Today I got a guest review, and I decided to share with you guys of this wonderful, amazing (I'm being sarcastic) guest review and see what you guys think.

From Splashflight (Guest):

OK. First things first.
1 you have really bad punctuationn
2 you have really bad grammer
3 you have the worst speling. I can spel beter then you!
How are you even in scool i mean half of us reveiwers can right so much better than you! Your a damn awful righter, so just go dye in a hole! I mean this is the worst story i've ever red and if you want to read a REAL story then just go to my profile and look at my BETTER storys that im gonna right prety damn soon you f*** idiot you. But im not gonna tell you my profile name, oh no thats a secret cuz then you'll be flaming me right up my a***. So go dye in a hole you worthles pest you b*** you god damned a*** i bet you jesus is so f*** angry wit u write now for tortering all us inosent people. Your going too hell mark my words!

My reply:

First of all, I counted several spelling, grammar and punctuation in that review. So, who can spell better again? Anyway, I'm pretty sure I'll find out who you are eventually, I mean, you can't hide forever. "Secrets are like leaves buried under the snow," an author from Fanfiction once said. "And once the snow melts, those leaves will be found, like it or not." And once I do find you, I'm not going to do anything about it. I'm going to tell you I've found you, but I won't report you. So, reviewers, what did you think of Splashflight's little 'compliment'?

Chapter 13

(By the way, the last chapter was about a moon after the chapter before it)

Hollyberry tensed, watching as Fallen Leaves and Snowpelt neared each other, fur bristling madly.

"You've made the wrong choice, friend," threatened Snowpelt as he crept closer.

Hollyberry flattened her ears against her skull as she watched Snowpelt's eyes gleam with hunger and he bared his teeth maliciously.

A sudden, bizarre thought crossed Hollyberry's mind. Does he actually like me? Or is he just faking?

Hollyberry's heart began to pound as Snowpelt lunged for Fallen Leaves. Fallen Leaves ducked out of the way just in time, slipping under Snowpelt's belly and clawing it fiercely. Snowpelt howled in pain, raking his claws down Fallen Leaves 's spine. Fallen Leaves staggered with the blow, and Snowpelt dug his claws into the tom's neck. Hollyberry squeezed her eyes shut, shivering and whimpering as their was a horrid tearing sound. A mere 'thud' echoed around the caves.

"Aha!" yowled Snowpelt as Hollyberry opened her eyes slightly to see Fallen Leaves, dead, on the cave floor.

"No..." she murmured, her heart heaving. "NO!"

She latched herself onto Snowpelt's back, and began ripping at his throat. He tried to throw her off, but Hollyberry was too strong. Instead, Hollyberry snapped his throat with her jaws. Snowpelt collapsed to the ground, and Hollyberry faced the rest of 'SnowClan.'

But instead of cowering in fear, the cats just grinned with mischief.

Hollyberry gasped as a large weight sank onto her back. She whipped her head around to see Snowpelt, glaring at her with hatred and something else that Hollyberry couldn't recognize in his eyes.

"How..." she muttered, but Snowpelt interrupted her.

"Dark Forest," he spat. "They gave me my lives." He motioned with his tail to Nightbird. Snowpelt pushed himself off of Hollyberry and Nightbird began clawing her. Hollyberry flung herself at the dark she-cat, pinning her to the ground. Nightbird began pummeling at Hollyberry's belly. A rush of love and protection swarmed over Hollyberry and she leaped back swiftly before Nightbird could strike another blow.

"Aghahe..." she groaned as she fell to the ground. "The kits..." she gasped. "They're coming early!"

Suddenly, the dark tunnels were filled with mocking laughter as Snowpelt an his group charged out, leaving Hollyberry alone and kitting by herself with no one there to come to her aid.

Sorry that was so short! Review!