Tris

I collapse onto the bed and let out a muffled groan from the sheets against my mouth. Tobias and I just got done showing the initiates the Pit, Chasm, and Cafeteria. Thankfully no one suspected our relationship which was good. Tobias make his way to the bed too and groans.

"I hate this years initiates already," he mumbles "lets see, there are about 200 initiates who wouldn't stop staring at your ass and 5 girls who wouldn't stop saying how we should get married. Great initiates this year," he says sarcastically. I laugh a little and he cuddles next to me.

"I never thought I would see the famous Four cuddling with someone," I joke. He grunts, "Well if you havent had any physical contact with your beautiful girlfriend all day, you would too." I laugh and give him a light peck on the lips.

This peck on the lips, turns into a heated make out session. Ever since we got over my fear, we have only had sex occasionally. We believe that it is something to cherish and savor. Although we don't have sex a lot, we do have some touchy-feely make out sessions a lot.

"You are so beautiful," he kisses my neck, "brave," he kisses my stomach, "Sexy," he kisses my breast. He is about to take off my pants when there is a knock on the door. He growls and kisses my lips again, "If you ignore them they will go away." I nod and he sucks on my neck hungrily.

Knock, Knock

"Are you fucking kidding me," he growls and kisses my neck more feverishly so whenever he pulls away, my neck rises up with him.

Knock, Knock

"This better be pretty damn good if it it distracts me from having sex," he grumbles and gets off the bed. I put on my shirt in case I have to go to the door with Tobias but I'm fine without pants because you cant see the bed from the doorway.

I can hear Tobias yell at the person who is at the door. It's funny how he can go from romantic to serious in a split second. (A/N sorry but I have to explain something to my readers. Some of my reviewers are saying how I should change this story to M, which is unnecessary. First, I do talk about sex but I don't go into full detail like all of the M stories do, I just give a little brief description. Also, some of you have been saying Tobias is too obsessed with sex. First of all, they only had sex occasionally, not 24/7. Plus, I think some of us forget that Tobias is only 18, of course he will want to have sex with his girlfriend, who he loves! Sorry but you guys have to realize this)

I hear some inaudible talking and I try to shift my weight slightly to see who it is. I quickly pull back when I realize that I'm basically half naked and for all I know it could be Max or Eric at the door.

"Uh, Tris. We have visitors," Tobias announces and I become confused. I walk to the door, still with only a shirt and no pants on and what I see makes my eyes widen and my jaw drop.

My parents.

Tobias

I can't believe the nerve of some people.

I just want to be with my beautiful, sexy girlfriend alone and have some alone time, considering I couldn't even hold her hand today in front of the initiates. I stomp to the door, about to punch the living daylights out of this person.

I know I am taking this a little bit too seriously but I still am a horny teenage boy when it comes down to it and being a thin layer away from her being naked, it makes you mad if you get stopped. "What the hell do you need," I growl when I open the door, not even bothering to look who it is.

"Sir? I'm looking for my daughter Beatrice. Someone said that she lived here," a male voice says and I feel like I just swallowed my heart. It's Tris's mom and dad. The dad looks confused and the mom is smiling at me, probably remembering me from Visiting Day.

"Uh. Tris, we have some visitors," I call out to her, nervousness visable in my voice. Tris hasn't told her parents about us yet. Tris walks over to the doorway and her jaw drops. "Beatrice?" her dad asks, confusion and anger in his voice.

I guess he thought Tris wouldn't be dating someone. Plus it doesnt help that her boyfriend answered the door with no shirt on and his daughter with no pants on.

I find myself drifting off and staring at Tris's body during the awkward silence. I just want to reach over and trace her curves, touching every inch of her body, but I can't. Especially if we are in front of her parents.

"What is this," Mr. Prior gives me a look of disgust "man, doing in your apartment?"

Tris pales, "Dad, uh this is mine and his apartment and w-we are d-d-dating."

Tris's mom runs up to Tris and hugs her, "I knew you guys were going to date! You could see it in both of your eyes!" she says and the corner of my mouth twitches.

"Can we come in?" Mr. Prior asks Tris, completely ignoring me. Tris glances at me for a second and nods. They both walk in and Tris stays at the doorway with me. "I'm so sorry for this," she apoligizes and I smile. "It's fine. I just think your dad doesn't like my very much," I say and Tris smiles. She leans into my ear, "We can finish what we started later," she whispers seductively and I shiver. She smiles and follows her parents into the living room.

I follow and think of excuses in my head about why we both have messed up hair and why we have some of our clothes off. Well you see, Mr. and Mrs. Prior, your daughter and I were just about to have hot and sweaty sex, and we were both look forward to it. I hope you don't mind! Yeah, I defiantly can't say that. Tris goes into the kitchen and starts to make tea, a common drink in Abnegation.

I sit awkwardly with Tris's parents. "How old are you... what's your name again?" Mr. Prior asks, trying to be friendly with me but I can sense the discomfort in his voice. Tris hands them the tea and they nod in appreciation. "My name is Four and I'm 18." Andrew spits out the tea that was previously in his mouth, "WHAT! YOU CAN'T DATE HIM BEATRICE! I FORBID YOU!" he yells. I wince slightly and Tris walks over to where I'm sitting and sits on my lap. I wrap my arms around her body and press my face into her side.

"Dad, I love him. And he loves me. It doesn't matter if he is 2 years or 20 years older than me," Tris says and I squeeze her hand in support. "Where did you guys meet?" Andrew replies and Tris smiles at me, which I return. "He was my instructor during initiation. I was ranked first out of my class," Tris says proudly and I can't help but notice Natalie beaming.

"That's great sweetie!" Natalie beams and I kiss Tris's nose. "So what brings you guys to Dauntless?" I ask.

"Well, I have to be overseeing some of the Dauntless training so Natalie and I have to stay in Dauntless for a little while. One of the leaders -what was his name again?- Eric said that we could stay in your guys apartment for the time being." As soon as those last words leave his mouth, I choke on my water and Tris visibly pales.

Great, just great.

Okay so in my previous AN I asked you guys how old you guys thought I am. The range of ages differed from 11 to 18. I am actually 13 and I want to be a writer when I grow up because my teachers always use my writing for examples in class and my ELA teacher said that I have a reading level of a 15 year old.

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