Chapter Thirteen
Fighting Against Eradication
"You alright?" Piccolo's eyes drifted over towards the Saiyans, watching as each one scrunched their noses and shook their heads. Gohan's tail was eternally puffed out at the moment and his eyes looked wild and desperate. It was obvious that the Destron gas was affecting all three to a certain point.
"We'll be fine." Trunks grumbled as his nose twitched again. "But we'll need to go and find this machine quickly. I don't think any of us will last in this for much longer."
"We're almost there. Tough it out." The Namekian's eyes wondered over to the youngest of the four, watching those eyes flicker back and forth and the bristling tail lash behind him viciously. The boy would have to tough it out as well, there was no other choice.
"Hey! Look, right over there!" Goten pointed at the radio tower where a large red machine sat, four spouts spitting out the black gas in large amounts. "That's what we gotta destroy, right?" He questioned as they came to a stop from it about two yards away.
"I would assume so." Piccolo took a stance, giving his body enough time to prepare for an attack that would destroy that machine. "Let's get rid of it before anymore civilians suffer." He put his fingers to his forehead and concentrated, preparing the attack quickly.
Only to shout in anguish as a fist slammed into his stomach out of nowhere. "Now do you really think we would allow you to stop us from destroying this planet?" A smug tone stated as a familiar purple face formed in front of the Namekian. "I mean really, how foolish can you get?"
"Quite." Another voice stated as another body formed in front of the group of four. "We'll just have to show them the wrong of their ways." A smirk set upon a white face but the purple spheres on his body spoke of who he was.
"Let's go ahead and get our revenge then lads." A large green figure that Piccolo hadn't seen since they had killed him years ago. Goten and Trunks wouldn't know him at all, but Piccolo did.
"Agreed, we need to set them in their place once and for all." That face was familiar too. All of them were familiar to him since he had battled each one at some point in his life. His eyes whipped around to stare at Gohan, wondering if the fear and anger and hate and so many other emotions would cloud the child's mind.
The child just looked confused before his stance changed to a fighting one, prepared to attack. Piccolo nodded his head before he turned back to the other beings and slammed his fist into Freiza's ugly mug. "Take them down and get to that machine!" He barked out as he grabbed a hold of the little white villain by his throat and sent him flying with a ki blast in the stomach.
That's what they needed to do. It should have been simple too because it had been years since he had fought any of these people and his own strength had grown during that time. But it wasn't that easy he found out when a white hand grabbed a hold of his cape and sent him flying towards the ground.
Piccolo looked up just in time to catch a ki blast with his forearms before a foot crashed into them and pushed him further to the ground. "Do you really think it'll be that easy?" Freiza questioned with a devastatingly cruel smirk. "We aren't going to be put down easy. Not like you and those Monkeys are going to."
He realizes how true this is when he sees Trunks blow apart Cooler into black smoke, only for it to reform into the brother of Freiza a second later. The smoke was being used to create these villains and they were reforming as soon as they were being destroyed. They needed to get rid of the smoke before it killed them all, but that could only be done by destroying the machine.
Which was protected by the smoke villains.
Great, this was going to be way harder than he had expected.
It didn't help that the smoke version of Cell had made an appearance and was now facing off against a ruffled Gohan.
The Super Namekian Slug was fighting against Goten.
Cooler was facing off against Trunks.
He himself was now facing off against Freiza.
None of which would have been a problem except for the fact that they would reform with no damage return to battle only a second later. They had no time to destroy the machine and Piccolo could see the Saiyans getting weaker and weaker as time went on.
They weren't going to last much longer at this rate.
"Namakian, you should leave while you can." Freiza stated as his tail swung around to hit him in the face.
Piccolo snarled as he dodged the tail and instead shot off a blast that scattered the smoke, only to reform and have a fist slam into his stomach and send him hurtling backwards.
Just in time to slam into Trunks back as the boy was about to blast Cooler apart. The two of them slammed into the ground with a might boom.
Gohan screeched as a blast from Cell scorched his cheek and he glared at the bug in annoyance. "Take this! Masenko-ha!" He shouted as he raised both hands to his forehead and fired off a yellow blast. Only to glare when the blast scattered the smoke and the figure reappeared whole. "Why won't you just stay down!?" He growled, tail lashing back and forth behind him in agitation.
"Because then this wouldn't be revenge against you abominable Saiyans." Cell shot back just as his own tail shot forward and nailed the boy in the arm.
Gohan screamed in pain as he yanked his body backwards, only for it to stick with him. He growled as he felt his arm begin to deflate a little. But he concentrated and put energy in his hand before chopping the tail tip off. He watched as the smoke left his body and reformed into a whole tail to the android.
"Not a bad move kid but don't think that'll save you!" Cell launched forward to backhand the child, only to growl in annoyance when a form slammed into him and sent him scattering into smoke.
"You okay Gohan?" Goten questioned as he watched Slug and Cell reform into whole forms even as he floated in front of his now younger brother.
"Fine." Gohan grunted as he wiped the blood from his arm, glaring at the two. "We need to stop that machine but they keep getting in the way. How are we going to get around them?" He questioned the older boy in curiosity. The more older and experienced fighters always had a way.
Goten frowned and went to answer but was stopped when a purple elbow slammed into his face, sending him flying away and into an awaiting white fist. He growled as he was grabbed by the neck with a white tail beginning to strangle him.
Gohan screeched in agony as two strong arms covered in dark spots wrapped around him suddenly and began to squeeze. "Oh, this brings back memories." Cell laughed heartily.
"Gohan!" Piccolo screamed as he shot up from the ground to rescue the little boy, but was stopped when a green fist slammed into his back, sending him back to the ground. "I don't think so!" Slug taunted as he shot after the other Namekian.
"I guess I'll play with you again little boy." Cooler said as he stared at Trunks with viciousness appearing in his countenance.
Trunks growled as he readied himself for another attack.
"Hey you guys!" A voice yelled as a little red car went racing across the sky. "I got the cure for the Destron Gas!" Bulma announced as she zoomed over to the machine and quickly dropped capsules throughout the air while one fell into the machine.
They watched with smirks as the gas dissipated and the sky quickly disappeared.
"This is the end for you!" Piccolo smirked as he slammed a fist into Slug's stomach, dispersing the villain into smoke and watching as it completely disappeared without further smoke to recreate him.
"Time to end this!" Trunks shouted as he pulled his hands together and gathered it there. "Galick Gun!" He shouted as he shot the attack, watching as Cooler completely disappeared.
Goten choked for a moment more before he sunk his teeth into the tail, watching in amusement as the tail loosened enough for him to get a firm grip and rip it from his neck and then swing the villain around in a circle. "Have fun in hell you asshole!" He shouted as he released the villain, watching as Freiza slammed into a building and disappeared into smoke.
"I won't be destroyed as easily." Cell growled as he squeezed harder, only to gasp as a fury tail tickled at his side. "No!" He gasped in horror as the feeling caused him to loosen his grip and for the boy to wiggle away from him. "No! I won't go down like this!" He gasped just as a yellow beam of energy slammed into.
Gohan smirked as he watched his own smoky villain disappear. Who knew tickling could work on someone like the giant grasshopper.
"Good job mom!" Trunks shouted as he floated up to the car. "I wasn't sure for how long I could hold out against those things." He stated sheepishly as the others followed up.
"Thanks, but I have a feeling that this isn't over just yet." She said as she pointed up towards the rounded projectile that was still floating over their heads.
"That has made to crash into Earth. If it collides then you can kiss this planet goodbye!" She explained with wide eyes.
"Shit, we have to get up there then." Trunks growled as he calculated the best angles and advantages they would have to take that thing out.
"But we need to figure out who sent those pods out and released the gas as well." Goten said as he looked towards Bulma. "Is there anything else you can tell us about that thing?"
"Um….well…I honestly can't tell you except it's made up of a lot of debris and junk. Though the energy of the planet seems to be concentrated right here." She explained as she pulled up a schematic of the planet and showed where they would have to go. "This is the place. Go there and you should find your answers."
"All right then, let's get a move on." Piccolo stated as he pulled off his cape and turban. They would need all their strength. "Let's get going you two, we'll have to take care of this."
"Not without us you don't!" They turned to stare at the four humans that were flying at them. "We've missed out on enough excitement!" Krillin explained with a big grin.
"Yeah, besides, Goku and Vegeta aren't here to help out. You'll need all the extra power that you can get." Yamcha explained.
"We'll have your backs." Tien smirked with his arms crossed.
"Leave that to us!" Chiaotzu cheered along happily. He hadn't been any really big fights in ever but he had trained with his friend for years, so he knew he hadn't gotten rusty.
"I'm going too Dad!" Gohan added, a glint coming into his eyes that told all that Piccolo would need to know.
The Namekian just nodded at the child. "Just stay close to one of us, preferably me or those three," He waves a hand at the other two Saiyans and Krillin, "so that we know where you are and can keep you out of danger."
"Okay!" Gohan agreed easily as he floated over to the Namekian and stayed there. "How we gonna get up there?" He questioned though as he looked at where the planet was.
"I can get you there if you like."
"Whis! Oh my god!" Bulma screeched as she turned around in her car to see the said blue angel sitting in the back seat. "Don't do that!" She yelled at him even as the others chuckled at being spooked. Being a god like being none of them could feel his appearance.
Gohan just smiled and waved at the other, receiving a smile and wave in return. "You can really help up get up there?" He questioned eagerly. He wanted to see what was going on up there and knew that he could help if given the chance.
That and he'd be leaving Earth.
Even if for just a second.
"I can. From this distance it'll take only a minute to get there." He explained as he stood up and summoned his staff. "Though I'm unsure of whether the humans will be able to handle the hate emanating from there." His face turned into a frown as he looked at the others. "Though if you are intent on going, then I will not stop you."
"Alright then! Let's get a move on!" Yamcha said as he rotated his shoulders to loosen them. "This should be interesting if nothing else."
"True, though we shouldn't let our guard down." Tien added.
"Welp, we're ready to go when you are Whis!" Krillin said as he looked at the angel expectantly.
"Alright, Gohan, lay a hand on my shoulder and the rest of you can hold onto him as we travel." He explained as he turned his back to the group and only once everyone was ready did he tap his staff and they all disappeared.
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He stopped and blinked as he looked around the area that Whis normally resided in. "Hey, where did he go?" Goku questioned as he spun around in a circle, like that would make the Angel appear.
"Like I would know." Vegeta snapped as he stood there with his arms crossed and a scowl on his face. They had somehow finished all the chores, including changing Beerus's bed. That had been a horror in and of itself.
Goku frowned as he looked in the direction of where Earth resided. "Do you think Bulma found something else for him to eat? He might of gone if she had." He thought hard as he crossed his own arms over his chest.
Vegeta just scoffed as he looked around the fields that they normally trained on. "Want to spa?" He questioned the other with a side glance.
Goku smiled and nodded his head in agreement. "Let's go!"
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"It seems you have arrived safely." A rough voice called out as they appeared in front of a large machine with what seemed to be purple balls the size of baseballs. It was rather strange place with just that but then there were pillars all over the place and bridges and crossways. The coloring was red, purple, green, and black. Rarely did one see any other colors.
"Who might you be?" Tien questioned as he took in the blue skinned man with black wrap jacket common among his people and white pants. Burning orange hair flowed around his shoulders even as his one red eye gleamed angrily and the white one was oddly blank. "Obviously you're the one causing all the chaos on Earth but a name would be appreciated."
"Yeah, that way we can put you on the index of all the other villains we've defeated." Yamcha stated.
The man chuckled as he floated forward so that he was closer to them, to take in their own appearance and his thoughts. "I am Dr. Lychee, a once upon time Tuffle Scientist of the greatest caliber." He explained calmly. "My people were known for their intelligence and ingenuity, many other planets coming to request weapons and defense systems from all over, we were that well known."
"Were?" Gohan questioned with a furrowed brow. The others knew what that tense meant. This planet was no longer existent.
Dr. Lychee chuckled once more as his eyes fell onto the little boy's brown tail waving directly behind him. "We were attacked one day by a race that thrived in fighting and destruction. They destroyed my friends, family, and home in a matter of months. We didn't just let them take it, of course we didn't, we fought as hard as we could." He sighed sadly as he ran a hand over his face. "But my people were not fighters, scientists and inventors, but not fighters. We fell to the Saiyans directly after I launched the machine you see here." He tilted his head to the side to indicate the machine surrounded by the balls.
"Saiyans destroyed your planet years ago!" Krillin shouted out in panic. "Why wait now to attack! Especially since Saiyans have almost been completely obliterated themselves! There's only like, what? Four? Five of them left!" He said as he looked at the half Saiyans and then back to Lychee.
"It has taken this long to gather up the grudge of those who have suffered at the hands of the Saiyans." He explained with a smirk. "All the pain, rage, hatred, sorrow, and grudges held against the Saiyans have gathered in my beautiful Hatchiyack." He laughed long and loud in excitement. "And now we can take our revenge against them! No matter how few there are now! For as long as a Saiyan exists we can never rest in peace!" He roared at the end.
"Alright, I've heard enough." Piccolo said as he gathered energy and blasted the old man right in the face.
"Oh, you shouldn't have done that." Whis said as he watched with curiosity as the man's own grudge moved over to the machine.
"Why, he just took care of the problem easily?" Goten questioned with a furrowed brow. Obviously the angel knew something they didn't.
"He's right." Lychee's voice came echoing around them as a bright light enveloped the machine. "Just because my physical body had been destroyed, doesn't mean my grudge has been."
"Then come out and fight then!" Trunks shouted in frustration. "Show us your grudge and we'll beat it out! Just like we have anything else that's come our way!"
"Yeah! Together we can take on anything you throw at us!" Yamcha joined in with the others following directly behind them.
"Tien…I don't like this feeling." Chiaotzu said as he moved closer to the tri-clops. Gohan was in a similar state as the boy had moved closer to Piccolo, almost directly against the Namekian's leg.
"Oh, I won't be the one fighting, my dear Hatchiyack is!" The voice shouted as the light seemed to converge and form the body of a giant red monster. He had yellow eyes and had green gems going all along its arm with a giant one on top of its head. "KILL THEM ALL HATCHIYACK!"
And the beast moved forward. Hatchiyack was fast, moving in speeds that Piccolo had only ever seen Goku reach before.
So I came as no surprise when the creature knocked Tien, Yamcha, and Chiaotzu all aside like bugs. "Oh no! Guys!" Krillin yelled even as he dodged a punch and then sent a blast into the middle of the grudge creature's stomach to knock it backwards.
It didn't flinch. IT smirked.
"Oh shit!" Krillin shouted just before a backhand sent him flying off into a pillar.
"Goten! We need to fuse!" Trunks called out as he watched with wide eyes. He already could tell that he was too slow and too weak to take this thing on himself. So it was better to take it on together in one being than apart in weaker forms.
"Got it!" The black haired boy shouted as he shot for his friend, the two having separated to avoid the beast's first attack. Now he hoped he could get over to the other before he could be stopped.
Only to gasp in pain as an elbow slammed into his back and sent him crashing into the ground. He then screamed as a foot slammed into his spine and ground in.
"Goten!" Trunks shouted as he shot forward next, energy forming in his hands to attack. He slammed the energy into the creature's back, hoping to knock him forward and away from his friend.
He screamed as a foot slammed into his chest, his ribs screaming in pain. "Get off of him!" Tien slammed a fist into the creature's face as Yamcha slammed a foot into its stomach. Chiaotzu allowed his eyes to glow with power and enveloped the creature in a paralysis field to hopefully stop it from moving.
"Special Beam Cannon!" Piccolo shouted from behind them, sending his most powerful attack towards the beast's chest.
Hatchiyack smirked as he shook off Chiaotzu's psychic ability, grabbed Tien by the fist and Yamcha by the foot, before dodging the energy attack. He then quickly used Tien as a bat and sent Chiaotzu flying off into Krillin, who had been racing back towards the fight. Yamcha screamed as he was sent flying towards Piccolo.
The Namekian just stepped to the side to allow the human to smash into the wall before slamming himself forward and into a full out close combat match with the creature. He ducked underneath a swing before planting his fist into an abdomen before dodging to the side to avoid a knee to the stomach. 'He's too fast and durable.' Piccolo thought just as he got grabbed by the back of his neck and slammed into that damned knee.
He was then thrown off to the side.
Gohan shot forward a moment later and bulldozed his full body into the middle of the creature just as Chiaotzu slammed into its back full bodily. Hatchiyack grunted before grabbed the little boy by his head and then twisting to use him to hit the little albino man with the boy, sending the man flying even as he kept hold of Gohan.
"Let me go!" Gohan screamed as he kicked against the air and his hands scrambled at the large purple one squishing his head. "Let go!" He screamed even as he felt the other hand grabbed his tail and he fell quiet, frozen from the pain in his tail.
"You are a Saiyan." Hatchiyack grunted out as he pulled on the tail, eliciting a scream from the child in his hands. "Kill." His hand squeezed down on the head, waiting for it to pop.
"No!" Piccolo screamed as he leaped forward, hand formed to make a vicious chop. He got a foot to the face that sent him flying away though, the villain now fully concentrating on Gohan once more. "Let him go!" Piccolo yelled as he stood up fully once more, powering up as much as he could.
"Gohan!" the others yelled along as they powered up as well, glaring the creature down to release the screaming little boy.
"Saiyans must die." He grunted as he squeezed even tighter, one hand squeezing the tail harder. Gohan could only scream louder as more pain was sent into his body.
"Oh dear." Whis said as he watched the scene. "Lord Beerus would be upset if his investment was to be killed. Better save him." He told the others with a raised brow and frown.
"We're trying!" Krillin shouted even as he took a knee to the stomach and then sent bulleting into Yamcha.
The two tumbled along the ground even as Tien shot over them and landed a punch into the thing's face. He growled when he realized that he was having no effect at all. "We aren't strong enough to take this thing on at all!"
"Not by ourselves!" Trunks agreed as he shot off a blast of energy. "Goten! Gotta do it now!"
"I'm coming!" The pre-teen shouted as he leapt forward and shot off towards the lavender haired boy. "Let's do this!" He shouted as they got into position, ready to become united.
Only to scream in pain as they were blasted apart by green energy. "Are you two alright?" Krillin questioned as he flew over to them, looking them over with worried eyes.
"We'll be fine, but we aren't getting a chance to fuse." Goten coughed out as he stood up, ignoring the burns on his arms and legs.
"None of us have the power to take this thing on by ourselves without fusing." Trunks explained. "We need time to do that stupid dance! Is there any way you guys can stall long enough for us to fuse?"
"I don't think there is." Tien grunted as he dodged a foot. "He's too fast and strong for us to deflect anything for long." He explained.
"Just do it! We'll do what we can!" Piccolo roared as he flashed forward. He had to get Gohan away from the beast before he was hurt or worse. The boy was still holding completely still due to his tail being captive.
Trunks and Goten nodded as they got back into position and began the dance once more. Krillin and Yamcha stood in front of them, ready to deflect or take the hits that would come. They ignored the sound of the two boys and instead concentrated on the two blasts heading their way.
Krillin grunted as he caught the ball of energy with his hands, Yamcha doing the same, and the two held onto the energy the best they could. They were forced to scream though when another one connected respectively with the already existent energy.
They screamed in horror as they were forced backwards and then blasted where Trunks and Goten once stood.
Now Gotenks smirked as he grabbed the two humans and pulled them away from the energy before it could explode against them. He didn't waste time with the normal boasting as he moved forward, blasting through his resting state and all the way to SSJ3 form, appearing directly in front of the beast.
"Let my brother go!" He screamed as his hands shot forward and slammed into Hatchiyack's face. The beast grunted in surprise as his hands loosened from around Gohan and the boy fell forward.
Gotenks wasn't gentle as he grabbed the boy by his collar and sent him flying backwards and into the arms of Piccolo. "We won't let you get away with hurting those we love!" He screamed as he flared his energy out.
He screamed as he pulled out all of his energy, ready to attack and end this once and for all.
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"Vegeta, do you feel that?" Goku questioned with his brows furrowed.
"If course I can! Any idiot could feel that!" The Prince snarled as his muscles tensed, prepared for a fight he couldn't get to in time. "Where the hell is Whis?"
"I don't know but we don't need him." Goku said as he put his fingers to his forehead and concentrated. "Let's go." He held out a hand to the Prince.
Vegeta snarled as he grabbed a hold of the other's shoulder instead. "Just get going."
"Got it." With that the two disappeared into thin air.
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Gotenks's fist slammed into Hatchiyack's face, sending the other flying as the others all gathered around Piccolo.
"Is he okay?" Krillin questioned as he took in the still form of Gohan. There was blood coming from the little boy's nose, eyes, and ears from the pressure exerted on his little head.
"He's breathing." Piccolo replied as his eyes moved up from Gohan's form to watch the fusion take on the embodiment of hatred. "But he won't be if that thing is stopped."
"We know, but right now Gotenks is the only one capable of taking it on." Tien grumbled as he kept his stance steady and ready. He wasn't going to get caught in a surprise attack.
"Yo guys, what's happening?"
"Holy Dende!" Krillin shrieked as the others jumped away from the appearance of Goku and Vegeta directly in front of them. "Stop doing that Goku!"
"Sorry, but we felt Gotenks's power up and were curious about why." He explained as he rubbed the back of his head, his eyes running over everyone's body and taking in the injuries. His eyes narrowed when he caught sight of Gohan, Piccolo currently wiping some of the blood off of the boy's face. "It seems you guys got caught up in a bit of trouble."
"More like a weakling is kicking their asses." Vegeta stated just as the Fusion came crashing in front of him. "We trained you better you brat. You should be able to handle him easily." He glared down at the sheepishly laughing boy.
"Well, his defense is hard to get through and his blasts are powerful. We've been looking for a hole but haven't found one." He explained as he climbed to his feet. "We found a moment when he can't move or several seconds but we're normally too busy and we're only one, we need everyone's help with it."
"Tell us then so we can finish this." Tien growled as he stepped forward.
"Stay near Whis Piccolo. Gohan is too weak to help, we've got this." Yamcha stated next as he stepped up next to everyone else, eyes glowing with determination.
"Yeah! Let's help save the Earth again!" Krillin shouted as he jumped into a ready position.
"Alright, right before he blasts, he has to charge up." Gotenks said as he pointed at the beast who was indeed charging up. "Just before then he can't block or dodge because he's putting all of his focus onto creating that blast. It's a three second window so we'll have to move fast."
"Che, then let's get going." Vegeta said as he stepped forward and blasted into super Saiyan. "Can't let a weakling like this continue to live and disgrace us with its presence."
"Yeah, good thing we showed up to help!" Goku agreed as he stepped up with everyone else right behind him.
Gotenks nodded just as he jumped forward, directing the current blast at him. He dodged it quickly before leaping backwards to join the others. "Alright! Let's go!" He shouted as he charge up his own attack.
Hatchiyack just smirked as he crossed his arms over his chest and began to concentrate his attack.
"NOW!" Gotenks screamed as he released his power, causing the beast to stare at him in surprise and horror at his foolish mistake.
The others joined in quickly, screaming as he released their attacks, allowing them to combine and swirl around each other.
They watched in satisfaction as the beast disintegrated from the power of their attacks.
Before screaming in horror at the feeling of the planet shaking underneath their feet. "It seems the only thing holding this world together was that creature." Whis mused as he stepped forward with Piccolo. "It will explode any second now."
"We need to go then!" Krillin shouted in horror.
"Then grab a hold of me everyone!" Goku shouted as he put fingers to his head and concentrated on the feeling of Earth just below them.
Once everyone had a hold of him, they disappeared.
Only to sigh in relief as they reappeared on Earth Just in time for the explosion of the other small planet to explode above their heads.
"Good thing that thing wasn't closer or Earth would have been doomed." Whis informed with a smile.
"Yeah, no kidding." Krillin grunted as he fell on his butt. "I forgot how much work it is to save the planet."
"I can agree with you there." Yamcha quickly followed and laid down fully. "I haven't had to fight like that since Vegeta and his goon first showed up!"
"And I've only become stronger since then." The Smirk on the Prince's face said it all.
"Yeah, but you still haven't beaten Goku." Tien smirked. "Like me."
"Though I doubt you could now." Goku said innocently.
The group was quiet for a long moment before a loud growl broke. "Ah man! I'm hungry!" Gohan grumbled as his eyes opened to stare up at his daddy. "Can we get something eat?"
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"Whis! I'm hungry!" Beerus shouted as he stood outside near his normal tree where he would sit for hours on end. "Whis!" He called out again, expecting to hear his Angel respond to him.
Only to get silence in return. "Whis, where are you?" He growled as he looked around, eyes sweeping over the area and finding no one.
Not even those two Saiyans that so amused him.
"Where is everyone!?" He shouted in anger as he realized that he was truly alone.
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A.N. Haha! Sorry this has taken so long. I wasn't sure how to write this chapter and I've rewritten it so many times! I've finally settled on this one though I'm not fully satisfied with it. Hopefully the next part will be better as that'll be when Frieza makes his appearance and the final arc of this story! Until then ya'll review and let me know what you think!