Sakura- I have over 2000 views, that was a while ago. Right now I'm hovering around 11500 views. Not reviews….
Sorry, I really wanted to reply to that Guest comment.
Tobias POV: At around 2 PM people started arriving for Emily's party. We had a very long guest list that included our friends and initiates. Here's the guest list:
Zeke
Shauna
Uriah
Marlene
Lynn
Christina
Will
Jess
Isabel
Nora (an older initiate, from my class)
Nina (Nora's twin sister)
Caleb
Susan
Rose
And more….
It took Tris a while to decide if she'd invite Christina, in the end, she invited her, even if it was out of kindness. As people arrived, the table of presents grew massive, with over 25 presents just for Emily. People also brought gifts for the triplets, because Tris hadn't had a baby shower, we let them give presents now. As the last guest trickled in, Tris walked in holding Emily. I had put the triplets in the playpen so people could come and look at them and I could watch them.
"Thank you all for coming, now, let's get started with the party games!" Tris said. First up was pin-the-cherry-on-the-cupcake. Everyone tried, and Rose ended up winning, getting it right on the top of the cupcake. Afterwards, everyone had a slice of pizza and some fruit, and then we had cake. Finally, it was time for presents. Emily sat in the center of the floor, a mountain of presents around her. The first present she opened was wrapped in pink-and-black striped wrapping paper. Inside there was a card, and a baby doll. That was from Zeke & Shauna. After Emily had opened all the presents, she decided they were all amazing. Overall, the party was a successs.
I'm so sorry my chapters have been so short, I don't know what to do in them! Please comment suggestions of events that should occur so I can start uploading more creative and longer chapters.
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