Hey, just hey with some history of this story. It went through a lot of rewrites and i was gonna have some characters appear, but that would have overcrowded the story.
Here's a few things that would have made it.
1. the Madness would have looked like Stein, but after realizing that the anime focused a lot of Stein's insanity, I decided to have him look like Crona because apart from two fights, we barley got a glimpse of his insanity.
2. Sid was gonna stay dead.
3. Justin would have appeared.
4. The Madness would have made a alliance with Miskito and Giriko, but was scrapped as I wanted this to be the Madness' story.
5. Medusa would have appeared in the flesh.
6. Black*Star would have been manipulated by the Madness to attack his friends.
7. Spirit would have fought the Madness, but I struggled with his character, hence his minor role.
8. Eruka's death would have been more brutal.
9. The Madness was going to be more faux affably evil, but we had a lot of villains like that.
10. There would have been no cliffhanger for a sequel.
And there;s what could have been.