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Chapter 13: Oh no, Fang!
Max POV
Sam had pressed me against the wall, his hands holding my arms by my sides. "Come on let me have my fun, before I hand you over to the Director," he whispered in my ear.
"The Director?" I choked out, she's in prison, isn't she?
"She'll welcome me back with open arms when I give you to her."
I'd heard enough; I was about to knee him in the groin, when a black ball of feathers went crashing into him. Fang.
They both went crashing in to a bin. Fang was first to recover; he jumped on Sam and hit him again and again.
I came out of my trance of surprise, which Fang had put me in by coming zooming in like that, and realised he'd kill Sam if he didn't stop. I didn't care about Sam, he was an eraser, he deserved to die, but even though we'd all killed erasers before, I couldn't let Fang kill Sam. He had looked so normal, just a sweet, weak, normal human boy, it would be like murder. So I shouted, "Fang, STOP!" I would regret that act very very soon, but at the time I had no idea.
Fang went to hit him again but I grabbed his fist bringing him out of his rage. I saw anger and hurt in his eyes, but he quickly composed himself.
I pulled him up by his hand, which I still had hold of and said, "please Fang, don't turn into a killer and…er…thank you." I didn't know what to say or do so I turned to walk back down the alley when I realised he still had hold of my hand. I went to pull it away, but Fang held it tighter. I looked up at him to ask him what he was doing, but I didn't get that far.
He leant down and kissed me, wrapping his other hand round my waist, my other hand rested on his chest and I just went with the flow. His lips were soft nothing like Sam's, they were so much better, I could tell Fang was trying to tell me how worried he was in that kiss. I heard someone wolf whistle at the end of the alley, I felt my cheeks heat up and I pulled away, breathing hard, but still locked in his embrace.
"Max…" Fang whispered, then my heart stopped as a look of fear and pain fell across his face, he closed his eyes and fell onto me. I caught him and gently placed him on the floor. Oh my god what the…I gasped as I saw that his back was soaked in blood, my heart started up again twice as fast as before, like it was high from an adrenalin rush.
I swivelled round and saw Eraser Sam standing there swaying from side to side, he didn't look stable at all. I also noticed his hand/paw was covered in blood. Fang's blood?
I couldn't dwell on that now; I hit him as hard as I could in the face, then in the stomach. He tried to swing a punch at me, but he was slow, so I had plenty of time to block, twist his arm then push him against the wall.
He slumped down and was still.
I went back to Fang and picked him up bridal style, like he had done with me, many times before. Then I stretched out my wings, but I didn't stay around to watch the red pieces of material float to the floor, previously my t-shirt. I was already in the sky flying back to Mom's at hyper speed.
Yeah, maybe I should have taken him to the hospital, but I wasn't thinking straight, my best friend was in my arms drenched in blood for fucks sake! Anyway what was I supposed to tell the Doctors? My date tried to rape me, so I punched him, then he turned into a wolf man, before trying to eat me, when my best friend came to save me, but got stabbed by my date's claws? Yeah, because they'd believe that. So I just used my hyper speed to get to Mom's as quick as I could.
He was completely out of it and his heartbeat was getting fainter and slower every passing second. 'Please let him be all right, please' was the only thing going through my mind.
I landed in the back garden and as soon as my feet touched the ground I was running as fast as I could.
Nudge opened the door and said angrily, "Why… where… what the?" Her face went from angry to shocked to worry to terrified in about 2 seconds.
I ran straight past her towards the stairs. Ella appeared at the kitchen door, "Nudge… What the… Mom! Take him to my room," she said hurrying back into the kitchen screaming for Iggy.
I ran up the stairs and placed Fang on his stomach on Ella's bed. I then ripped off his shirt to see the damage and I gasped at Fang's wings. Each and every one of his beautiful black feathers were covered in blood, it was impossible to see where it was coming from, Ella's bedding was already red by Fang's sides and it wasn't because of paint.
My Mom came in with a first aid kit putting it next to Fang on Ella's bedside table. She gasped at what she saw.
Then she flipped him over and checked his pulse and things.
"Max…" Angel said nervously stepping through the door.
"No, go back downstairs. I don't want you to see it, none of you. Iggy you stay, Mom needs help."
"But…"
"No!" I shouted almost hysterically.
They scurried away looking terrified, I know I shouldn't have taken it out on them, but I was upset about Fang. I had to deal with him first, then worry about the flock.
"What should I do?" Iggy asked, he looked almost frightened. Was he scared of me?
I plopped down on the air bed, shrugged and looked at Mom doing compressions on Fang's lifeless form.
"Help me," Mom said, "you do compressions, and I'll give him the kiss of life, do compressions for fifteen seconds for two of my breaths."
"OK," Iggy said obviously understanding what she'd said.
She reached out and grabbed his hands, put them in the right place and said, "Start now, do it to the rhythm of your heart for fifteen seconds.
They started working to revive Fang.
I just sat there not believing what was happening.
He can't be dead, he said he wouldn't leave me, he can't go, he'll be all right he has to be. He's my solid rock, always indestructible nothing can take Fang away from the flock.
But deep down I knew there was no point, Fang had closed his eyes for the last time and never again would I get lost in their black depth.
He'd never look at me and smirk again; he'd never hug me and comfort me when the stress was too much for me again and he'd never just disappear in front of the flock again. We'd never be the flock again, because we simply weren't the flock without Angel's innocence or her creepy mind reading, Gazzy's smell, Nudge's words, Iggy's sexist remarks, my leaderly sarcasm or most of all without Fang's no emotion rock disappearing act.
The thing that made it worst was the fact that it was all my fault, if I'd never gone out with Sam we never would of even been there, if I'd never said we could go to the cinema Sam wouldn't of even asked me out, if I'd have been quicker, smarter, stronger, faster Fang would never of had to help me.
If, if, if.
If ITEX had never of made us we would be unaware of each other's existence.
ITEX, they did this to us: they stole our childhood; our home and now they'd stolen Fang.
I'm gonna kill Sam, then I'm gonna make sure all of the ITEX branches are fully stopped, the first one I'd check would be the school, then the institute.
They'd all pay for Fang's death I'd make sure of it and if I died trying then I would have finally paid the price for being weak, for making mistakes and for just being me.
But I'd make sure I took as many of those bastards as I could, down with me.
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