Ok, I'm starting to think the person who wrote this was spelling it so badly on PURPOSE, it's just so bad I can't even comprehend how a human being can spell so badly! I'm not trying to be mean, but I'm being truthful. By the way sorry this took so long, I was moving and I couldn't update.
"Omigish what happnd! (You ded) shrekd StarPaw. She looked arung. "am I in Starclan?" (No, your in Amsterdam) she eskes when she say the cats that she new. (What)
"No of cours not your in the Daek Forest!" (Yes!) gagged a gray he-cat. StarGlame locked around windly for TiggerStar but she culd;nt sea him. "Yes your in SatrCaln! (Crap) said the she-ca. It was YellowFang. "Wher else wood you be?" (Amsterdam! Duh!)
"Yuo dont need to be so red! (She's not the one who's embarrassed!) said StarGlame she was mad." (Kewl)
sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made." (Can you repeat that in English please?)
"its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the sark forest so...HOW DID I DYE? (Easy, when you died your blood spurted everywhere, essentially dying the grass red!)
"TigerStra killed you" (Go Tigerstar! You killed a Mary Sue!) said BlueeStar cumin over to her. "he can send cats to starcaln even from the drk Foret" (So?)
"Wait so then I'm died?" (Yes you are died) StarGlame. "What do i do no? I cant safve the frost like this!" (only mother nature can save the frost, by making Winter last a little longer.)
"That why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" (What! No! No! No! Nuh uh! I said no!) saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell you first." (Like "Just kidding you're actually dead forever"?)
"Omg what is it" lauged StarPaw she stinted to jump up and down with joe." (Who the hell is Joe?) "I wnat to knew" (Me too, seriously who's Joe?)
"wel their are ten thigs we ned to give you before you goe" said LeafPool and she gave StarGlame 2 rocks with writting on them. "their the ten commons!" (Stop! Stop right there, you are under arrest for putting the power of the world into the hands-er, paws! Of Starpaw! The idiotic Mary Sue who doesn't know how to English!)
"OMG THE TEN COMMONDENTS" squelled StarGleam and she was so exited. "I GET TO HAVE TEN COMMNDMENTS?" (They just gave them to you, yes! You can have them! Although i am quite against this idea!)
"Ya" said BleuStar "we need to give them to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we nedd you to do it four us!" (A pathetic last resort)
"Okay" said StarGlame and she left Starclan talking the rocks with (Then everyone died. The End!)
Hiya! Bya!