AN did I menshun that Felisity is such a beutiful person tu work with alredey when I was to submit the chapter fo editin I was practicely exited to ask Felisity for help guess that proves u jus need the right person to talk to! Once again Felisity has a note and then we can move on!

E.N.: I received a comment on this story, claiming that my editing is worse than Patricia's. The same comment also says that I shouldn't have changed the Golden Ticket winners' names. Of course, the submitter of the comment is none other than MatildaPiker26, in other words, Patricia herself. Just to spite her, I have decided to edit this chapter by emulating her editing style as close as possible. That being said, I leave you to Chapter 14. Signed, Felicity Ann d'Abreu Crosland.

Willy Wonka thus pulled the door and I was taken aback by the man's gestures and I stepped away from the door and I decided to look at Willy Wonka to examine his appearance.

He was fairly short and he had a top hat that looked like a cylinder on his head and he had a marvelous velvet coat of a color of plums and his pants were green as a bottle and he wore gray gloves that looked like pearls on his hands and in one hand he held a cane with a golden tip and he had a little beard sticking out. Overall he gave me the vibes of a smart man who was full of life and fast and wasted a lot of energy and I remembered my invention of wasting as little energy as possible and as such he struck me as my polar opposite but also kind of like me in that he had his inventions to begin with.

"Greetings, everyone! Please come in to the Chocolate Factory. But remember: I will only let you in when you show me your Golden Ticket." Willy Wonka's voice sounded like angels and we all got into a line and this time I was in the very back and I was kind of afraid and it was too exciting. By sheer coincidence, our line had the same order as the order we found our Golden Tickets. Augustus was in front and Veruca was behind him and Violet was behind her and Mike was behind her and I was behind him and the parents grouped with their children and Grandpa Joe grouped with me.

Augustus thus was the first to hand in his Golden Ticket and the first to say his name. "Hello, I am Augustus Gloop." He said.

"Augustus Gloop!" Wonka got excited for no reason at all. "It is such a pleasure to meet you! You know, the newspapers weren't kidding when they said that even your words were fat! Are these your parents? Do they approve of you?" He said and Augustus silently nodded and the moment of discontent for appearances was exchanged and Wonka let Augustus and his parents into the factory and we moved on to the next child.

"Veruca Salt. That's a single R." Veruca said as she gave Wonka her Golden Ticket.

"Oh, Veruca Salt." Wonka realized that he wouldn't be able to make the joke he wanted to make. "You see, I know for a fact that a verruca is a type of wart one gets on their foot. But you are clearly proof that you're nothing like a wart one gets on their foot. Look how well-dressed you are with your coats!" Wonka made a fake smile and Veruca and her parents stepped in and she wasn't paying attention to him and the next child stepped up to Wonka and that was Violet.

"Violet Beauregarde." Violet stated her full name, as Augustus and Veruca had done previously, and handed in her Golden Ticket, as they had done previously.

"Why, hello, Violet Beauregarde! Would you mind stopping chewing that piece of chewing gum? The sound is a bit of a bother for me." Wonka asked and he clearly didn't like the noises that chewing gum made and he thought that he didn't want these children to be in the factory at all but they won the Golden Tickets and Wonka had to deal with it.

"I will stop chewing my gum when you stop making chocolate." Violet snapped back and it was clear that she wasn't the best person to visit the factory and Wonka stepped back to allow her in and she and her parents went in and Mike and I were the only ones left outside.

"Mike Teavee." Mike said, still being bored, even though a Chocolate Factory was before his eyes and he stepped in, looking for audio (or video; I researched it and it turns out that video has been invented as of this point in time) equipment and he gave his Golden Ticket and Wonka said.

"Ah, yes, Mike Teavee! I looked up your songs on Spotify and they're quite good! I think I will be getting one of your albums, and in that case, I will need your autograph." If Wonka was excited about Mike's album that meant that I should give it a listen too but I was poor and I couldn't afford an MP3 player and I decided to go and introduce myself and give my Golden Ticket.

"And I am Charlie Bucket." I said as I gave my Golden Ticket to Wonka.

"Charlie Bucket! Isn't it wonderful that you only found your Golden Ticket yesterday? One more day and you wouldn't be able to visit the Chocolate Factory at all! Please come in, please do!" I stepped through the door and was greeted by a massive corridor. The walls were pink and it all smelled very nice and there were coat hangers by the side so I knew what Wonka was going to say.

"People! Please hang your coats here. It is quite warm in the Chocolate Factory, after all. I have to keep it warm so that my workers are satisfied. They all come from a very special place where it's hot and if they were to live here in England they just couldn't!" Wonka said and I asked as I was hanging my coat and thirteen other people were doing the same.

"Who are the workers?" I wondered.

"That, my dear friends, is one of the secrets I will reveal to you on this tour. I have a lot of secrets, but luckily, we are at a time when I don't have to keep them anymore. Now go forward! The tour has just begun." Wonka said and he went and after he went we went as well.

We stepped out of the main corridor turning right and we turned left and we turned left and we turned right and we turned left and we turned right and we turned right and finally we turned left. With each turn the corridor was getting narrower and narrower and eventually it got so narrow that we were all in a huge conga line, once again.

We went right and we went left and we went right and there were quite a few stairs down so we wondered what is up with that and Wonka explained, with his clear voice: "You might have noticed that we have been going down all this time. That's right, the majority of the factory is underground. You see, according to the plan for this factory, many rooms were to be quite big and I can't exactly build upwards without the whole thing collapsing. That is why I built the whole thing underground! That is it for my explanation, now let's head to..." Wonka stopped and we all stopped after him and he had went up to the end of the corridor where there was a door and a sign on the door and Wonka read the sign:

"The Chocolate Room."

E.N.: To make the reading of this chapter slightly more tolerable, insert a comma before every "and". You're all welcome. Especially you, Patricia. I hope that now you're satisfied with the direction which I am taking Wonka's Paradise City in. Signed, Felicity Ann d'Abreu Crosland.

AN well thats interestin Felisity well I hope Patrisha gets what she deserves. That bein said Im Roald Dahl an Ill see you on more adventures wif Wonka! (Felisity made me say Wonka insted of Wonker)