The next morning I woke up smiling remembering everything from last night. Four wait no, Tobias asked me to be his girl friend. I get up and take a shower and come out wearing sweats and a t-shirt and almost get tackled by Christina " oh my gosh Tris ,You're not wearing that to the picnic !"

" what picnic ? "

" tell me you did not forget "

" I did "

" Go change, NOW ! "

" I'm going, I'm going sheesh ! "

I quickly hurry into the bathroom before Christina yells at me again. I come out wearing black jeans and a white top and black converse. Christina takes a look at from head to toe then gasps when she sees my shoes. " you are not wearing those "

" yes, I am ! Don't expect me to wear heels to a picnic "

She walks away mumbling to herself and comes out in a black sequin top dark blue skinny jeans and high heeled boots. She sets me down and straightens my hair and brushes it leaving it down.

Christina and I head to Shauna and Marlene's room then we head out to the parking lot and see the boys are already there. Christina, Will, Marlene, Uriah, Zeke, and Shauna all go in Zeke's car leaving me and Tobias alone. Before I get into Tobias's car I see Christina wink at me. I get into the car and my hand immediately finds Tobias's.
" How's your day so far Trissy "

" wonderful "

He smiled in return and leaned over to give me a quick kiss leaving me to blush a little.

" you know you look really cute when you blush " he says

" I'm not blushing "

" whatever you say Trissy "

Tobais POV

Seeing the effect I had on Tris made me feel happy. I was proud to call her my girlfriend but I know Raquel will do something bad when she finds out about me and Tris. I decide to push the thought away not thinking about it. I remember the concours are coming up soon and I have to start getting ready for it. Marcus will be there, I'm going to try not to show my hatred towards that beast.

" Tris you know the concours are coming up soon "

" I know, but I doubt I'll make into it "

" actually, I got the list yesterday of all other ten students who are going to be in it. You'll be surprised who all made it "

" really ! Who made it I already know that you made it so who are the other 10 kids "

" I can't tell you yet " I say with a smirk appearing on my face. Tris does a fake pout andt gives up after she realizes I won't tell her. As we reach the lake I park the car and get out and lace my fingers with Tris's . We go up to the spot and see everyone is already there sitting on the blanket started to take the food out.

" about time . Looks like someone had a little fun " Uriah says in a playful tone. I narrow my eyes at him and hear Tris say " shutup Uri "

After we're all done eating Shauna and Zeke go to take a walk, Uriah and Marlene are getting the stuff to play paintball later, I take Tris with me for a walk by the lake leaving Christina and Will alone.

I can't help but look at Tris she's really beautiful. She catches me looking at her and says
" what "

" nothing, just looking at how beautiful you are " she blushes and looks away. I stop and take her in my arms and kiss her. She kisses me back immediately. She pulls away gasping for air I smile and take her hand again.

" so Tris do you like me ? "

" hmm... Not really " she says with a smile

" why not ? " I ask faking a pout

" wee for starters your cocky, arrogant, a jerk- "
She stops mid sentence when I carry her bridal style and walk over toward the lake.

" what are you doing Tobias "

" nothing "

I continue walking on the bridge and say with a smile " take all that back "

" never "

" fine then your choice, I'm giving you one more chance "

" no, what are you gonna do throw me in the lake " she says laughing

" probably " I says while letting her hover over the railing

" TOBIAS EATON I SWEAR IF I FALL YOU WILL- "

Once again she stopped mid sentence because I let go over and let her fall. She came up gasping for air and said " Tobias...I ...can't swim...help...me ! "
Crap. I throw off my shirt and dive in after her. I swim towards her and put my arms around us and swim back out. When I lay her down on the sand she bursts out laughing.
" Tobias - you should've - seen - your face " she says in between laughs.

" Tris you scared the hell out of me "

" I told you not to let me fall " she says with a grin

" I hate you Tris " I say smiling

" I love you Tobias " she says smiling and gets up to kiss me. I kiss her back passionately. When she pulls back I whisper into her ear " I love you Tris " I say and kiss her again.

well I updated and I have ideas, some are mine and some of them are y'all's And I will give you credit if you guys have any more ideas feel free to tell me ! Sorry for the sucky chapter I have to go somewhere soon and I decided that you guys deserved a chapter. Oh also if your wondering what concours are it's a music competition I got the idea for a concour from one of my favorite anime La Corda D'oro .Until next time ~ Lovedream999

And please for Tris and the concours R&R