chapter 14 hell has no fury like a mother's pain
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-back with masked Hinami -
- the "Boss" was enjoying torturing masked Hinami, he broke part of her clothing in an atempt to humiliate her, then took her ninja pouch and threw it to the other side of the room and began beating her again and again in the stomach and the face, to the point that part of the mask broke of and you could see her bleeding through the mouth, and the stomach was starting to turn purple due to all the hits she was recieving -
Boss= whats wrong? was that all you had? i expected more.
- she chuckled at his questions -
Boss= and what is so funny?
masked Hinami= you are... *cough* cough* going to regret... *cough* messing with my family.
- he didnt like her attitude and then took a kunai and stabed her on the side of the stomach, making hinami yell loudly in pain and coughing up blood-
boss= and who is gona stop me?
voice from behind him = I will!
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*chapter starts*
- there stood little hinami with a kunai in her hands and shaking while trying to be brave. while she stood there shaking he couldnt help but laugh at her weakness -
Boss= hahahahaha thats a good one, a little runt like you is gona defeat me?
little hinami= d...ont make fun of me!
Boss= i think its time you learn that no one is going to save you.
little hinami= you're wrong papa will come and save me.
boss= is that so? then why dont you call for your papa? and see how no one is coming.
- filled with tears hinami yells paaaapaaaa!, and then with a yellow flash both naruto and hinata showed up behind little hinami -
Boss= whhha! what is this? who the hell are you two?
- little hinami looks back and smiles -
little hinami= its mommy and papa!
hinata= hinami!
-hinata kneels down and grabs her daughter in a big hug, while naruto kept an eye on the guy infront of him -
hinata= hinami are you hurt?
little hinami= no mommy im not hurt *sob*.
naruto= hinami where is the person who was helping you escape?
little hinami= s..she - points at the direction of where the enemy is-
- naruto looks at the guy infront of him and notices the a hand on the back of him, the guy was a pretty big guy so he was blocking the view of masked hinami , at least from the position that naruto was standing -
Boss= oh are you refering to this weakling?
-he stands to the side wich lets everyone see masked hinami hanged on the wall like a prisoner and they see how she is all beaten up and bleeding badly with her head down. This angers naruto turning his eyes kyuby red and hinata activating her byakugan-
naruto= you're going to pay for this!
Boss= i like to see you try, no one can beat me "komei the stone demon!"
naruto= you dont know who you are messing with pal!, no one hurts my family and gets to live.
komei= bring it on then!
-komei lunches towards naruto both ready to punch each other but when they collide, komei turns into stone and disapears -
naruto= where did that coward go!?
- naruto chases after him using his ability so sense chakara to seek komei out, while hinata helps out masked hinami by getting her out of the inprisoment and trying to heal her wound close to the the stomach with the little medical jutsu she had learned during the years after she had minami -
hinata= come on hang in there!
- masked hinami grunted a bit before speaking -
masked hinami=i..its ok, you *cough* dont have to...worry about me.
hinata= what are you saying of course im going to worry about you!
masked hinami=thank you but...i *cough* dont have much time left anyway.
hinata= dont talk like that your gona make it throught this!
- masked hinami smiles throught the crack of the mask and reaches with her hand to hinata's cheek, while hinata grabs it with one of her hand and sheds tears -
masked hinami= thank you for *cough* ..for always loving me, even if our time was short, i loved every moment of it.
hinata= please you...you cant leave us..*sob*.
-masked hinami turns her head a bit and talks to little hinami -
masked hinami= little hinami, *cough* *cough* be a good girl and and grow big and strong like your mommy and papa so you can always protect them
little hinami=*sob* yes mam.
-she looks back at hinata with what little strength she has left with a look that says she wants to say something that little hinami cant hear, so hinata covered little hinamis ears and masked hinami spoke with just enough voice so only hinata could hear her -
masked hinami= tell papa that i *cough* *cough* love him and our whole family, and that...i...le..ft...ha..p...py...
-masked hinami closed her eyes, with the last of her strenght gone she stoped moving, hinata grabed her and hold her tight as she cried her eyes out, little hinami was crying to, as hinata was holding her, masked hinami body started to disapear into small lights from her feet and going up untill her whole body disapeard leaving only the half broken mask on the floor and hinata staring at the spot where her daughter from a diferent time died infront of her eyes and disapeared -
- after a about a minute or so hinata stood up with her byakugan active and eyes full of tears -
hinata= hinami stay here, that man is going to pay, very dearly.
-she made a clone to stay with little hinami then turn and left using her byakugan to determine where naruto and komei where fighting, little hinami had grabed the mask and hold it close to her, even thought she didnt know the person who disapear realy was, she still was her savior and she wanted to have something to remember her by -
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-with naruto and komei -
- naruto and komei where fighting in a more open room and had wrecked up the place, naruto had gotten a few hits in but komei was good at evading attacks with his earth style, naruto could have finish things with a powerful jutsu but he did not want to risk having a cave in especially with his daughters still in it, the battle continued and at some point hinata had found them and jumped in with a lion fist which caught komei by surprise and made him fly thought a wall -
naruto= hinata? why are you here? why aren't you with our daughters?
- hinata remained silent for a few seconds, which made naruto concerned -
Naruto= hinata talk to me.
Hinata=... naruto hand me one of your special kunais and then leave a shadow clone nearby and get hinami out of this cave.
-naruto noticed she only mention one of the hinami's and was about to ask about it but before he could make a sentence she looked back at him with face that scared him like never before, her byakugan was active and the anger that was shown in her face was so scary that he wonder if that was really his beloved hinata, he had never in his entire life seen her this mad not even that time that she was saving her favorite cinnamon bun for lunch and naruto had eaten it without asking, she was so mad she chased him around the village which made people wonder what could the hokage had done to make his wife so mad she chased him around the village -
hinata= naruto don't make me repeat myself...
- naruto did not hesitate a second longer and did as was told, he gaver her his special kunai and left a shadow clone close by as she had ordered and went to pick up hinami, while he left komei showed up again -
komei= that was a cheap shot... hmm where that other guy go?
hinata= he will no longer be your opponent, I will!
-komei noticed the anger in her eyes, although they where scary he did not mind he thought all woman were weak in the end -
komei= now that's a look I haven't seen in some time, ooohhh sooo scary the big bad girl is going to fight me.
-komei mocking hinata only angered her more and she went on the offensive. She strikes him with her juken strikes which didn't have much effect due to his rock armor jutsu he kept using, both of them kept fighting for a while but not really getting anywhere, he was getting a few hits on her but nothing that could kill her, and he kept using his jutsu to merge with the surrounding stones to avoid hinata' s attacks. hinata had just about enough of his coward retreats she then went to the middle of the room and performed her 8 trigram 64 palm guard, however instead of just using her defense she actually had sended several kunais all around the room with explosion tags which exploded and the room got debris going in all direction but she was being protected by her defense jutsu, when there were no more debri flying around she stoped her jutsu and looked for komei with her byakugan, while komei was not hurt it did temporary brake his armor, hinata had spoted him and did not waste a second to strike his arm with her gentle fist, his arms now immobilized he could not do his merge jutsu anymore, he did however try to striker her with his legs but she evaded and made a round kick to his stomach which made him walk backwards to a wall gasping for air, but she did not let him regain his breath she did a new technique she had been developing that made her lion fist more useful by being frown and pinning someone to a wall or a floor, in this case a wall, she pined his arms to the wall using her lion fist technique , she took this chance to block his tenketsu points on his legs to disable them -
hinata= now that I have finally got you in one place, im going to teach a valuable lesson that will make you regret ever messing with my family.
komei= grrr you little bitch, you think you are all high and mighty cause your a hyuga? don't make me laugh. there is nothing you can do to me that would make me regret anything.
hinata= we will see how long you last with this jutsu.
-hinata then concentrated her lion fist on her right hand however it wasn't colored blue it was a very dark blue almost the color black -
hinata= you should be honored, this will be the first human attempt, this jutsu is so deadly my own husband forbid me from ever using it or teaching it to anyone.
-hinata strikes one of his shoulder tenketsu points and waits a few seconds -
komei= well... well look at that, your little jutsu does no...
-then the tenketsu point that was hit exploded and the pain he felt was like if he had been shot 10 times with a small gun on his shoulders -
komei= aaaaaaahhhhhhh your bitch! what did you do to me?!
hinata= simple, I overloaded your tenketsu point till it popped, you see the reason this jutsu was banned was not because it could kill someone, on the contrary, it will bring you so much pain you wish death came sooner.
- after her explanation hinata took her time using her jutsu on every single one of his tenketsu points making him suffer over and over again to the point he just wanted it to end, but she didn't stop, she wanted him to suffer for what he did -
hinata= so you still think woman are weak?
-blows up another tenketsu point making him feel even more pain -
hinata=well I think its almost time to end this with one final painfull humiliation.
-hinata used her jutsu on his private parts which as the rest of his body would explode however instead of touch his privates she simply put her jutsu close enough for it to take effect, the result being his entire private parts exploding within his pants putting him in even more pain and permanently making his private parts unusable, not that he would live to use it anyway. since she was done with her revenge, she called the shadow clone and informed him to tell her husband to come pick her up, the clone nodded and disappeared -
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- back with naruto after he left hinata to fight with komei -
- naruto when to pick up hinami and found her on the floor staring at the mask she was holding with hinata's clone nearby -
naruto= hinata im here to pick up hinami.
hinata clone =where is the other me?
naruto= she is taking care of that guy she order me to take hinami outside...where is...?
hinata clone= she is...gone..
naruto= what do you mean?
hinata clone= now is not the appropriate time - she moves her eyes pointing at little hinami who is holding the mask adult hinami was wearing -
naruto=... allright
- naruto picks up little hinami and makes their way out, after they had made their way out shortly after naruto got the clones memory and got the message from hinata, he left little hinami with hinatas clone and with one of his special kunais and then teleported to hinata -
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-back with hinata -
-naruto just arrived where he had left hinata, he noticed the debry everywhere and that hinata was standing with one of her hand holding her elbow looking at the man she killed, he slowly walked up to her -
naruto= hinata honey, are you ok?
-she then turns around and puts her hands and face on his chest and naruto closes his eyes and embraces her for a moment and caress her hair -
hinata= naruto
naruto= yes hinata?
hinata= please lets get out of here and destroy this place.
naruto= of course hinata.
-naruto then created 2 clones to help him do the rasenshuriken which he then threw to a wall and quickly teleported him and hinata out of that place and outside with little hinami. after they teleported to her a large explosion which shook the ground was heard, the base was completely destroyed, after the shacking stopped they made their way back to the village slowly, hinata did not speak a word all the way back, naruto wanted to ask what happened to maked hinami but he saw that his wife was not in the stable state of mind she needed time to process everything that happened. once they made it back to the village hinata took hinami to their house and naruto went to report what happened during the mission and to verify that all the kids made it back ok. after naruto was done doing his hokage duties he went home and looked for hinata who was in hinamis bed room sitting next to hinami who was sleeping after passing that horrible experience and she was caressing hinami's while staring in the distant. naruto then knocked on the door gently to not wake hinami but to get hinata's attention which she did and went to naruto and headed to the bed room -
naruto= hinata are you ok to talk now?
-taking a deep breath she agreed -
naruto= what happened to her?
- hinata told him everything, what she said before her death, how she died in her arms and that her body had mysteriously disappeared. he understood now the anger and pain she had at that moment, while it was a hinami from another time, she was technically still their daughter, but what puzzles him more is that her body just disappeared, he doesn't understand why, but regardless it was a very tiring day for everyone in the family so he tucked in his wife in bed and joined her in bed for some rest -
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- chapter end -
And there ends a another chapter. What will the uzumaki family do now? will they return to normal life like before adult hinami entered their life? will naruto or hinata investigate the matter further of how adult hinami body just disappeared or forget about it? find out on the next chapter!
sorry for the delays everyone, a lot of bad things had happened, a family member close to me died 3 weeks ago and I fell ill right after with high fever and bad throat plus had to go to work that way so its been 3 week and only now am I getting better. the scene where hinata tortures komei didn't quiete turn out as I wanted but honestly another reason why chapter got delayed cause I just couldn't find a good scene to make him suffer, im not to ok with what I wrote but o well other wise I still be stuck writing a better scene,