Okay, I think its safe to say that I finally reached over 100 REVIEWS! Thank you so much! But seriously, did any 13 year old writer get a story that has 100 reviews or more? I'm curious! I'm like the youngest writer ever and I got 114 reviews! Its crazy! But thank you guys! You're all heroes in my book!
Also, I need to thank Nerdius Racoonus for requesting the event. which was about last year, And this event was stuck in my head from then till now. It was so good, I couldn't turn it down! So thank you, Nerdius! I owe you one! When you see him, give him a pack of virtual partyrings for me, yeah?
Okay, I'm such in a good mood that I want to reply to all of the reviews! This could take a while so if you want to skip to the story, go ahead!
Bearvalley3365 (Chapters 1 to 13):...hehe...right, how am I gonna reply to all of your reviews?...I got it!
Chapter 1: Panda bear? What?
Chapter 2: Oh, err...dammit! I forgot to take the Oc submission down! I'm not accepting Oc's yet unfortunately, but I will at the very last season, when I'll be saying: "Do you want your Oc to appear in these shows? Well, you can either be in a triangle or present!" Or something like that, but for the meantime, I'm not accepting it yet.
Chapter 3: Uhh, does this face says that I care?..well, you can't see it cuz I'm on fanfiction, but I don't really care, go complain to SEGA!
Chapter 4: Okay!
Chapter 6: like I said in chapter 2, he'll have to wait.
Chapter 7: please scroll up to chappie 2 for reason.
Chapter 8: Chappie 2.
Chapter 9: Okay!
Chapter 10: Thanks for a season 2 request!
Chapter 11: Thanks!
Chapter 12: Thanks!
Chapter 13: Thanks!
Moving on!
The Shadows rider: pfft! Of course I'm not dead! H.S.H never dies! Cheat, huh? Cheat as in...cheating in the game show? Well, he's like the presenter so anything he says, goes! Halarious right?
Shade the hedgehog01- Damn right! That's what you get if you bring the 'M' word in!
Savvy0417- hehe, yea. But you'll be amazed in round 3! I'm telling ya, a BIG twist will happen!
Guest- au contraire, fellow reviewer! All will be revealed in round 3! And I guess Sonic was startled by Blaze's triangle, yea. Seeing that it'll count as a triangle in season 2
Sonamyfangirl1234- Thanks, I'm glad you think so! All will be revealed in round 3! So don't worry!
Dust the Hedgehog- YAY! Your reading this story!...I know right?
Waveandcipher: I'm pretty sure noone's going to start a fanwar, I always try to view each side of the opponents. So therefore, no fanwars for HALF A YEAR! WHOO! And if they start a fanwar...*cracks neck and knuckles* I'll be the one to finish it, once and for all!
Stay awesome! ;)
One4sonic: WHOA! This is one angry reviewer! Okay, first off, CALM DOWN! Second, C'mon! I'm not THAT harsh to Sonic! Just stay tuned for round 3! Third, kill me?..hehe, that won't be possible!
Thunder Croft: heh, long time no reply FFN BF! N'awww thanks! I'm getting a lot of angry reviews especially the reply above me about Sonic losing and my updating time, so you're the first to say that you're not killing me ^_^ and i know, 114 REVIEWS, BABY! WHOO HOO! I must be the first 13 yr old on this site to have a story that has over 100 reviews, which makes me hesitate a bit...OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD i cant stop smiling !
and the quiz idea was in the back of my brain. i actually got the idea by a poll i done last year or so. well...he was trying to say something that was the opposite of what he said in Japanese at the end. ;) kinda gives you a clue at what the twist will be.
Stay awesomely awesome, ma compadre! ;)
SilverDawn97531: WHOOP! GO SHADOW, ITS UR BIRTHDAY! GO SHADOW! GO SHADOW! GO SHADOW!
At least I responded to these reviews positively!
Anyhoo, the triangle that everyone had been waiting for is finally here! so enjoy!
-H.S.H-
It was a bigger audience than before, but this wasn't their usual stadium, this was a athletic stadium, which hosts the final battle of the triangle known as Crailsmo.
Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, and Shadow were at the commentators box. Somehow, the rest of the gang were here, but they were officials in this event. "What's going on, Mobius? Sonic the Hedgehog here! Commentating on our first ever Chaolympics!"
The massive audience cheered!
"Its very much like the olymipcs, but with the chaos and its owners participating instead! Here commentating with me is the red headed echidna known as Knuckles! Our dark shaded hedgehog: Shadow! And the fox that the two girls are fighting for: Tails!"
They all waved, except for Shadow.
"Right! I don't wanna waste anymore time for this, as I am very excited about this! So let's start introducing the participants!" The audience made as much noise as possible as the opponents: Cream and Cosmo, came out and met the audience with smiles on their faces. Cream was dressed in her free riders clothes, while Cosmo wore a shorter version of her green dress, just above her knees, a sporty green headband and green and white sneakers. Also, their trained chaos were on their shoulders.
"They look action-packed and kicking with excitement to pwn each other's faces in!"
"Indeed they do, Sonic! I can't wait for the events that are gonna take place."
"Me neither!"
When the two competitors arrived at the middle of the open stadium, they faced each other, staring daggers. Sonic dashed from the box, stepped in and separated them both.
"Right! May I remind you of the rules: No swearing, no fighting, try your best, never give up and don't use steroids on chaos OR yourselves. Understood? Now shake hands! And may the best girl win!" They shook hands and what-not. The massive audience cheered once more. "Let the games begin!" A big gong was heard, signaling that the chaolympics has begun. The audience cheered louder.
Meanwhile, Sonic returned to the commenting box with his comrades. "This is going to be good..."
"You've been saying that lots of times, Sonic."
"I know but, this could be our most breathtaking episode yet! What do you think, Shadow?"
Shadow said nothing, just gave Sonic a cold stare.
"...Okay? What do ya think, lil buddy?"
"Errm...this should be interesting. Consisting that we have our first ever chaolympics, where the chaos and their owners compete in a series of events. Different from others, and yet, so very eye-catching to watch."
"Some big, uptight words from ya, Tails. Good answer!"
Then, the camera switched to the 100m platform, which their first event: 100m dash, takes place. The person in charge, was the chaotix's very own Espio the Chameleon. The two girls were at the track, both ready and pouncing to win, and both facing the end, and at each other, in a dark way.
"On your marks!" Yelled the purple chameleon, as Cream and Cosmo both took their marks. The audience were dead silent to see this.
"Set..." He raised the gun in the air, the audience leaned from their seats. In just three seconds, Espio fired the gun, and they were off! The audience cheered them on, so did the Sonic team.
"And off they go!..and a nice start too!" Knuckles commented.
They were already quarter-way from the finish line, with Cosmo at the lead.
"Cosmo has got a good distance from Cream, BUT LOOK AT THIS! CREAM'S COMING UP FAST!"
Cream only caught on Cosmo half-way, and she was slowly passing her, the audience cheered loudly!
"Its back and forth towards the finish! Who's gonna win?!"
Luckily, with only 25m to go, Cream successfully passed her, with a clear photo finish at the finish. The crowd cheered loudly.
"And Cream wins it! Wow! She can run like a rabbit, and sting like a chao!" Knuckles cried as Sonic and Tails both fell out of their chairs due to laughter.
"Seriously, Knux?!" A few seconds later, Sonic crawled back to his seat, still chuckling, though, he continued. "A awesome-ly awesome first event, ladies and gentlehogs! A great lift-off from the start, Cosmo looked like she was gonna pwn this event, but oh boy! Was she SO wrong! Out of nowhere, Cream dashed past her, leaving her to choke in the dust! Thus, declaring Cream's victory! So well done to the two competitors!"
"Right! One down, about three events to go! Including the chao events! And epic final event: chao and master vs. chao and master!"
"In the meantime, let's take a look at the event board." A digital table appeared, showing the acquired events:
Day 1:
100m dash (Done) Long jump (Masters only), high jump (Masters only) 2x200 relay, (Chaos and Masters) and Chao put (Chaos and Masters)
Day 2:
Sycronized diving, (Chaos and masters) Fencing, (Masters only) freestyle swimming (undecided), trampoline(undecided), and karate.(Undecided)
Day 3:
Mega trilathon (which includes: Extreme gear racing, one mile marathon and relay to the stadium.)
Then, the camera traced back to the group, "Three days of competition, drama and fighting! I can't wait!"
" Looks like the next event is ready! Let's take a lookie!"
With that, the camera scanned to the next event which was long jump. Since Cream won the first event, she went first.
The crowd clapped in rythm, when It got gradually faster, she was off. Coming to the board quite fast, she leapt off. She landed over the '8 metre' mark, and the crowd went wild!
"Whoa- hoa! What a jump! She's definitely gonna win this. I don't know about you guys, but I'm rooting for Cream. GO CREAM!"
"Don't take judgements, Sonic." Knuckles butted in. "I still think that Cosmo can STILL win this competition! What about you Shadow?"
"Hmph, undecided!" Shadow scowled.
"Okay? And we can't go to Tails, since he's the main boy in the middle."
"We just got a update on the Chao race, it looks like Cosmo's chao have won! What a coincidence!"
"I've been observing the race." Shadow began to speak. "Cheese was right in the lead, but a powerful force went past it. I think it was Cosmic, and that's how it won."
"So...Cosmic is Cosmo's chao?" Sonic asked as Shadow facepalmed himself.
"Let's just...go to the long jump event, before I kill someone."
So, the camera turned to the long jump event again. This time, It was Cosmo's turn. The crowd clapped in rthymn again. As it gradually got faster, Cosmo was off. Coming at the board as fast as she could, she leapt off of it. Because of her ability to glide, she slowly flyed over the 8 metre mark, too.
"Wow! That might be longer than Cream's jump!"
"Don't make judgements, Knuckles. Don't ya think that's cheating?"
"Not in the Chaolympics, they aren't!"
Then, they showed a digital scoreboard on the screen. Cream jumped 8.32 metres, and Cosmo jumped 8.34 metres. About 2cm longer than Cream's.
Afterwards, they switched back to Sonic and the rest.
"Aww...what a dissapointment."
"HA!" Knuckles rubbed it all over his face, while Sonic rolled his eyes angrily.
"Right, remind me to slap you, Knuckles!" Sonic decided to continue after threatening Knuckles. "Second attempt of the long jump, ladies and gentle-hogs! Let's take a lookie!"
*30 minutes later...*
"And we are at our third and final attempt of the long jump, ladies and gents of Mobius! This will definetly effect the scoreboard. As Cream soared to a whopping 8.85 meters-"
Knux butts in. "And Cosmo floated gently down to a hedgehog- punching: 8.86 meters!" Then, Sonic pushes him away from the mic and spoke; "Well, let's take a lookie!"
So the camera switched to the event, one last time. The crowd clapped in rythym once again. When It got gradually faster, she was off. Coming to the board faster than before, she leapt off. She landed over the extrodinary '9 metre' mark, and the crowd went wilder! Sonic and the others were surprised.
"Sweet Mobius...SHE BROKE THE MOBIAN WORLD RECORD!" The whole stadium were ballisticly cheering.
"...To tell you the truth, that was pretty impressing," Tails finally commented on something. "If she was the real olympics, she could've broken the world record!"
"Okay! Don't forget we still have one more contesant left!" Knuckles exclaimed annoyingly.
"Although we have a straight- up winner...I hate to say this but, Knux is right. We still have one contestant left."
"Ha! Damn right I am! I'm always right!"
"Ha, ha, ha! I beg to differ,"
While they were arguing, Shadow took over the mic; "While these pathetic excuses of 'men' are arguing, I'm gonna take over for a while; for those people who are frightened enough to know my name, I'm Shadow. Shadow the Hedgehog. I'm the world's ultimate life form... 'Nuff said. Let's look at the last competetor's jump."
So the camera switched to the event, for the VERY last time. The crowd clapped in rythym once again. When It got gradually faster, she was off. Arriving at the board at her very best attempt, she leapt off. She landed under the 9 metre mark. The crowd hollered.
"Ooh! Just under the 9 metre mark! That proves that the winner of this epic event was, Cream the rabbit!" The whole stadium cheered, as Shadow announced the winner. A few moments later, Sonic returned to the mic: "Okay...we're gonna take a break here, mobius! Join us after the commercials for the next event! And I'll tell you now: a world full of epicness will be there so don't miss it! And I'll see ya later!"
*After the commercials..*
"Welcome back Mobius, to Sonic Couple Battles! Time for a new event to take place!"
"Exactumundo! A new event called chaoput. Chao's and shotput combined! Simple as that, you just throw your 455g chao as far as you can. Don't worry, they won't splatter onto the floor..."
"...Seriously, Knux was that supposed to be a joke?"
"No, I was just simply explaining that-"
"Nevermind." With that, the camera switched to the field event: chaoput.
Since Cream won the first round, she went first. She turned back and reeled her feet back. Cheese was at her neck, in her hand.
"Hmm...Cream's going for the glide method, I think." Sonic commented
Cream is now facing backwards, when she thought it was the right time, she rotated 180 degrees across the circle, and then tossing the chao onto the field.
"Whoa! That's a good first throw from her!"
Cheese landed safely onto the grass, Charmy flew on the field and measured how far Cream threw Cheese. He signalled to Vector that it was in.
"It's in!" Sonic exclaimed. "We'll know the distance shortly after Cosmo's turn,"
A few minutes later, Cosmo appeared in the circle, with her chao. She faces the rear, and begins to spin on the ball of her left foot. She then comes around and faces the front of the circle and drives the right foot into the middle of the circle. Finally, she reaches for the front of the circle with the left foot, twisting her hips and shoulders like in the glide, and puts the shot.
Her chao rocketed out of the sky, and safely onto the grass. Once again, Charmy flew out on the field and measured the distance, he signalled to Vector that it was in. Part of the stadium cheered for her.
"A very good first attempt from the seedrian!" Knuckles complimented. "Okay, we think we got the scores now. Cream got 9.81m, while Cosmo got 9.69m!" Part of the stadium cheered again. "That has been a good first round! I can't wait to hear the next round!"
*2 rounds later...*
"Okay Mobius, this is the time you've been waiting for! For round 3, Cream got 9.81m...while Cosmo got 9.82m! I think we've got a clear winner here! And her name is Cosmo!" Once again, part of the stadium cheered loudly and proudly. Sonic interruptly butted in.
"Well, I think we're ready for the final event! Whaddya say, Mobius?!" Then, the whole stadium went wild and replied: YEAH! "Heh...then let's get that event on the road!"
*...25 minutes later...*
"Right! We are on that final event, ladies and gentle-hogs! The 2x200 relay! Chao and master vs. Chao and master! Any words from my little bro?"
"Err...its been a really good day so far, so much action and adrenaline has occurred, this might be a tough one!"
"Always detailed and classy with his answers; rock on, Tails!"
"Will do!"
"Okay! Without further ado, here is the final event!"
The camera switched to the track again, Cream and Cosmo were at the starting line, their chaos were halfway. Espio was at the side of the starting line.
"On your marks!" Yelled Espio again, the girls obeyed and got on their respectful places, their heads were down! "Set..." They looked up at the curved track.
BAP!
"And off they go for their final event!" Knuckles exclaimed.
"Y'know, they need to take it easy, its 200m! fast jogging is requied for this event, they won't even end up at the end of the 200m." Sonic advised them.
"Its not one of your Sonic sez montages, Sonic! So stop advising them!" Knuckles bellowed at him.
"You asked for it Knuckles! You want Sonic sez, you got it!...Kids, there's nothing more cool than being hugged by someone ya like..."
A big scream was heard from the rest of the commentors, but it was muted.
Anyhoo, the two girls already passed 100m, Cream was in the lead, but it looks like she was getting tired.
"Uh oh! Cream does not look good!" After Sonic finished his 30 second speech about 'touching', he payed more attention to what was going on.
But things went worse! Cream was so tired, that her face became a bit red, as a advantage, Cosmo took the lead. Half of the stadium cheered for her as she passed Cream.
"And as a punishment, Cosmo takes the lead! But luckily, we're at the end of their 200m!"
As the two competetors ran nearer to their chaos, they reached out their batons. Cosmo handed her baton to her chao first. Cream came a few seconds after.
"And off the chao's go!" Knuckles exclaimed
*100m later...*
"Just 100m to go! And with Cosmo's chao in the lead, and a emerging gap, there is no way that Cheese can catch up in that time!"
Knuckles was SO wrong! Cheese managed to catch up in 50m; in the remainding 50m it was a battle for first place!
"Ha! Knux, you are so wrong! Cheese is coming up fast! The chao might be able to win this,"
It has been back and forth the last 25m or so, but luckily, it looks like Cheese finished first by a hair.
"Ladies and gents of Mobius! I have never seen this before, and I probably won't think that I'll see it again! What a fantastic victory!" Sonic exclaimed in excitement
"It was such a close race! We thought Cream was gonna lose it, but OMG we were SO wrong! Congratulations to both competetors!" Knuckles commented
"Alright! The scores will be added at the end of the final set of events. So...we have come to the end of the show ladies and gents of Mobius! Join us next time for the next set of events coming soon! There's only about 5 episodes left including the rewind special episode! Season 2 will be out in december! Don't miss the remainding 5 episodes and the new season 2! This is world famous hero: Sonic the Hedgehog, signing off! See ya later!"
The show ended with the whole stadium cheering their heads off.
Right! I'm DONE! I've been working on this for a month, finding out that I haven't finished it yet, I decided to do that! Oh well, quick updates rule!
Also, regarding to season 2, I'm gonna add more archie characters, so watch out for some bad guys!
And that's all I have to say!...oh, and 2 WEEKS TO GO BEFORE WE BREAK UP! WHOO! Can't wait for my summer of awesomeness to happen!...needed to get that out of my system..
Catch y'all on the flipside, stay awesome heroes, and EAT PARTYRINGS!