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right now she is easily beating all of you in the best reader category. I really disappointed in you guys I thought you would at least try to get the prize.

Do you know what the prize is, Taylor... sweaty.... with his shirt off. Now he's all Alice's.

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Bite Me- Chapter 12

Fiona POV

As soon as we walked into the door many pairs of eyes landed onto us wondering what we were. Some that had been at the fight Aro had put up soon after I was born because I was a half-breed recognized me. Most of them though were wondering what I was, they did not thirst for my blood so I was not human and my heart was beating so I was not a vampire, they probably all were extremely curious.

As for Jake, they could tell he was human, but he did not appeal to them and smelled like wet dog to them. Personally I loved the way Jake smelled. They were probably wondered what we were and why in the world we were at the vampire ball.

Jake and I sat down at the Elemental/Olympic table where Ash, Esme, Carlisle, Jasper and Brandon were already sitting at. Esme saw Jake's tense face and my look of uneasiness for him and shot me a hang-in-there-dear look. Jasper must have felt mine and Jake's emotions because a wave of calm washed over me.

After I had gotten over my own problems I saw Aro, Edward, and Bella standing across the room talking. Bella was shaking her head lightly, Aro was arguing with her, Edward was squeezing Bella's hand and looking upset.

I knew what was happening, Aro was offering Edward and Bella positions on the Volturi guard. He had offered my mom and my aunts positions, along with Alice and Jasper. He had even asked me because of my firepower.

After Aro walked away dejected but surely scheming he quickly got his spirit back and a huge smile spread across his face. He had come up with a way to try to get at Aunt Bella and Uncle Edward. Well this was going to be another one of those fights we occasionally fight to get Aro off our backs for a couple of decades.

Aro turned to the entire room and cleared his throat to get the attention of the vampires.

" Ladies and Gentlemen, Today we have some very special guests with us. The Elemental and Olympic covens. They both are animal drinkers and they recently got a new member. Isabella Marie Swan, Edward Cullen's mate. She holds much power and is a great addition to the vampire community. Also I would like to introduce to you Fiona Jones, a half human half vampire and her mate Jacob Black, a shape-shifter. You all know the rest of the Olympic and Elemental covens."

All the vampires in the room landed their eyes on me and Jake. I wave to them and got up gracefully. Clare De Lune started playing and Jake and I stepped onto the dance floor. Jake had taken dance lessons for me and now could glide across the dance floor as gracefully as a vampire.

Jake and I waltzed across the dance floor and all their eyes fell on us. They now looked as us differently, as if we were outcasts and freaks. I ignored it, the key was to look amazing and graceful, prove them wrong, and not care if they thought we were weird. I had gotten the same looks my entire life, when vampires heard I was a half-breed I got that look. I knew exactly how to handle the look with style and grace.

I stepped off the dance floor to be greeted by Tanya. She was wearing a hot pink low cut tight satin dress that revealed almost her entire back.

" Hey half-breed. How's it going. Okay I have to ask. How can you kiss the dog? He smells SO bad!" she said.

Okay first she tries to break Edward and Bella up. That made me not like her. But INSULTING JAKE!! That was the straw that broke the camels back. She is going to pay for that comment. My temper matched my power. Tanya is going to figure out what happens when you get on my nerves.

" YOU SAID WHAT ABOUT JAKE?!"

Every pair of eyes in the room turned to me. My usually sapphire eyes were red and my long honey brown hair had turned into raging flames rising up above my head. My hair and eyes matched my blood red dress.

" FIRST YOU TRY TO BREAK UP EDWARD AND BELLA AND THEN YOU INSULT MY MATE. YOU. WILL PAY." I screamed at her.

I hurled balls of fire at her and she broke into a run. I started to run to when I felt something tug at my leg. Who dared interrupt me in the middle of a fight. I turned around thoroughly annoyed to see my Jake standing there.

" Fi, calm down, it's fine. Don't let Tanya bug you." Jake said in a soothing voice.

I sighed and my hair turned back to its normal honey color and my eyes turned back into their striking indigo color that used to be my dad's human eyes.

" I'm so sorry Jake, you know what it fells like to not be able to control your temper though. It's just first the looks we were getting and then her. It was so..." I couldn't hold in my tears anymore and burst into tears.

Jake scooped me into his arms rocking me back and forth. He stroked my hair and cradled me gently in his arms.

" shh. It's okay Fi, I know. Your fine. No one's mad at you, plus Tanya deserved it," he said with a laugh.

This put a smile on my face. I looked up into Jake's big brown eyes..

" You see there's the smile I love."

I climbed out of his arms, sat down on the bench and kissed him. His soft warm lips pushed up against mine. My lips parted giving his tongue permission to enter. Most people think French kisses are slobbery and disgusting and I used to too. But kissing Jake. It was perfect. Perfect. It wasn't wet or slobbery our tongues intertwined and it felt almost as if they were made for each other. I started unbuttoning his shirt but he pulled away from me and motioned to the lurking stone castle next to us.

" Do you really want our first time to be next to the Volturi Castle where inside there are a lot of vampires including your parents, aunts, and uncles." he said in a voice low enough so only I could hear.

" Your right lets get back to the house." I pulled out a piece of paper wrote down a note saying me and Jake went home and sprinted inside the castle. I ignored the stares, handed the note to my mom and sprinted back out to Jake. We broke into a run toward the rented house. We were there in minutes.

As soon as we got into our bedroom I unzipped my dress and let it fall to the ground reveling my lacy bra and underwear. Thank you Alice for making me wear lingerie, I knew there was a method behind her madness. I could already see the lump forming in Jake's pants. He took off his blood red tie, jacket and dress shirt revealing his bare chest.

He then pulled off his pants leaving him only wearing his boxers. I mentally thanked my mom for making me go through high school over and over again because I knew why my inner thighs were wet.

" I like you much better this way." I whispered in a soft seductive voice.

" Me too." He responded.

I pushed my body against and we landed on the bed. Soon enough my bra and underwear were on the floor. Jake was planting butterfly kisses down my chest and stomach. His boxers were off in a matter of seconds. We were soon inside of each other.

This was pure bliss, many said your first tine was supposed to be painful, I had no idea what they were talking about this was heaven. Simply heaven...


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I decided to go more in depth with Fiona and Jake's first time.

I hope I wasn't too graphic though.

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Question of The day:

How many times have you read each of the twilight books.

Twilight: 4, New Moon: 3, Eclipse: 3, Breaking Dawn: 4

yes yes I know, I read too much, I'm obsessed.

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~ Bella E. R.

Yes I'm aware my middle and last initials are the abbreviation for Emergency Room. Bella C's second home.