Learning to Fall

by Teri Neko

After Alcatraz things for mutants haven't been so easy. As a concentration camp for mutants is discovered the most unlikely thing develops. Trust and love. PYROxOC rated m for later chapters

14. HEY! YOU NEED TO READ THIS!

Sooo….. You guys have a choice.

I can do either one, so don't worry about what's easiest for me.

I've reread this story several times, and there are many places where I realize that I can do better. Make the chapters longer, make the descriptions more vivid, things along those lines.

I've also gotten inspiration for a sequel.

So it's up to you. Should I a) leave the story the way it is and just make the sequel kick ass

Or b) Fix up this story so that this and the sequel is just one mind numbing experience?

Let me know as soon as possible because I need to get writing. You have 3 days.

MUCH LOVE

Teri Neko