this is just me having a rant, this will have no effect on the story
i have a review that says this, "don't you think its going a little fast, plus you seriously need a beta, I
hope you start putting more effort into your story"
here's my answer since there's no reply link on this one:
no i don't think its going to fast i hate stories that whine on and on about useless details that i really dont care about, and remember this is the first time i've written anything, i have a beta and i really want to know why people are so fussy over grammer, i mean really there is one storie on this website somewhere (i've read it) written completey in txt talk, there are a few that have alot off l33t speak in them, there is also the fact i not a writer i do not get paid to write stories so i will no go over it 5/6 times to make sure i have all my commers in the right places. now about this "more effort" thing let me break my life down for you hmm 8:45 every morning i head out to college i get back in the house at 3:30, 5 days a week, now along with homework i have my band, that takes alot of time, plus i'm learning my third instrument now aswell as learning to drive, i'm also starting a solo music project where i plan to play all the drums guitar keyboard and vocals on my own, ambitious? yes, fun? yes, hard work? hell yeah. so thats college and music, i play rugby 3 times a week and football once, ontop of this i enjoy my photography so i make time for that, and no not just taking picture i procees my own films to and when i go on a big shoot i cant shoot up to 5 films that can take an entire weekend to print, i also skate and mountain bike, but thats not all i actually do have a social life and a girlfriend as well as pets and other things i need to take care of, so tell me when i have the time to "put more effort" into my story, i really don't mind a bad review they help you know where your going wrong, this review was pointless and gave me no feedback at all, i've also had a few pm's telling me im "rude" for not answering my reviews, in all honesty i do not answer every review, infact i answer very few, i am not going to answer a review that simply says "great chapter, update soon", i will answer a review that gives an opinion that i diagree about or feel i'd like to discuss, i will answer a review that asks me a question and i will answer a review that finds a mistake in my story.
now i've also had one message that said something about nym already using magic in the park, yeah she conjured a blacket, that could be done discreetly, making harry glow however could not, i appologise for not answering that one but i though a few people might want an answer to that so i put it here