A/N I do not own Naruto. And this is the last chapter so I made it extra long. The next story of the Saga will be about the war with the Akatsuki. WARNING! The new story MAY, I said MAY, Contain character
death. So that's a friendly warning. Hopefully the chapters will be 10 to 15 chapters long. But don't hold your breath 'cause I may not do that. So, Next is I decided to do a little bit of a Bleach crossover. JUST THE
SWORD THING! NOT ANY CHARACTERS! Oh, and if you want Virgil from DMC and from 'Sharingan Naruto' Then please say so.Now enjoy it okay 'cause I worked hard. Well thats it okay, so lets begin the story.
Oh and this is ten pages, at least in wordpad form.
Naruto and Sasuke stared intently at eachother, both soaked in there own blood, Sasuke, angry, started a series of handsigns.
"Fire style: Fire ball jutsu!" he shouted, launching the fire ball at Naruto. Naruto, shocked at the sudden change in tactics, had his own jutsu in mind.
"Water style: water wall jutsu!" he shouted. He was suddenly surrounded by a barrier of water protecting him from the fires searing flames and uncontrolable heat, creating steam around the area.
'Where are you?' Naruto asked himself trying to sense Sasukes chakra. 'THERE!' he cried in his mind.
"Chidori!' Sasuke yelled as a blade of lightning pierced Naruto in the chest, just missing his heart. "You should do better than that if you want to win." Sasuke said smugly, filled with confidence but not too
much. He slowly walked towards Naruto, making sure he wasn't up to something. As soon as he thought he was safe he went for the kill.
"Shadow Clone Jutsu!" Naruto shouted from the ground shocking Sasuke. Suddenly two clones poped out of no where and kicked Sasuke away and ran strait for him as Naruto started to collect chakra from
his body to his hands not having much chakra to summon Gamabunta but something else.
Sasuke out of his stupor see's the clones closing in on him. The first clone runs ahead and go's for a heel drop. Sasuke dodges to the left and pivits on his foot kicking the second clone as it closed in. The
first clone, regaining its footing, turns around only to be met with a foot to the fist. 'Oh, he's good, really good.' Naruto said to himself as he prepared his jutsu. Summoning Jutsu!" he shouted as smoke covered his
general area.
'What the hell?' Sasuke said to himself as he looked at what appeared to be a ghost frog.
"Who the crap is that" The frog suddenly roared as he took out a blade. Saying crap is like a curse word for this frog, since he doesn't like cursing. "This shrimp angers me," he began. "I'm going to teach this
kid a lesson for not telling me who he is!" he yelled, not giving a chance for Naruto to object. Not that he would. "Ghost fang blast!" he yelled as he swung his blade, and a white light flew from the blade towards
Sasuke. Sasuke seeing the danger, dodges the blast easily by leaping over it. "Dumb ass." the Toad mutterd to himself. "Ghost fang blast!" he roared again as another white blast went towards Sasuke, this time
hitting its mark. The Toad, obviousely satisfied, put away his sword when all of a sudden a Chakra blade pierced him, shocking him, and Naruto, into a stupor.
"I thought you were supposed to be tough, but I was wrong." Sasuke said as the only damage done was a little dirt on his cloths. The ghost frog, still in shock, only disapears, to weak to fight.
"Tch, Naruto, I'm dissapointed," Sasuke started in fake dissapointment. "I guess I have to finish you off." he stated as he lifted his blade. Scatter: Shishi Sakura." he declared as the blade of his sword, scattering,
beautiful pink, lion shaped petals spiraled around Naruto, at first from afar, then so close to touch his skin, then they flew and sliced him multiple times.
'Got too think fast.' Naruto thought to himself as he rolled away from the strange techniqe.
He rolled for momentiam and got to his feet, picking up Yamato, that was cut in half. "Yamato!" he shouted as his sword turned from a cut in half blade into a tirned into a giant blade with a blue hilt.
As the scattered pieces of Sasuke's blade closed in on him, he slashed his sword creating a swirling vortex blocking the attack. "Rasenblast!" he yelled.
Itachi was annoyed now. No, wait, he was beyond annoyed, he was flat out pissed. First, Sasuke gets all fucked up because of some dumbass bird, next Naruto go's and tries to kill his brother, and he can't
find those little bastard's, and now the Akatsuki has new members apparantly. Basicly, life sucked right now.
"Well, were is the Jinchuurriki, Itachi-san?" this...KID, thinks he can boss around him, THE STRONGEST FUCKING UCHIHA, WHO'S STRONGER THAN EVEN TSUNADE AND JIRAIYA COMBINED! oh hell
no.He was going to enjoy killing this brat and his Fucking old geezer.
"I'm not telling you anything boy." he began. "And I'm going to enjoy fucking killing you, NO ONE, AND I MEAN NO ONE BOSS' AROUND A MOTHER FUCKING UCHIHA! Itachi screams, royally pissed now.
The kid just smirks, and gets out...a deck of cards? OK. Now Itachi was so pissed he actually almost pissed himself out of anger. "You think you can kill me...WITH A DECK OF FUCKING CARDS!?!?" Itachi yelled
like a mad man, which he pretty much is now.
"Calm down." the kid said. "My name's Dante and I'm the one who's going to kill the fucking Uchiha." he said in an almost demonic voice. Itachi ran up towards Dante, ready for a punch when he just exploded,
litteraly exploded. Suddenly another Itachi jumped down a nearby tree.
"Shadow clone smash." he said calmly, apparently faking anger. When he looked he was shocked that Dante was surrounded by large playing cards. 'So they're not like ordinary cards, interisting.' he
thought with a grimace as a smirking Dante returned the cards to normal size.
"You know," Dante began. " I hate arrogant bastard's like you." he said with a sudden serious look that looked like it shouldn't be there. "Catch!" he yelled as he threw five cards at Itachi.
'Shit!' Itachi thought as he started to dodge the flying projectiles. As one came close it started to glow a purpilish color. 'What the...' The card then exploded before he could finish his thought. Dante smirked as
the card exploded on Itachi. "Nice try!" Itachi suddenly said as he came in front of Dante with pieces of armor torn off his Anbu garb and punched him in the face. Dante flew backwords a few feet.
'Damn he has a strong left!' Dante thought to himself as he commanded his leftover four cards to aim at Itachi. Itachi's eyes widend as the cards came closer.
'Shit!' he thought as he started handsigns. Soon the cards exploded on him making him fly back a few meters. Dante, once again looking triumphant, looked towards the corpse of a...log? That's not right.
'What the?' the thought then noticed a fist from the corner of his eye alowing him to avoid the punch just in time. "Nice try Ita...ugh!" he shouted as Itachi planted a foot in his face. "Damn!" he yelled as he
threw a card at Itachi. "I'll fucking kill you you bastard!" he yelled as the cards came towards Itachi.
"Rasenblast!" Naruto yelled as a spiral shaped blast came from his sword as he swung it and launched at Sasuke. Sasuke's eyes widend as the blast tore threw his beautiful lion pink petals and went straight
towards him, blasting his left arm guard off.
"What was that?" Sasuke asked curiousity getting the better of him.
"That's Yamato's ability." Naruto answered. "It first takes one techniqe and makes it it's own, then turns the origianal power and increases it by ten fold. I just so happened to make it take Rasengan's power."
Naruto replied as he admired his sword.
"I see," Sasuke began. "I won't be able to beat you by just childs play." he stated as if he had an ace up his sleeve. "Did you know..." he began. "That every few generations their is a full blooded Uchiha that
has the ability, when he learns Shikai, they also learn the next stage immediatly?" he asked as if he thought Naruto didn't know, which he didn't.
"Second stage?" Naruto questioned with a confused look.
"let me show you...my Ban Kai!" Sasuke yelled as he threw his sword into the air. The sword began to glow, and as it did it took a new transformation. "ROAR, SHISHI SAKURA SENBON!" he yelled as the
petals combined to create a twelve foot tall pink lion that was sixteen feet long.
"What the hell is that?!" Naruto yelled to himself. As an answer the giant pink lion launched itself at him, roaring like a demon, attacking furiously, clawing at him like he was it's next meal. 'Shit gotta think of
something.' Naruto thought in his head. 'Hope this works.' he prayed as he readied his sword. "Rasenblast!" he yelled as the spiral blast launched at the lion. But the lion just swiped at it and it vanished. 'What?'
Naruto questioned to himself.
"Shishi Sakura Senbon is to powerful for that level of attack." Sasuke said calmly as he watched Naruto in peril. Naruto was now panicking. He could not think of one thing that could save him, so he just
thought of one thing.
"Rasenblast!" he yelled as he launched another blast, this time directly at Sasuke. Unfortunatly, ShiShi Sakura Senbon blocked the attack. 'Shit.' Naruto thought to himself.
"Scatter." As soon as Sasuke said that the huge lion 'Scattered' as twirled like a tornado right around Naruto.
"Fuck." Naruto said simply as the Scattered pieces of the overgrown lion ripped and torn threw his skin like paper. "Got too...think...of...some...thing..." he said as he slowly sliped into the
darkness. Suddenly a picture of Hinata came to mind. How Sasuke killed his and hers unborn child, and the pain she must be going threw. His blood was boiling, and he stared at where Sasuke was sure to be. His
Chakra was now boiling with anger as well as he prepared his attack. "RASENBLAST" he roared with such an intensity, even Sasuke's Ban Kai hesitated to continue the attack. The spiral blast was so intense it
blasted right threw ShiShi Sakura Senbon and hit Sasuke Squarely in the face, launching him thirty feet or so in the air, and he slowly dropped back on Earth.
"For the pride of the leaf village, I swear I will kill you you monster!" Naruto yelled as he readied to finish off the Uchiha. Sasuke then disapeared and reapeard behind him.
"Too slow." Sasuke said as his Ban Kai started to incircle Naruto again in a tornado, ripping and tearing at him with more intensity then ever. "When I'm injured, I'm able to use ShiShi Sakura Senbon's own
chakra and heal my wounds immediatly, and that's just one of it's many abilities." Sasuke said so arrogantly it pissed off Naruto even more. But not more knowing he failed to avenge his dead, unborn child. He allowed
a tear of grieve to fall down his cheek.
'You could still, Avenge your fallen child.' came a bone chilling voice in Naruto's head.
'How?' Naruto said as he waited for an answer from the demon within. He could tell the Kyuubi was smirking a fox's grin right now, knowing, at least hoping, Naruto would accept.
'I loan you a fraction of my chakra, you get more power, and will kill the Uchiha. Sounds good no? Either way I could care less what you do, for I know as soon as you pass out, I'll just force
my chakra into you, giving me complete control long enough to kill this Sasuke. But if you do except, than at least you have some control.' the Fox said, not really caring what happens.
"BOOOOOMMMMMMMM!" A loud exploisian was heard as Itachi was blown away by the shear power of Dante's cards. He rolled away to tired to keep on.Most of his outfit was destroyed and he was
bleeding everywhere. He looked shocked. Then he looked angry for loosing. Then he looked sad. He looked at the ground in shame, whishing he could talk to his little brother one more time.
"This is the end." he said regretfully, looking even sadder. Dante just looked triumphant. He won and he knew it.
"Ha! Some Uchiha you are!" Dante yelled, mocking Itachi. "Are all Konoha ninja's this weak?" He questioned looking serious all of a sudden. "BORING!" he yelled...quite loudly, just plain pissing off Itachi.
"If Itachi's so weak, why don't you fight me?" came a sudden voice out of no where. Dante looked around wildly while Hanamaru just raised an eye brow.
"Who go's there?" Dante roared into the forest, trying to detect any chakra source. Suddenly a mysteriouse figure with a huge sword popped out of no where. Dante just looked at the fellow who had a death
wish. "Well who the fuck are you you mother fuckin bastard?!" Dante yelled, apparently loving the chance to curse. The figure just looked at him with cold eyes.
"My name is Hoshigaki Kisame, and this is my BAN-KAI!" he yelled as his sword transformed.
'What the?' Dante thougt as he looked at Kisame's sword transforming. Soon the sword's hilt looked the same but instead of a sword that shaves, it was replaced with a huge Shark made of water swishing
around, as if wanting to rip Dante to shreds with it's water teeth.
"Kisamehada." (Demon shark skin). "This swords range is as deadly as it's looks." Kisame said ready to kill this poser. Dante looked at for a minute then he just smirked, pissing off Kisame. "Oh, why arn't
you afraid of my Shark?" asked Kisame angrily. Dante just smirked. He took out a card and threw it at Kisame and Itachi. As Kisame had his shark attack it the card exploded with electricity, flowing with the shark
and shocking Kisame and Itachi with a million volts of electricity, knocking them out instantly.
"That was fun." Dante said sarcasticly to Hanamaru. The old man just looked at him, and shook his head. He than began to speak.
"We must leave." he began. When Dante was about to protest, he gave him a look that said to shut up immediatly. "Shinobi are coming and we didn't come to start a war...yet." he finished, than vanished.
"Man, I wanted to fight more." Dante whined before disapearing into the forest.
Naruto and Sasuke.
"Lend me your power." Naruto demanded to the fox demon. The Kyuubi, knowing he's one step closer to gaining freedom, happily agreed to the statement and loaned as much chakra to Naruto without
hurting him in the end, at least not hurt him too much. Naruto felt a huge dose of power flowing in his vains, his wounds instantly healed, and he felt his power increased by ten fold, at least. At the huge increase of
power flowing through Naruto Sasuke's eyes widend.
"What is this chakra?" Sasuke asked to no one in particular. Suddenly Naruto was engulfed in a red chakra shaped like a fox with six tails.
"Sasuke!" The possesed Naruto said in a tone that sounded bloodthirsty. Naruto threw his Zanpaku-to to the ground near the edge of the water and got on all fours never taking his eye's off his prey. He was
more animal than man now, the way he looked almost terrified Sasuke, almost. Sasuke looked at his own Zanpaku-to and smirked. He would win no matter what, and kill his arch enemy.
"Shishi Sakura Senbon, attack." Sasuke demanded of his Zanpaku-to. As Sasuke's monstrosity of a Ban-Kai went towards his ex-sensei, Naruto disapeared and reapeared in front of Sasuke and gave him a
hard punch in the face causing him to fly back a few feet and almost made him pass out from the shear power of that one punch. But something was off. To Sasuke it was like he was punched a hundred times, and
all over his body he felt pain. He began to think and came to a horrifing conclussion.
'This sudden surge of power, can it be that Naruto's so powerful that what seemed like just one punch, it was actually a barrage of punches?' Sasuke wondered to himself. He narrowed his eyes and decided
he had to test it. When he unleashed his Ban-Kai, he stopped using the dark crow's power because it took too much chakra to hold for long period's of time, but it seemed he had no choice now. He was going to go
all out. He closed his eyes and began to concentrate. He felt a sudden surge of power as his skin color turned black, like a crows feathers. Out of his back he sprouted the wings of a crow that extended to ten feet.
He stared at Naruto as Naruto stared back. Sharingan eye's staring, ready to kill the other in an instant. Naruto moved first. He came at Sasuke with a viscious roar, and aimed a punch a punch at his face.
As Sasuke predicted Naruto was indeed able to make fifty punches to seem like only one, but with the increase of power he was able to avoid most. Only one hit him in the face but he was able to hold his
ground. He took Naruto's fist and threw Naruto over his shoulder and ordered Shishi Sakura Senbon to attack. As the pink animal attacked, Naruto made a red Rasengan and used it to blow away the lion and made a
bee line towards Sasuke.
'Shit!' Sasuke thought to himself as he didn't have enough time to dodge the attack, so instead he blocked as much of Naruto's punches and kicks as he could. Naruto being ten times stronger with the extra
was able to get in ten good punches and kicks. Thus, Sasuke had no choice but to go on the offensive. Using his wings, he flew in the air away from Naruto, who got pissed at this.
"Sasuke!" He yelled with anger clear in his voice. But Sasuke didn't even pay attention. He started a series of handsigns.
"Katon: Gokakyu no Jutsu!" (Fire style: Fire ball jutsu!) He screamed as the large fire ball flew towards Naruto. Naruto, sensing danger, leaped over the fire ball only to be greated by the pink lion.
"Attack!" Sasuke yelled as the lion scattered and flew around Naruto like a tornado. 'Got you now.' Sasuke thought confidently.
"Rasengan!" Naruto yelled as he blew away the lion and hit Sasuke with the Rasengan in the face, causing him to fly back again.
'Kuso!' Sasuke screamed in his head, angry he's still losing. 'I can't win with my current style.' Sasuke told himself. 'My taijutsu in this state is the same as Naruto's, but my chances go down when I use
jutsu. I have no choice, I have to realy solely on my Taijutsu.' Sasuke said to himself as he used his wings to slow down his momentum and fling himself towards Naruto and punched him in the face. Naruto flung a
few feet backwords, but then sent a red chakra claw at Sasuke. Sasuke dodged the attack and saw an opening.
"Chidori!" (One thousand birds). Sasuke yelled as he strucked Naruto and cut out his right lung. Naruto, at this attack, coughed up blood and bent down in pain. "Naruto, you can't beat..." Sasuke
began but was cut off.
"Rasengan!" Naruto yelled as he struck Sasuke in the gut. Not only blasting him away, but tearing a huge chunk of skin, and destroying Sasuke's own lung. As Sasuke landed far from Naruto he doubled
over in pain from losing a lung. He started coughing up blood. He looked at Naruto in anger, and knew they both were at there limits, they would end this in one move. As Sasuke began to create a black Chidori,
while Naruto began to create a blood red Rasengan. They jumped and launched their attacks.
"Rasengan!"
"Chidori!"
"We have to hurry!" Kakashi yelled at Jiraiya as they leaped towards the Valley of the End, towards the two huge chakra's their. Jiraiya just nodded as he looked foward, towards Naruto and Sasuke.
"I still can't believe Itachi and Kisame are in the hospital." Kakashi said as he looked at Pakkun. Jiraiya just looked at him, than began.
"Well believe it Kakashi. The Akatsuki are stronger than ever with their new members." He replied as he saw it started to rain. 'We need to hurry.' he thought to himself as they reached the dreaded place.
They saw one body, and only one body. When they got closer, they saw it was Naruto who lost.
Konoha Hospital.
Hinata looked at the bed next to her, and spotted her most precious person in her life. He looked so lifeless, and so sad. He hasn't been awake for weeks now, but everyday he looked healthier, but at the
same time, sadder. He wasn't able to protect her or the child, and she blamed only herself. If she was only stronger than maybe, just maybe. She vanished those thought's away instantly as she saw Naruto open
his eyes. He looked at her and smiled. Then he remembered what happened, and his face went blank. But she could see it. The hatred in his eyes, reserved for only one person. :Uchiha Sasuke.
"Naruto-kun?" She asked, looking at her lover with big sad eyes. He only looked away, shame written on his face, as he thought about his dead, unborn child, that he nor her could protect. He felt like
his whole world fell apart. He wanted, oh so badly he wanted, to just die right there. But he knew better. He knew what to do. He would do anything to do this one thing. He wanted power, to destroy the one who
caused him and his love so much sorrow, he wanted power to kill Sasuke, and he would do almost anything to do it. He looked at his love, and knew what to say.
"Hime." He began. "I swear, I will kill the one who did this." He said it like it was so simple, that he could kill this man and have no regrets. She looked at him and could only say these words.
"I love you Naruto-kun."
"I love you too Hinata-Hime." He replied with so much truth, so much honesty that Hinata knew he wasn't lying. Because she said it the exact same way.
Three weeks later.
"I know why all of you are confused why I requested the strongest Shinobi in the village for one meeting, but it is urgent." Tsunade said as she looked at all twelve Shinobi in the room. Their was Jiraiya, Itachi
Kisame, Naruto, Kakashi, Might Guy, Cloud, Yuffie, Neji, Ibiki, Anko, and Sai. They all had on calm faces, that showed curiosity in their eyes. "Naruto, we found Sasuke." Tsunade said in a calm voice.
"Nani?! Where is that bastard, I wanna kill him!" Naruto yelled thrashing around, causing kakashi and Jiraiya to try to hold him back from hurting anyone by accident.
"Our resources say he's going after the Akatsuki in order to capture the Bijuu and 'inherate' their power, which the only way to do that is to kill them. It's also said that Uchiha Madara is among their ranks in
disguise." She finished saying. This caused Naruto to stop thrashing about, and actually look nervous, like everyone else. They all looked at eachother, nervouse about what this mission is supposed to be.
"We also found that the Akatsuki has a new base in the middle of nowhere, where they are creating a huge army. Group A is to lead a huge army them selves, and attack head on against their own army. While
group B will infilltrate the base, take out the nine leaders of Akatsuki, kill Madara, and capture or murder Uchiha Sasuke." She took a long breath. "Group A will consist of Myself, Jiraiya, Ibiki, Anko, Cloud, Yuffie.
While Group B will consist of Naruto, Itachi, Kisame, Neji, Kakashi, Guy,and Sai. Now, Group A will each lead their own platoons, while group B can each take any other three members with them. Any questions?"
Tsunade finished. No one raised their hand. "Good. Now group B go find members for your own plattoons!" She yelled. Their was a chorus of Hai's and everyone Shunshin'd away. She turned and looked out the
window. "Good luck, little brother." She said silently as she looked at the paper work. 'Time for a break.' She thought to herself as she snuck past a sleeping Shizune.
"Get back to work." Shizune said as Tsunade reached the door.
"Damn." She said back as she sat down.
'Who should I bring with me?' Naruto thought to himself. He couldn't bring Hinata since she was still in the hospital for mental damage from losing the child. He thought to himself and had an idea.
"THAT'S IT!" He yelled causing villagers to look at him strangly. "I know who to bring!" He yelled as he ran off to Shikamaru's house.
"Your kidding Naruto." Shikamar said as he looked at his friend. Naruto only shook his head. "How troublesome, but I guess I could do it, as long as Choji can come along." Shikamaru replied.
"Fine, Choji can come." Naruto said as he and his friend ran off to Choji's house.
"By the way Naruto, I heard you got out of the hospital three weeks ago, and no one has seen you since untill today. What were you doing?" Shikamaru asked the blonde. The question made Naruto laugh.
"I've been training of course." Naruto said the the lazy ninja. "I've learned three new tricks, and I'm gonna use all of them on this mission." Naruto finished as he and Shikamaru got to Choji's house.
"Hey Cho.." Shikamaru was cut off as a fat guy in armor flew threw the door, looking like a mad boar.
"I know the question, so fine I'll come as long as you don't torture me!!!" Choji yelled making Naruto and Shikamaru sweat drop.
"So who else we need?" Asked Shikamaru. Naruto looked thoughtfully and had an idea.
"lets get"
"I'll go." Said a voice out of know where. Then a mysterious figure jumped from a nearby tree.
"Hi Shino." Naruto said annoyed that Shino cut him off.
"So when do we leave?" Shino asked Naruto. As Naruto was about to answer Itachi came out of no where.
"Two hours." He said as he quickly left.
'What is it, National Interupet Naruto Day?!' Naruto yelled in his head glaring where Itachi was. He then sighed. "Well lets go to the gates and wait." He said as he led his team to konoha's gates.
As Naruto and his team he saw the others that were to infaltrate the Akatsuki base. Itachi had with him Sakura, Ino, and Tenten. While Kisame had Asuma, Kurenai, and Kiba. Kakashi had Ebisu, Genma,
and Hayate. While Guy had Rock Lee, Raido, and Shizune. Neji had Hiashi, Hizashi, and some other Hyuga that no one cares about. And Sai had, no one?
"Hey Sai, where's your plattoon?" Asked kakashi. Sai just smirked and did a handsign. Suddenly ink soldiers came out of no where.
"I'm covered." he said as his ink soldiers followed him out the gate. Everyone just stared at his unusual jutsu.
"Cool." Naruto said as him and his team.
"Arrogant brat." Ebisu, Kakashi, and the Hyuga twins said in jealousy. Soon enough everyone left the gates, and off to the Akatsuki base with the map they were each given. As they leaped threw the tree's
they all knew that they only had a forty percent of surviving this mission. Hopefully the army of Leaf ninja sent earlier will allow them to sneak in and assassinate the Akatsuki members, Sasuke, and of course,
Madara. They knew this will be the battle of their lives.
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