Look! I updated before the month was over! Haha! Ok now let's get serious! This is the chapter of the story I loved the most! To me it brought out the slightly twisted, nightmarish(?) part of my writing and it was so much fun to write so I hope you guys all hope it's good to! Review!
Hidan threw another pebble at the pond, and growled in frustration when it sank instead of hopping like he meant to make it. How could he be so…stupid?
He made himself look like an idiot and for what some stupid…
Girl? As he thought this he couldn't help but think that wasn't true. Hinata wasn't just an ordinary girl. She was sweet and caring and nothing like any other slut he had met, he couldn't even bear to put them in the same category. She always put others before herself, and never once regretted it. She could stand up for herself, and refused to say anything about anybody.
And he had let her slip through his fingers. He shouldn't have just stopped after one try. He should've begged on his knees and not given up until she simply gave in. He banged himself on the head and got up in a rush. He ran towards the skyscraper in a hurry and didn't stop, only thought, " I need her…now!"
And then he saw the ambulance, and he stopped in his tracks.
The sun was so warm, so warm on her face; she soaked it in, absorbing it. She looked around and saw a woman on the other side of the beach.
Mother? But her mother was dead, and she had been since Hanabi had been born. Where was she? She looked around, anxious to see this mysterious place where her mother was very alive.
It was a beach, and the sand was so soft between her toes, and she clenched them in, eager to feel it between her toes.
She looked over when she heard the ocean. She had always loved the ocean. She stared at it and gasped at its beauty. The waves looked exactly like it did in those pictures, the scenic ones father had always hung in his office.
She started to sit down but thought, " What about mother?" she looked over but she was gone…
"Mother?" Her mouth moved but no sound came out. Her fingers brushed over her mouth in wonder. Why couldn't she talk?
She screamed but still only silence.
She stood up hurriedly but was frozen in place. Her head moved of its own accord and she hurried to try and turn it the other way when she saw something she never wanted to.
It was Hidan, doing things with another woman, but it wasn't just another woman it was every woman who she had ever been envious of. It was every woman she had wished she were. The face of the woman never changed, but it was all of them.
Hinata grew even more desperate to escape this place when Hidan bent over the woman and covered her face with kisses. His lips didn't move but Hinata heard him and knew he wasn't talking to her,
"I love you." He said, looking at that woman like he had looked at Hinata, had looked at her everyday since they had met.
"No!" She screamed, only to again be met with silence. He bent even lower and started to kiss the woman.
"No! This wasn't supposed to happen! No!" She tried as hard as possible to move, to look away, anything so she wouldn't have to look at Hidan even kiss another woman.
"No!" This time she heard it loud and clear, only she wasn't on the beach anymore. She was in a room, a hospital room. Where was she?
Told it wasn't all like my normal writing! I don't know if it's because I felt like trying out this kind of writing or because I wrote this on Halloween but to me at least it seemed a lot more spooky? Review! please?
