boy! She's in so much stress right now, she could practically age faster than normal people. Being in Sengoku Jidai era & being with InuYasha & her friends have matured her. She learned new things & had the chance to meet different people, but most of all, she learned the oh-so-bittersweet first love & the pain of betrayal.
Not only she had to deal with InuYasha, she also had to deal with school. Ojii-san's excuses for her were not really helping. It only made her weirder. She also hated lying to her friends. How much she wanted to tell them the whole truth. But she can't for she knows that'll only make things more complicated.
Once again, strings of fate entangled her, to protect not only the past, but also the present time. Once in while, she can't help but wish that she's just a normal teenager just like what she was before. But of course, like the old saying goes "With great powers, comes great responsibilities." (Hey that's a quote from Spiderman! I think.)
Not long after, Botan came along with Yusuke, Kuwabara, & Kurama. (No Hiei yet! ) Kagome smiled & waved at them. Botan waved back. They all smiled back at her except for Yusuke who gave her a smirk. Kagome also returned the smirked. Apparently, Koenma called for them as well for another mission.
"So, shall we go?" Botan asked Kagome. "You can ride with me, it'll be much faster." Botan offered. "But what about them?" Kagome asked looking at thethree guys. "Don't worry about us. We can ran very fast to keep with you two." Kurama replied. "Let's just get going." Yusuke said sounding bored.
Kagome nodded & took off with Botan. She closed her eyes because she's not used to riding on a broomstick. It was very different from InuYasha's back. "Relax." Botan said calming her. Kagome could only nod &kept her eyes shot.
OLD BUILDING IN THE OUTSKIRTS OF TOWN
"Why are we here?" Kagome asked as they landed to the ground.
"There's a portal here that connects to the spirit world." Kuwabara explained.
"Oh."
The inside of the abandoned building was a bit dark. They walked silently & suddenly stopped. Kagome looked at the floor & saw a door that might be leading to the underground.
"We're going through here? Jeez Botan! You never ceased to amaze with me with your secret portals." Yusuke said sarcastically.
"Why thank you, Yusuke." Botan innocently replied.
"I'm going in first." Kuwabara said. Yusuke follows, then Botan. Kurama hold out his hand to Kagome & smiled, "It's ok." Kagome smiled back & took his hand. They both went in at the same time.
REIKAI TANTEI
They all walked in at Koenma's Office, Kagome & Kurama coming in last.
"Koenma-sama, they're here." Botan informed him.
The man behind the chair turned around & faced them. Kagome gasped.
"What's new, toddler?" Yusuke teased.
"Nice to see you too!" Koenma replied sarcastically. He looked towards Kagome. "Ah you must be Kagome. Welcome!" He greeted & then asked, "What's wrong?"
"Kawaii!!" Kagome exclaimed. "Eh?" They all said in unison. Kagome suddenly walk up to him, hugged him & holding him in her arms. "Aww… look how cute you are!" She exclaimed. All of them sweat-dropped. Botan paled. Koenma blushed. Yusuke fell down anime-style. Kuwabara & Kurama tried to hold their laughter. "What's your name little one?" She asked him sweetly.
"My name's Koenma." He replied shyly, still blushing. Kagome's jaw dropped, completely in utter shock. Suddenly, Kuwabara burst out laughing along with Yusuke. Kurama followed. She glanced at them, Botan nodded at her.
"You're Koenma-sama?! But-but you're just a child. No more than 5 years old. How can that be?" Kagome said disbelievingly.
Koenma cleared his throat. Poof! He transformed into a teenager still with a pacifier in his mouth. "This is my true form." He admitted. Kagome blinked at him in astonishment.
Kuwabara suddenly cough getting their attention. They both look at him & found themselves being stared at by them. Kagome & Koenma both looked at each other. Then realization hit them. She was still hugging him! They pulled away, both of them blushing furiously & obviously embarrassed. "Gomen." They both blurted out the same time. Kuwabara & Yusuke burst out laughing once again. Botan joined them as she giggled. They both shot them a glare. Surprisingly, Kurama's not laughing with them but frowning. Botan seemed to notice it. Apparently, she was not the only one who noticed.
Koenma cleared his throat again & their laughing subsided. Kagome who's still blushing bowed at Koenma. "I'm so sorry, Koenma-sama. I didn't know it was you. I'm sorry for being disrespectful."
"Iie, Kagome-san. It's all right. I assure you." Koenma smiled. Kagome looked up & let out a sigh of relief. Kagome smiled as well.
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Gosh! I know that writing a story is hard but not like this. It drains you mentally. I'm running out of ideas, but at the same time, I have so many ideas that I don't know how to put them in the story. It's so frustrating! Argh… I've been thinking of sharing my fic with someone. But I don't like the story being changed. I want it to go exactly as I want to. Or else, my plan will get ruined. Once school starts, I won't be able to update it. At least not that often.
Poll Results:
KuramaxKagome 15votes
HieixKagome 10votes
SesshoumaruxKagome 0votes
KougaxKagome 0votes
InuYashaxKagome 0votes
KoenmaxKagome 0votes (Ok, it just hit me when I wrote this chapter. Heck, why not include him. He's handsome, after all. In adult form, of course. )
YusukexKagome 0votes --- don't know why, but I kinda like the pairing. Since in this fic Yusuke doesn't like Kagome, yet. Actually, Yusuke's not that bad for a boyfriend. Maybe if you can get to his touchy side, he can be romantic. Hehehehehe… Forget I said that.
If you ask me if I can vote, whom will I vote? One for Kurama, InuYasha, Koenma, & Yusuke.
---- Boy, some people do like to see Kagome paired up with Hiei!
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Replies to Reviews:
To Hiei and Amiboshi's Lttle Babe:
Arigatou!
To chidorijen:
Thanks for the compliment! Please do come back when you have time to read my fic.
To DemonLady1:
Nice to hear from you again! Thanks for the idea. I'll try to make it like you said, ok?
To small fry, karo, & Keala-Chick:
Thanks for voting!
To nyczbabigrl:
Thanks for voting! I'll try to update soon. I'm still thinking how Hiei & Kagome should meet.
To Katzztar:
Yeah I agree with you. Kagome's arrow can purify a demon with one shot.
To SRDraygoon:
Thanks for the compliment!
To Fire Kitsune Goddess:
It's ok. No harm done! Also thanks for voting & reading my fic!
To arrow-card:
Hai! I'll try to update soon! Thanks!
To aznfangurl16:
It's ok. I'm glad you're back!
To k:
I'll try…
To Dream Catcher/Priestess:
Ehehehehe… Thanks! I'll do what I can…
To .:
I'll make sure there's a love triangle. But you see, the poll vote is for the one whom Kagome will end up with in the end.