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The second student

Dende's Lookout

Mako and Piccolo were standing before each other preparing to spar as part of Mako's training, they were in an empty space within the Lookout Piccolo had taken off his training weight turban and cape wearing his usual purple Gi, and as for Mako's attire her clothes would get torn during training so Piccolo made her a Gi similar to his own like what he made for Gohan before the Cell games, though it was sized differently like how his is now and since she was a teenager, he added the white collar like Nail or Gohan had when they were training.

Even though it had only a little over a month since Mako had started training with him, Piccolo was a bit on the fence on training her at first, her attitude toward Dende and the fact that she practically threatened to kill Dende and launched boulders up at their home he didn't seem to despise her, however there were still things unknown about her.

Mako had managed to improve her abilities since she started training with Piccolo, though he hadn't taught her any of his techniques yet and she didn't have any specific of her own she had managed to increase her physical power and her ability to use Ki thanks to Mr. Popo as well as himself, but she seemed to be able to use her power in large bursts of unnecessary power which is why she couldn't fly properly on her own, but to think she was able to use it to such an extent until now was surprising. As Mako stretched Piccolo looked at her and spoke about their lesson.

"Mako, today we'll be working on your awarness in battle, keeping your senses open in battle, seeing with your abiility to sense rather than just using your eyes or ears." said Piccolo. Moka then finished her stretching and nodded.

"Yes Master Piccolo." said Mako. Piccolo was a bit aprehensive about being called master, but he thought about the fact he had already trained Gohan when he was a child.

"Okay, lets begin," he sighed' its been a while since I've done this." said Piccolo. Mako was confused by what he had said until Piccolo began to power up,

"Prepare yourself" he said as he focused his power throughout his body in one moment and in the next he split into 5 seperate Piccolos. Mako was completely taken aback by what she had seen, her mind did its best to break down what kind of technique this was; could she learn this ability, could only Piccolo do it, did he create it and more swirled in her mind.

"That's fucking amazing, how did you do that?!" yelled Mako in excitement. Piccolo shook his head.

"You won't learn any of my techniuqes yet, wer areworking on your ability to manuver and sense multiple opponents," Piccolo gestures at his copies," these will overwhelm you with a storm of attacks, do your best to avoid or guard our attacks and counter." said Piccolo. Mako nodded.

"Got it, I can do this." said Mako with a grin.

"Let your guard down and I'll smack that enthusasim right out of you!" said Piccolo

Mako was a bit unsure about this, but the more she broke down the training it was just her fighting 4 people at once, they're just the same person. She then got into her fighting stance, she positioned her legs from each other and made a fist in one hand on an open palm in the other.

"I'm ready." she said.

The Piccolos then got on their own fighting stances and charged at Mako, just as she prepared to counter attack 4 of the Piccolos vanished and the remaining one ties to strike Mako, she tries to block it, but in a moment she was hit in her side by a Piccolo clone's kick nearly sending her flying. The other Piccolo then strikes her in the stomach, but Mako blocked the attack, the second Piccolo then tried to hit her again, but she ducked the attack, when she did she saw a third Piccolo appear dashing at her from inbetween the first's legs, when he attacked her

"They keep coming from no where, I have no-"

*Smack*

Just as she tried to evaluate the situation the copy of Piccolo chopped the back of her neck trying to knock her unconcious, she was sent toward the ground and she slide face first several feet. She then flips one her hands off the ground, she looks and sees the Piccolos charging at her, she quickly prepares herself for the fight.

"F-Feel my opponents, damn it!" thought Mako.

The Piccolos then began to fight Mako with her being able to do nothing but block and dodge the attacks with little success, they always managed to land a hit on her and no matter how hard she tried she could sense where they were coming , she would either have to see them or counter attack, she wasn't making any progress in the training at the moment.

"Feel your opponents movements, sense their energy!" yelled Piccolo as the onslaught continued. Mako kept trying but she wasn't able to sense energy very well, but she decided that if relying on your eyes and ears were no go she could ignore those senses until she got something right.

"Stop reacting from an attack hitting you, react before it hits you!" yelled Piccolo.

"I know!" yelled Mako before she was struck in the stomach.

Mako tried and failed again and again, but as she gained wounds and bruises something ticked in her, she began to feel something a while after cutting off her other senses, but nothing enough to gain the ability fully.

"I just need to keep going and I'll get this." thought Mako.

3 hours later

Mako lied on the ground damaged from the training, Piccolo stood above her without a scratch on him, after all that training Mako wasn't able to complete her training properly. Mako had nothing but dissapointment in her heart, she felt so close to getting it but she was so far away from being able to sense things properly. As she laid on the ground she put her hands to her face frustrated.

"DAMN IT, I THOUGHT I HAD IT!" she yelled so loud that Dende and Mr. Popo could. Piccolo nearly jumped hearing that, he then sighed.

"After resting we'll try again, no other path than that, until then work on your ability to maintain awarness and sensing energy." said Piccolo. Mako then slowly got up and nodded looking down.

"Yes Master Piccolo." said Mako. Piccolo then held out his hand.

"Hold still so I can clean you up." said Piccolo attemtpting to heal her woumds, but Mako shook hear head.

"No, I-I need to remember how I flunked today." said Mako. Piccolo found this to be strange.

"Don't be stubborn, you need to recover for later." said Piccolo. Mako shook her head.

"I'll be fine, I've taken beatings before," she began to walk away," I just need a good rest." said Mako.

As Mako left Piccolo wondered more about her, even though he knew that Earthlings could be strong warriors and even opponents within time, even Mako was proof of that. He could tell that trainer her would be long despite her power at the moment, longer than Gohan.

"Gohan." Piccolo uttered.

Piccolo remembered that when he was first training Gohan he made it so that Gohan could survive on his own first, give him a sense of survival for the Saiyans, but even when he started it was just a few years and the potiential was even more there because he was part Saiyan. For humans it akes longer, Krillin, Tien, Master Roshi and even Yamcha took long to get to a high amount of strenght, but Mako already seemed to know how to use Ki, but it only looked that way because of how she go there, she didn't really know what she was supposed to.

"How will training her go?" he asked himself.

"I can say very well from my own perspective." said Mr. Popo. Piccolo turned and saw Mr. Popo walking up to him.

"Saw all that did you?" asked Piccolo. Mr. Popo nodded.

"Youra very aggressive teacher." said Mr. Popo.

"Am I wrong for it?" asked Piccolo for his opinion. Mr. Popo shook his head.

"No, in fact I think its the best method for Mako, she seems to understand after a while." said Mr. Popo.

"I could tell, but her progress is slow or normal I should say." said Piccolo.

"Oh thats right, this is the your second official student, after Gohan that is, she has quite a thing to live up to." said Mr. Popo. Piccolo shook his head.

"I doubt she's here for that." said Piccolo. Mr. Popo scratched the bottom of his chin.

"I doubt she is after anything here in partcular, I watch her when she's here, she doesn't snoop around or search for anything, but she had knowledge of this place, its almost unsettling if it wasn't for her straightforward attitude toward training here." said Mr. Popo. Piccolo groaned a little.

"That was Dende's fault, she was here to kill him and he lets her stay like a stray dog." said Piccolo a little annoyed. smiled.

"You've no need to worry, I think he felt bad about her coming up here for nothing, but he wasn't lying, anyone who comes up here of their own power can train if they want, she's just the first in a while to have to rule applied to." said Mr. Popo.

"Who is she?" asked Piccolo.

"She resembles the tribe that lives beneath Korin's tower, but other than that no one can say." siad Mr. Popo. Piccolo realized that debating over the situation of who she was with so little information would do no good.

"We'll ask her later, about her Grandmother too." said Piccolo. He then began to walk out of the room, when he left Mr. Popo looked around at the destroyed room that he was in, this was due to Mako and Piccolo's training and he sighed,

"Suppose I should clean this up." said Mr. Popo.

Piccolo made his way through the Lookout tower, it was within a matter of moments that he saw Dende looking inside of a room, he realized that it was Mako's room. He walked up to him and asked what was up.

"Dende," Dende jumps scared," what are you doing here?" asked Piccolo. Denden looks up at Piccolo and acts nervous.

"Oh hey Piccolo, h-hows it going?" asked Dende. Piccolo shook his head.

"Don't dodge the question." said Piccolo. Dende rubbed the back of his head.

"Well I saw her walking in, she looked hurt from training so I offered to heal her but she said no, she went in her room and dropped on her bed sleeping." said Dende. Piccolo folded his harms.

"You got worried, and watched her sleep, you started talking to yourself is less strange than this." said Piccolo. Dende narrowed his eyes at Piccolo.

"She was hurt okay, I go worried so I healed her why she was sleeping." said Dende. Piccolo questiond this entirely.

"Thought she didn't want to be healed." said Piccolo.

"Yeah, don't tell her I did that." said Dende. He then walked away from Piccolo. Piccolo wondered if Mako being here was distracting to Dende, but there didn't seem to be any big problems yetm he hoped there would be problems yet, he then remembers that he would have to house someone named Tenten.

"Yamcha better not forget." said Piccolo.

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