Hey guys, A Random Role Player here! Some of you might know me as ThunderFireblaze from my earlier days. I apologize for being inactive for over three years. Being in high school has kept me busy for a while, and a lot has changed since the last time I was on here. I haven't had the muse or the time to create new stories or continue existing ones, especially since I've been focusing mainly on Sonic. But now, I'm loaded with several new ideas from different franchises, so expect some new things!
In terms of Sonic: War of Randomness, I am going to completely redo everything. I may or may not delete this story, but either way, I'm going to make a new story where I basically do the exact same thing: take requests from different people and create short stories from those requests, all of them into one big collection. The reason why I am starting over is that I want to be able to start fresh since a 3-year gap is a really long time. My writing skills have greatly improved since them, and I hope that my stories won't nearly be as cringy as the some of stories I've made in the past-eugh.
I'll give you guys a quick taste of how I plan to improve my stories. Here's an excerpt of the first chapter of Amy's Obsession Over Sonic:
"Sonic, come back!"
The speedster ran away for his life as none other than the pink menace Amy was chasing her. "No! Get away from me you psychopath!"
Amy continued to chase him through Green Hill Zone. "Come on, Sonic! Get back here!" The force of her love was strong, but Sonic's natural speed was too much. She began to lose sight of him when she tripped and fell into a mud puddle face first.
Sonic heard a faint squish and turned back to see Amy stuck in the mud puddle. He dashed back to help her out. When they got out, Sonic sighed as he told her, "Look, I know you like me and all, but you need to stop following me everywhere I go."
"Sonic," Amy whined, "I can't help myself! I love you too much!"
"I understand, Amy, but you need to quit being a stalker." As he finished, he sped away from her.
"Sonic..."
Amy pouted as she once again failed to catch her lover. Every time she sees him, she can't help but chase after him! She felt like there was something wrong with her. She needed someone who would help her with this obsession.
Yeesh. Terrible, isn't it? That was how I wrote three years ago. Here's how I plan on revising it:
It was just another normal and peaceful day in Green Hill Zone. Bright colors decorated the land, the vibrant green grass and trees swaying gently to the whisper of the wind, and the light shone from the crystal clear waters, the whole land swimming with life. One could simply lay down on the pastures, watch the clouds slowly drift by, and sigh in content while they bask in the serenity of the scenery.
The lightning fast speedster known as Sonic the Hedgehog would often dash through the zone, allowing the adrenaline from his speed mixed with the nostalgia from the years he spent in this place, memories rushing through his mind, almost as fast as his feet carried him. Whenever he felt bored from the lack of adventure-for he always lived his life to the fullest, seeking the next thrill-or if he needed to calm his mind from his troubles, he would visit the one place he always enjoyed. The feeling of the wind rushing through his face, quills, and body gave him excitement, jumping from wall to wall, spring to spring, finding every possible route to fulfill his desire for parkour. These kinds of moments were what he considered to be one of the best moments of his life.
Unfortunately, this was not one of those moments.
The only thing that was different today was that he was being pursued by none other than the one girl who would shamelessly declare herself as the president of Sonic's fan club: the petunia pink hedgehog Amy Rose. For what seemed like hours, she had been relentlessly chasing him, her intense infatuation for him serving as the fuel for her already ecstatic nature. She would not give up until she was able to embrace the one that drove her mad with love. Unfortunately, the feeling was unrequited, but that never stopped her from following her dreams.
"Give it up, Amy!" Sonic called towards her, speeding away as much as he could from her.
"No way, Sonic! Not until I've finally got you!" Amy responded boldly, slowly inching closer to him as she ran after him.
Sonic, noticing the distance closing in between them, increasing the risk of being clobbered by her, started to grow frantic, breaking a sweat. "How are you even able to catch up?!" He cried in disbelief.
"There is nothing that the power of love can't accomplish!" she answered with conviction and confidence. Somehow this managed to give her an even greater boost, making her reach closer and closer to her hero, almost within her grasp!
However, Sonic seemed to break second wind, the adrenaline kicking in from the fear of being captured by her. Breaking the sound barrier, he blasted away from Amy's reach, leaving her to bite the dust. Having just missed, Amy tripped over and hit the floor hard, tumbling in the dirt from the speed of her pursuit, a dust cloud forming from the mayhem. After a brief moment, the blue blur realized that he had escaped and was completely free to run away, guaranteeing that he would not have to deal with her for a while. But when he saw her on the ground, her dark red dress all dirty from her fall, he felt a wave of sympathy over her and ran over towards her to help her up and clean her up.
See the difference? Let me know what you think about my improvements! I'll most likely finish remaking the first chapter of Amy's Obsession Over Sonic or start the first chapter for the short story remake, whichever I decide will be first. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions, ideas, tips, or even criticism. Hopefully this will be something for you guys to look forward to after all these years. See you all soon!