He he. I got 10 reviews. Maybe more I don't know.
Anyways 132 reviews is off the chain!
Lol.
The question of the day is..
Why does Tanya want to kill Edward?
Simple, she's a jealous whore. Lol.
In my story she is anyway.
I like some of your idea's where Charlie gets hurt to.
I might throw that in there to make it longer.
But I give you chapter 14.
Sorry if you don't like that Bella's confused its all apart of the plot.
Chapter 14
Help
EPV
Edward! Your so stupid! How could you ever think that meant anything? You killed her, just because someone kisses you doesn't mean they like you! Now things are going to be weird.
those thoughts ran through my mind all night long. Nothing could make me relax, I felt so stupid, and foolish for ever thinking last night meant anything.
Bella was just trying, to "Prove a point" to prove I could do better then Tanya. I never wanted Tanya in the first place! And for the first time everything began to make sense.
I liked Bella from the first moment I saw her. Everything about her. If I hadn't of been the selfish creature I was, we could have gotten to know each other on better terms, we could have tried the whole relationship thing. Maybe.
To late for that Edward, that ship has sailed. I laid there, tossing a base ball in the air lightly. Its all I had been doing since last night.
It was amazing, there's no way she didn't feel SOMETHING!
But, I had no way of knowing. Its not like I could look into her thoughts, I scoffed. I got up and was going to get changed when my cellphone went off.
"Hello?" I asked
"Edward? Its Tanya, listen, I need your help! Vampire hunters have got me, and are threatening to kill me!" she sobbed.
"Calm down, where are you?" are you kidding me? Vampire hunters? I shook m head in disbelief when I looked out the window to see snow falling.
"Edward, they want you to come, I don't know why, but they are going to kill me if you don't please Edward! I'm in the woods somewhere. Try to find me!" and the line went dead.
Help Tanya? I can't just leave her, it would upset Carlisle, she was his friend. But why me? I thought, but without anymore questions I was out there picking up her scent.
I walked around the woods, sniffing, listening, doing anything I could to locate her. I finally picked up on some unfamiliar vampires scent, so I followed it. I was running through the woods, with my blue jeans, and a black long sleeved muscle shirt, with a gray vest. I was running fast, I knew I was getting close to the scents, I was beginning to pick up on they're thoughts.
I came to a clearing, but I saw nothing. I looked around, keeping my guard up.
"Tanya! Where are you!" I shouted.
I felt a tap on my shoulder, I turned quickly to see Tanya laughing.
"What are you doing?" I asked, I was getting angry.
"I'm just getting rid of some garbage." she smiled, as she snapped her finger.
Before I knew it, three vampires were beating me to death. I tried to run, but one of them had me paralyzed.
What the hell? I can't move! I thought.
They were slinging me around, I heard Tanya laughing. I couldn't pass out, I just had to stay there paralyzed while I listened, watched and felt my death sentence.
There's no escaping it! I shouted mentally.
"Why don't you have Bella save you?" Tanya scoffed.
"Tell her to avenge you." I heard the man shout.
I franticly looked around, the pain was worse then when I was changed.
"Ugh." I shouted as I was released from they're hold, I attempted to get up, but failed to do so, my body was still numb.
"Is there anything you want to say to me?" Tanya squatted down to look me in the eye.
"Yeah, burn in hell." my voice strained.
"Finish him." she said in disgust as she walked away from me.
I love you Bella, and I'm sorry for everything was all I could think. As they began the tortures again.
Well, I know its short, but its got a lot in there.
Any who shooting for ten reviews again.
I hope you like it.
A/N--I had to make up a power; to stop Edward, which was the paralyses, that Victoria uses on him.
And they are VAMPIRES that HUNT VAMPIRES lol.
Just so theres no confusion there.
Tanya's an evil biatch in this story okay. I don't like Tanya at all.
