Hello readers! Here's the same chapter 13…however following some reviews I decided to improve on it and make it more gripping and exciting (I hope!) obv. This is because I wish to improve my writing and make it more interesting for the readers! Please keep reviewing! Constructive criticism is v. imp for the writer! Thank you so much for your help Fortiques! It has the same gist however it is different so pls read!

Chapter 13:

Their perfect moment had to be ruined just as they were parting. Elsa's phone vibrated in her clutch and she darted off from next to Jack in a second leaving a bewildered Jack wondering what he had done wrong. He watched intently as Elsa fished out her phone frantically, unlocked it and read the text which appeared on the screen.

"Elsa I'm in deep trouble. At the 'Playground'" the text read.

"Elsa, what's up?" Jack inquired, scanning Elsa's troubled expression. She dumped her phone in his hand as worry took over her. "It's Anna," she whispered, cradling her head. Jack skimmed through the text and grabbed Elsa's hand and with the other phoned a cab. In five minutes the cab arrived, Jack got in with Elsa and asked the driver to take them to the 'playground,' a club located in the outskirts of the city they lived in and not far off from their location.

They arrived soon enough, Elsa did not wait to jump out of the taxi. Jack followed Elsa as she raced inside the club, shoving her ID straight into the bouncer's face.

The club was dark and musty with neon lights flaring around the dance floor. Whilst running across the club, trying desperately to slither through clusters of people, Elsa barged into a burly guy she didn't recognize. "Hey girl, you lost?" he grinned, grabbing Elsa's arm. Elsa wrinkled her nose, the guy she recognized as Phil one of Hans' close friends gripped her arm tightly and pulled her towards him.

"Leave me alone, where's Hans?" she spat.

"Oh, feisty!" he laughed. He tried to get Elsa to lean towards him. She quickly grabbed the glass of vodka swinging in his hand and dumped it in his face. Stunned, Phil started to shout however his protests where soon drowned by the commotion which was rising in the central part of the dance floor. Jack was still stuck in the crowds and arrived just in time to find a very angered Elsa shoving a glass of vodka in Phil's face. As the vodka dripped from Phil's beard, Phil roared at Elsa. "You'll pay freak!" he screeched and he tried to punch Elsa, however Jack stepped right in front of Elsa and blocked Phil's punch with his own arm. Jack silently thanked for his guardian Karate lessons. He pulled a stunned Elsa across the club towards the central area, where he had seen Hiccup waving to him.

"Don't touch me!" Elsa and Jack heard Anna shriek. "I don't care Hans. We're done." She screamed.

Elsa watched open-mouthed and Jack dragged her towards her sister. "She's ok," he whispered. "We've arrived in time." Elsa and Jack were soon surrounded with their friends, Punzie, Flynn, Hiccup and Merida. "What shall we do?" Elsa asked, worriedly, glancing at her sister who was challenging Hans who was busy clutching onto another girl, possibly Jasmine. He had his arm wrapped around Jasmine and she was clutching tightly to Hans, her head resting on his shoulder. Suddenly Hans abandoned Jasmine and moved towards Anna.

"Dear…you aren't worth it, you don't know what fun means!" he said, cocking his face left, giving Anna a pitying glance. Suddenly he grabbed Anna. Anna screamed and started to kick and struggle against Hans' muscular body. Suddenly her high heeled foot managed to kick Hans in the shin.

"Bastard," he spat as he felt pain rising across his shin. He dropped Anna instantly and with rage he pushed her off the ledge of the dance floor and she came crashing into the arms of Kristoff, a quiet guy from her year, not usually seen at parties of this kind.

Elsa together with the rest rushed towards Anna who was regaining her balance thanks to Kristoff, who was tenderly helping Anna. As soon as Anna saw her sister approaching, she rushed to embrace her. "Elsa, you came!" she cried. "Hans…he cheated on me! You were right!" she whimpered, still in shock.

Hans noticed the sister reunion and decided to spoil it.

"Well Anna, you weren't pleasing me enough! What could I do! I have standards to maintain!"

He approached Anna, with his army and the crowd gathered to watch the growing fight. Hans was about to slap Anna on the face, however Elsa quickly shielded her sister and Hans' palm collided with her cheek. Elsa grimaced as the pain tingled across her pale skin. Elsa fought back the desire to scream in order to look brave.

"Elsa!" Jack and Anna shrieked in unison. Jack felt anger in the form of a lump rising in his throat. He clenched his fists and rushed towards Hans and pushed him off balance.

"Leave Elsa alone!" he yelled. Hans' friends managed to pull him up with difficulty. The furies with Vanessa and Jasmine leading them walked towards Hans and his friends. They stuck together sniggering at Elsa and her friends.

"Ooh, we meet again Prince Charming!" Belle laughed and her friends continued to snigger. Jack was still shielding Elsa. He felt Elsa press herself against him. Jack felt full of responsibility to protect his girl. As he felt anger bubbling inside him, he felt frost spread across his hands. He clenched his fists tighter and he felt the tiny crystals of ice in his hands diminish. Elsa clutched Jack tighter as she felt Jack tense. Suddenly Elsa turned around and noticed that Hiccup and Flynn were struggling against three guys from Hans' set of bodyguards who grabbed them from behind. Merida and Punzie as well as Anna where screaming, trying to seek attention from the bouncers, who didn't care what was going on in the club.

"Didn't you dye your hair yet?" (See chapter 9, Jack's story. PS: Jack knew Hans) he laughed. Jack looked at Hans open mouthed. It was the same Hans…from his childhood. In his realization his eyes widened and shock gripped him. Suddenly in his shock he didn't notice Hans charging at him like an angered bull. Jack was in a trance and suddenly Jack felt pain erupt in his stomach as he received a blow from Hans and was knocked backwards. Elsa screamed as Jack fell back in pain and Elsa tried to keep Jack standing.

"Jack," Elsa whispered, tears gently cascading down her cheeks. "Are you ok?" Jack nodded slightly and Elsa felt the lump in her throat increase in size. She detested Hans. He was going to pay for injuring her…boyfriend. Yes, Elsa thought proudly, Jack meant a lot to her. She wasn't going to let a brat like Hans win.

She was suddenly grabbed by Anna, Punzie and Merida. "We have to leave!" Anna shrieked pulling her sister.

"No Anna, I can't leave Jack alone!" Elsa shouted, trying to untangle herself from the trios' arms. However with the help of Kristoff they managed to drag Elsa away from the fight. "No!" Elsa kept shrieking. Her shrieking intensified as she heard Jack groan in pain.

Hans had managed to grab Jack from the collar of his dress shirt and he tore off his blazer. Together with his team, who handcuffed Jack and held Jack in place, he managed to punch Jack in the face several times, so much until blood started to seep from his mouth. Elsa couldn't take it anymore. She felt a rush of adrenaline awaken her senses. She pushed away from Kristoff, closed her eyes and concentrated on forming icicles to scare Hans and his pack. She felt the familiar tingling of ice energy course through her veins and across the ground. Icicles started forming, one after the other. The icicles started forming towards Hans. They also started increasing in length and become more jagged. Hans and his pathetic friends, upon seeing this sudden phenomena let go of Jack. Jack was in so much pain, he could barely move. Elsa ran towards Jack and together with Hiccup and Flynn, she managed to carry him out to safety.

Punzie had already phoned two taxis. They entered the taxis, Elsa clinging onto Jack. Elsa didn't have time to bid Merida, Flynn, Hiccup and Punzie a goodbye. They were frantic to leave the club. Elsa cradled Jack in her arms, with Anna on the front seat directing the driver to their house. When they arrived, Anna quickly paid the driver and helped her sister carry Jack out of the car.

"I'm fine!" Jack groaned suddenly.

"You are so not!" Elsa replied, worry evident on her face. Together Elsa and Anna dragged Jack up the staircase and into Elsa's room. They propped him up on Elsa's bed and Anna rushed to get an ice pack from downstairs. Elsa however had already formed ice to place on Jack's jaw. Anna was up in seconds with the ice pack in hand. She didn't notice Elsa had already solved the matter. Elsa accepted it and placed it on Jack's face instead of the ice cube which she thawed immediately.

"Anna, thanks…you'd better get some sleep." Elsa said, hoping her sister wouldn't protest.

Anna noticed her sister needed privacy so she nodded, hugged her sister and left, closing the door gently behind her.

"Thanks," Jack muttered. "But I'm fine Elsa!" He groaned trying to pull himself up, however Elsa was quick to push him back down.

"Stay put!" she scolded. Jack groaned and slumped down back on Elsa's bed. "I'm sorry," he whispered.

"For what?" Elsa said, gently pushing Jack's white hair from his face.

"I didn't protect you," he began but Elsa shushed him.

"You did Jack," she smiled and she gently leaned towards him and gently kissed his cheek. Jack smiled back at her, his eyes still closed. She sat down next to him for a while until he had seemed to have settled in a deep sleep. She got up and stole across her room and settled on her armchair. She closed her eyes and she soon fell into a troubled slumber.

I hope you enjoyed it more than the last chapter! Thanks for everyone who gave their valuable suggestions! Hope this is better! Please review and tell me what you think! i.e. if it's better or worse :) thanks sooo much

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