A/N Sorry about that previous terrible chapter, I was gonna delete it but lots of people reviewed it so I didn't. Omg I have 181 reviews!!!! My aim is 200+ so please just take a minute to review! So Outfits are on my profile they are sooooo beautiful!! I made them up myself! So hope this makes up for that crap chapter xx

To Lavie : If you read it properly you would have seen that she isn't getting revenge on him for her parents because he saved her. She would have got raped and killed if it wasn't for Edward. After a while she sees the accident as unintentional, but bullying her had been intentional. Also, we you said : c`mon if someone killed my parents I didn't think the first thing that came to my mind is the word FUN. That's because you and Bella's personality is so much different from each other. PLUS this is a re-write of New me, new life? In NmNl? She gets revenge. In this that's what she will get!!

Previously : "Operation Revenge on Edward" I cried flinging my hand in the middle of us.

"Operation Make over Bella" shouted Alice and she slapped her hand on top of mines.

"Operation Make Edward jealous" and Rosalie slapped her hand on top of Alice's.

"Together we are operation destroy Edward" I giggled and we all high-five each other. Oh yes, this is going to be, FUN

Hours later I was pulled in Rosalie's bedroom by the pixie. Rosalie shoved a CD into her CD player. It was Brand New Eyes by Paramore. I love this CD!! I sang along as I plonked myself down in Rosalie chair and looked at the vanity table in wonder and disbelief. Thousands of different products were lined up in an even live waiting to be used. Rosalie pulled my bobble out of my hair. My hair blew about my face in an untidy manner, I grimaced at it. It so needs cut I thought. Alice began rifling through bag after bag of make up occasionally gasping in delight when she came across something. Rosalie was running her fingers through my hair gently untangling the knots. Esme drifted into the room and watched us content.

"Come join in" Alice cried.

"No no, you girls go ahead." she laughed looking at them proudly. In that stare, I realised Esme considered herself the mum figure. I smiled sadly as I closed my eyes and the make over began. Alice got to work on my make up and Rosalie started plugging in curling wands of different sizes. There was a soft snip as Rosalie cut off my spilt ends. I sang while they worked. The song changed and Feeling Sorry came on. The words of that song is really good. I closed my eyes and sang along while they worked.

We still live in the same town, well don't we?
But I don't see you around anymore.
I go to all the same places
Not even a trace of you.
Your days are numbered at 24.

And I'm getting bored waiting 'round for you.
We're not getting any younger.
And I won't look back 'cause there's no use.
Its time to move forward.

I feel no sympathy.
You live inside a cave
You barely get by, the rest of us are trying
There's no need to apologize
I've got no time for feeling sorry.

Well I try not to think of what might happen.
When your reality it finally cuts through.
Well as for me I got out and I'm on the road.
The worst part is that this, this could be you.

You know it too.
You can't run from your shame.
You're not getting any younger.
Time keeps passing by
but you wave it away.
Its time to roll over.

I feel no sympathy.
You live inside a cave.
You barely get by, the rest of us are trying.
There's no need to apologize
I've got no time for feeling sorry.

All the best lies
they are told with fingers tied.
So cross them tight.
Won't you promise me tonight.
If its the last thing you do
you'll get out.

I feel no sympathy.
You live inside a cave.
You barely get by, the rest of us are trying.
There's no need to apologize
I've got no time, I've got no time.

I feel no sympathy.
You live inside a cave.
You barely get by, the rest of us are trying.
There's no need to apologize
I've got no time.
I've got no time for feeling sorry.

I've got no time for feeling sorry.

I got lost in the songs and was surprised when Rosalie announced that they were finished.

"Tada" they sang in their beautiful high voices. I opened my eyes and stared into the mirror. Holy shit! The person looking back at me in the mirror was stunning. My hair had been curled in beautiful curls that ended down the bottom of my back, with a straight side fringe that went to the right side. My eyes were framed with thick long luscious eye lashes, coated with black mascara. Black eye liner carefully out lined my eyes, making them look wide eyed and dramatic looking. My plump full lips were coated in glossy red lip gloss. There a natural pink blusher was spread across my cheeks, making my cheekbones look defined. My eye brows had been perfectly sculpted and my skin looked flawless. I lifted my hand and touched my cheek running my hand down it. My smile grew. I squealed jumping up grabbing Rosalie and Alice into a hug.

"Bella you look so beautiful, not that you didn't look before the makeover" she said motherly. I grinned and pulled her into a hug. My heart tugged and I felt a pang of grief for my own mother. Only eye witnesses that were there would actually be able to tell me who's fault it was that the car crash happened. I don't think my mum would have wanted me to kill Edward for killing them. For one, I don't know for sure. But also, if it wasn't for him I wouldn't be here. I would have suffered in a way no one could ever imagine. Alice probably would have too. It hurts me to think that I owe him so much but I cannot resent him for that. I can however hate him for all the times he hurt me as a teenager. The scars that he cause me, emotionally and physically have finally healed as I got changed. The hurt and anger that I felt is dormant until now, now its all rushing at me 100mph.

"Belly button you okay" Alice's voice reviving me from my thoughts. I shake me head slightly and nod. I smiled widely to show that I'm good. All though the don't look convinced they drop it, for which, I'm grateful for.

"Lets go show him what he's missing!" Rosalie squealed. I smiled nervously before following them downstairs. Downstairs I sat on the couch, waiting for Edward to come back. I was examining my nails as Edward came in.

"Why can't I heard any of your thoughts" Edward demanded looking confused. I felt my jaw fall open.

"You can read minds" I asked. He looked at me, just noticing me. His mouth fell open and he gaped at me in shock. All sorts of emotions flashed across his face. Shock, amazement, lust? I raised an eyebrow at him.

"Better close that mouth Edward, you might catch flies" I smirked. He closed it looking sheepish. "You can mind read" I asked.

"Yes, I can. Not at this precise moment. Do you have a power?" he said curtly. He knew fine well I didn't. I smiled at him.

"No" I replied looking as though this information bored me. Secretly I was jealous.

"Its not just you Edward, I cant feel any emotions from you. I can only feel my own" Jasper looked relieved at this. Damn! Another one with a power!

"I can still see the future" smiled Alice smugly. I grinned at her while Edward and Jaspers looked at her is disbelief.

"Wh-" Edward asked before being cut off by Alice.

"Don't bother with your plan. You know? The one where you are going to wrestle with Emmett. I wouldn't. Esme would kill you" she laughed. Edward's eye brow rose at this.

"I wasn't planning on wrestling Emmett" he smirked. Emmett came in his booming laugh echoing.

"You weren't?! too scare, I understand you bro" he smiled. Edward coiled.

"No, in fact. I will" and he lunged forwards at Emmett who was ready for him. Emmett ducked at the last second and Edward went flying straight through the wall with a loud bang. Plaster flew everywhere as a cloud of dust covered everything in a meter radius. Esme came running.

"Oh my god!!!" she screeched. "Edward! Clean this up RIGHT NOW!!" Edward emerged looking furious.

"Told ya" sang Alice giggling. Jasper laughed along with her, his eyes very warm as he gazed at her. I smiled feeling warm at the sight. Its obvious Jasper is very smitten with Alice, but its early days. Only Alice would be able to know.

"Oh Bella, Rosalie!! Were going clubbing tonight. There's a new club opening tonight and were going!! Lets go get ready" she cried jumping up and down clearly hyper. Alice had changed drastically since that night. She was always so happy and carefree. So happy go lucky that I think she needs help. I smiled as she dragged me upstairs.

"Chicks" they all muttered then started laughing.

"We heard that! I'm actually sticking my tongue out at you all" Alice yelled even though she didn't need to. We got to Rosalie's room and Alice and pulled open Rose's wardrobe. I sat back while they rifled through all of the clothes and when I say a lot, I mean a lot! Random things began flying at me but I made no attempt to pick them up. Alice gasped and grinned turning towards me. Guess who's going clubbing tonight she mouthed. I smiled already knowing the answer. This should be good! Almost to good. Alice gathered clothes up and held them up.

"What ya think" she grinned. I gaped at her. She glared at me so I took the clothes and went straight to the bathroom. No way are they seeing how ridiculous this will be on me before I do. I pulled the pink leopard underwear on first then I put on the clothes on. I stood staring at me reflection in the full length mirror. I had on a tiny denim mini skirt that only just hid my pink leopard girl boxers. The skirt was frayed at the bottom slightly and there was a zip at the side. The top was the worst though. I was a corset type t-shirt. It was very tight and barely covered my chest. It didn't help that Alice gave my a push up bra. The top was black satin and hooked up at the middle. It had satin straps and it really was beautiful. Feeling like a idiot, I sighed and exited the bathroom. (A/N See profile)

"Oh my gosh you look so beautiful" Alice gushed. I looked down embarrassed.

"Here these shoes would just finish the outfit" Rosalie grinned lobbing me a pair of simple black heels. I caught them swiftly and put them on. Alice and Rosalie had already changed. They were beautiful as per. Alice had on a beautiful blue satin dress that was lined with black stap's and black netting at the bottom. A black ribbon wrapped its way around her waist ending in a bow. She had on the same shoes as me. A black necklace that ended in a black heart sat in the hollow of her white neck. Alice's short spiky hair had been curled into little curls that sat around her face. Little black beads wound its way around her skinny wrist, tying together with a sating ribbon that was artistically wove into a perfect bow. In her hands she was holding a shiny black clutch that matched her shoes. Blue eye shadow outlined her eyes. She had on black mascara and eye liner and coral lip gloss. (A/N See profile)

Rosalie had on a red dress that ended under her bum. It was light and it was strapless in a deep blood red colour. She had on black sequined shoes that had a huge heel. She accessorised the outfit with a red bangle that was studded with little gems. A necklace made up of little black balls that tied around her neck with black ribbon. She was holding a black sequined bag, the handle a silver chain. Her eyes were also blood red, black mascara making her eye lashes sky high. Black liquid eye liner out lined eyes. Her nails were painted black and studded with a gem on each nail. The colours contrasted with her pale skin. Her hair straightened so that it hung down her back like a glossy waterfall. (A/N See profile)

"Alice, can you do my make up" I asked knowing full well she would say yes. She squealed and began attacking my with brushes and make up. What if this night doesn't go to plan? Alice would be able to see that but still… I doesn't stop the anxiousness that builds up in me. I opened my eyes when she was done. She had done smoky eyes on me, using different tones that arched up to my eyebrows. She dragged the eye shadow outwards making cool soft flicks. I squirted Ghost perfume on me and grabbed a few a piece's of jewellery.

"Amazing" I breathed happily. We all got up and walked down stairs. Night had started to fall and all that could be heard was the clicking of our heels.

"Rosalie are we taking your car?" I asked smiling. Her eyes lit up as she nodded eagerly.

"Girls you all look absolutely stunning" Esme gushed. Carlisle nodded in agreement.

"Take care of yourselves" They laughed as did we. We left and got into Rosalie's red BMW. I cranked the radio on and Paramore Ignorance came on. I turned the music up full and we sang along laughing.

If I'm a bad person, you don't like me
Well I guess I'll make my own way
It's a circle
A mean cycle
I can't excite you anymore
Where's your gavel? Your jury?
What's my offense this time?
You're not a judge but if you're gonna judge me
Well sentence me to another life

Don't wanna hear your sad songs
I don't wanna feel your pain
When you swear it's all my fault
Cause you know we're not the same(no)
We're not the same(no)
Oh we're not the same
Yeah the friends who stuck together
We wrote our names in blood
But I guess you can't accept that the change is good(hey)
It's good(hey)
It's good

Well you treat me just like another stranger
Well it's nice to meet you sir
I guess I'll go
I best be on my way out
You treat me just like another stranger
Well it's nice to meet you sir
I guess I'll go
I best be on my way out

Ignorance is your new best friend
Ignorance is your new best friend

This is the best thing that could've happened
Any longer and I wouldn't have made it
It's not a war no, it's not a rapture
I'm just a person but you can't take it
The same tricks that, that once fooled me
They won't get you anywhere
I'm not the same kid from your memory
Well now I can fend for myself

Don't wanna hear your sad songs
I don't wanna feel your pain
When you swear it's all my fault
Cause you know we're not the same(no)
We're not the same(no)
Oh we're not the same
Yeah we used to stick together
We wrote our names in blood
But I guess you can't accept that the change is good(hey)
It's good(hey)
It's good

Well you treat me just like another stranger
Well it's nice to meet you sir
I guess I'll go
I best be on my way out
You treat me just like another stranger
Well it's nice to meet you sir
I guess I'll go
I best be on my way out

Ignorance is your new best friend
Ignorance is your new best friend
Ignorance is your new best friend
Ignorance is your new best friend

Well you treat me just like another stranger
Well it's nice to meet you sir
I guess I'll go
I best be on my way out
You treat me just like another stranger
Well it's nice to meet you sir
I guess I'll go
I best be on my way out

We pulled up at the club. Music was blasting as the doors were wide open. It was purple, luminous lights making everyone look purple and in big bold letters were the word Twilight. Queues of hundreds of people lined up outside waiting to get in. We will never get in! Alice walked up to the burly bouncer. She motioned for him to bend down so she could yell in his ear. He looked over at us his eyes slightly unfocused. He grinned lazily and nodded. We squealed as he let us in. The soft purple light basked us.

"Bella" came a shocked voice. I spun around to see Edward. I smiled at him then caught sight of who was hanging off his arm…

A/N Oohh ! So how do you think it is? So everyone I have 2 NEW stories. I would really appreciate if you could read and review them. Here they are :

Tell me why

16 year old Alice Brandon can see the future. One day her parents decide enough is enough and sent her to an insane asylum. She is abused on a daily basis. Will she be able to make it out alive? Or will getting out be more fatal than being inside! R Rx

Looking up x

All Victoria's life, it had been endless hell. Abused and unloved she goes about her daily life going to desperate measures to protect her secret. James the new boy finds out, but is it too late? Can she be saved at all? R R xx

That chapter was really long!! :O It took my A-G-E-S to write this. Just so you know, its 05:38 in the morning. This is the second night this week that I have went without sleep to get this chapter finished. So the competition has closed and I'm glad to say horseluvr007 won!! Wooo! So sorry I haven't updated in a while, new stories and such! I would mean so much if you could let me know what you think of them! Everyone should check out the outfits on my profile!! They're so beautiful! Erm, so please read and review. And also review my other stories!! Love you all !! xxxxx

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