Hi guys, Perky-Thief here; sorry for the long wait. I've really been quite busy. But school has finally ended and now I'm ready to start up the writing bug again. Although I regret to say that not as much as when I first started, because even though school is over, I still have a job that needs tending to.
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Title: Winter Wonderland
Chapter: A Sight to Behold
Pairings: Inuyasha & Kagome, Sango & Miroku
Winter Wonderland
Wind whipped past Inuyasha's cream colored cheeks as Kagome buried her face into his left shoulder. 'Not much longer,' he thought to himself. He had been waiting quite awhile for the perfect timing and right moment; and it seemed as though that time were drawing near.
But although his feet kept moving, his mind suddenly halted. 'What if she changes her mind?' Inuyasha pondered. The slightly depressing thought kept blinking rapidly in his mind, as if it wanted to make a lasting impression. 'No,' he shook the upsetting image out of his head. 'I can not think like that.' Not only did Inuyasha not want to think like that…he really didn't want the biggest case of blue-balls since the dawn of the 14th century…
A quiet smile drew slowly across his determined face. 'No,' came a final defiant thought. 'This will be it. I can feel it.'
Kagome nuzzled her head closer to his neck, inhaling the interestingly sweet scent of musk and metal. The complete and total desire she felt for Inuyasha had been welling up inside of her for some time. Despite all of Kagome's attempts to repress her feelings for the hanyou, she still contained a deep yearning for the stoic half-demon, a yearning that could no longer be ignored.
The two both knew that the other had had bottled up feelings for quite awhile, yet neither knew how to act upon it. So it seemed that all that was needed to set off the sparks was a simple fight on Christmas…
The snow had since depleted since that cold Christmas Eve, and now only a few whisper-like breezes were left. Inuyasha's vision was focused dead ahead, past many trees in the woods. He knew exactly where he was headed. Being there only a few times before, Inuyasha knew it wasn't the best place to take Kagome, but it was one of the most secluded. Being seen during one of his 'private' moments was not the most enjoyable thing in the world.
Tightening his grip on the fragile young girl in his arms, Inuyasha felt his legs move faster through the tree branches in his forest. He took careful consideration to dodge any stray branches and sticks poking out from within the sheltered darkness of the closely knitted trees. The last thing he wanted, and needed, was Kagome to be mauled by vengeful pieces of wood…which would, in turn, lead her to mauling him. No, that was one thing he definitely didn't need.
"Inuyasha…" Kagome said softly.
"Shh," Inuyasha responded gently, "not much longer." 'Not much longer indeed.'
An unseen smile graced Kagome's lips as she heard Inuyasha's voice. She inwardly smiled at the next idea which crossed her mind…and decided to act upon it. Slowly, she sent her tongue trailing up the side of Inuyasha's neck from the base of his collar bone up to right below his head, leaving a trail of hot, wet saliva behind in its wake. A giggle escaped her lips when she felt Inuyasha's step falter from the warm contact. Kagome knew she had made an impact; a very sensual impact at that. She was getting ready to pull the little stunt for a second time when she felt the wind stop rushing past her. Turning her head out to the distance, Kagome realized that Inuyasha had stopped running. She was left only to gasp at the location of which they had arrived.
As her eyes graced the scenery, Kagome marveled at the beautiful grove which was featured before her. A large circle-like area was stretched out to own a diameter of about 12 feet, while beautiful fresh green grass had a silver-ish tint to it from the shinning and glistening crescent moon above. Tall pine trees surrounding the serene grass served as a fence to the area, emitting an illusion of ultimate protection from the nightly beasts lurking. Miniscule white, pink, and yellow flowers sat at the base of the trees scattered about aimlessly, while the soft chirping of the crickets could be heard within them. On the left side of the entire grove, a large cave, made of a dark brown and gray rock-liked material, stood poised and positioned like a guarding solider.
"Oh, Inuyasha…" Kagome breathed. "It's beautiful. But here…?" she questioned, gesturing to the open grass. It was beautiful, sure; but Kagome wasn't too keen on being so 'open' in public.
Inuyasha shook his silver locks, chuckling softly, "not here. Here…" He pointed to the cave resting towards his left, making sure her eyes followed the direction of his hand.
Eyes widening ever so slightly with hesitation, Kagome still kept her silence. If this is where Inuyasha had taken her, then this is where she would stay. No point in debating about it now.
Placing Kagome square on the ground, he gently took a hold of one of her ivory hands, leading her carefully into the darkened cave ahead. He could feel she was shivering, but whether it was from nervousness or the cold, Inuyasha would probably never know. Most likely a combination of both.
Once inside the black chasm, Kagome's eyes adjusted to the darkness and she glanced around, fully taking in all of her surroundings. The inside was not too big, yet not too small at the same time. Soft brown dirt littered the bottom of the floor, giving it a soft cushiony feel to it the she felt through her shoes. The walls reached up high, that being the only characteristic which gave the cave its depth. Gorgeous specks of pyrite glistened within the rock walls as the tranquil beams of the silvery moon peaked in through the cracks in the roof of the cave. A few large rocks and boulders were littered about on the floor, while still leaving enough open space for a few curious teens.
As far as Kagome could tell, the cavern looked as if it had been deserted for quite some time; and although she still held her doubts, she wasn't about to reveal them now.
Before Kagome could turn and face Inuyasha, he pulled her close to him, crushing his lips to hers in the process. He drunkenly inhaled her powerfully wonderful scent, intoxicated by the sweet smell of arousal her body was releasing. Hands roaming, Inuyasha allowed his fingers to venture around all the lithe curves captivating her supple body, and Kagome made no move to stop him. Her skin felt like velvet under his fingertips as they roamed over her neck…shoulders…and down her arms…eventually connecting with her own hand.
When Inuyasha's hands had made their way down to Kagome's soft hips, she pushed herself in towards his pelvis, softly grinding him and eliciting low groans from him in return. She could feel certain body parts growing rapidly in lower areas; and the idea that she had the power to control such body parts made her grin. All the while her hands became messily entangled in his stunning silver hair, tugging slightly as her arousal grew by each passing feather-light touch.
Without so much as Kagome noticing, or caring for that matter, Inuyasha removed his hands from her agile body and brought them to the waist band of his haori. He hastily peeled off his shirt, leaving only the bottom hakama covering his lower half; however it did nothing to cover up the large noticeable bulge in the middle. Yet the moment after the removal of shirt, Kagome's hands reached his torso, stroking and caressing the inflamed muscular flesh of his chest, brushing the tips over his rock-hard pectoral muscles.
Kagome forced herself to take a step back as Inuyasha removed the final layer of material on his body. Kagome's eyes opened wide at the breath-taking sight of Inuyasha's incredible body, powerfully defined and strikingly muscular and male it made her moan aloud softly. If she hadn't been already overheated and flushed with desire, she might have blushed at her first 'real' sight of a naked male standing here in his glory before her. Just like in the story books, the sight of him did momentarily take her breath away.
Feeling somewhat overdressed, Kagome undid the first two buttons of her school uniform, then stopped and looked Inuyasha in the eyes. With a tantalizing smile, she sashayed provocatively up to Inuyasha and out stuck her almost revealing chest of few inches, insinuating that he should finish the job.
He caught the hint. With fairly shaky fingers, Inuyasha gulped and worked slowly on each button of the pale blouse, savoring each bit of newly exposed flesh to his sight and relishing in the effects it had on certain…other…places.
Having the entire school top opened wide, Kagome shrugged her shoulders, allowing the flimsy piece of white and green cloth slide down her arms and to the ground. She noticed the look of confusion dawning upon Inuyasha's façade as he tried to figure out how to get her annoying pink bra off. With a smile Kagome reached up her fingers, beginning to undo the tiny plastic clasp in the front, but was haltered when Inuyasha's impatience pulled her close and quickly sliced the two light pink shoulder straps and front clasp with his sharply dangerous claws, causing the entire article to fall to the ground along with the uniform top.
Kagome frowned distastefully at the thought of now having a perfectly good bra ruined, but was momentarily distracted when she noticed that Inuyasha had become short of breath at the sight of her tender and young half-naked body. She smiled at the slightly pleasant thought of being someone whom could rob his lungs of air simply by sight alone.
Inuyasha could no longer take it. His rational thinking sense had been depleted and he knew he couldn't stop himself any longer once he started. He had to be sure. "Kagome," he asked her one final time. "Are you sure you want this?" He knew it was an awkward time to even think of such a thing, him being already stark naked and her well on the way.
A look of hesitance crossed Kagome's face, and for a moment, Inuyasha felt his heart sink. "I don't know…" she said softly, wringing her hands down by her skirt. "I don't know what to do. I'm not very experienced in any of this."
At that point, Inuyasha looked like he wanted to cry. "It's okay, Kagome. I won't force anything upon you. Ever." Hanging his head, Inuyasha's voice lowered an octave and his ears drooped a bit.
Kagome stepped up to him and placed her fingers beneath his chin, bringing it to her eye level. "Show me," she whispered.
"What?" Inuyasha perked up at what she had said, not quite understanding her implications. It was such an odd and vague thing for someone to outright say. "What do you mean?"
"I said…I'm not very experienced…" Her face was flushing ever so slightly more. "So show me what to do…"
"S-show you?" he asked.
Kagome nuzzled her head in his neck, her soft breasts rubbing tenderly against his bare chest. "Show me…everything."
"You understand what you are asking, correct? No holding back?" He hated to say it, but he had to be sure. Definitely. It would too painful if she changed her mind…
Too engrossed in blissful contentment to utter another syllable, all Kagome could do to respond was simply nod, which she did so with a heart-warming smile.
Inuyasha grinned, feeling his heart lighten. Seeing her determination and devoutness to be with him was practically his total undoing. "If you insist…" was the final logical thing he said to her that night. Losing his entire patience, he grabbed the edges of her green skirt and yanked roughly on them, forcing it along with her lace pink undergarments to the ground. A quick kick by him sent her clothes flying over towards a rock.
Mimicking his bridal-style way of carrying her earlier, Inuyasha picked Kagome up and brought her to where his fire rat haori lay scattered on the dirt bedding. Spreading his shirt like a blanket, he placed her gently on the bright red material. Inuyasha felt his head spinning; it was too intense, and the wait had been far too long…
Kagome didn't precisely know what to do, or how to please him in any way. Inuyasha knew this fact, so he decided he would take the lead, and hopefully, she would follow. He kissed her deeply, exploring the hidden chambers of her warm, wet mouth; savoring in the fact that she responded to every single one of his touches and caresses. Pushing the limits further and further, he glorified in the texture and taste of her skin with both his mouth and hands. As his devilish hands fondled her breasts eagerly, he smiled at the sight of her writhing beneath him, moaning softly for more. Placing feather light kisses in circular motion around her belly button, he slowly trailed his way down towards the heated center between her legs, the very core of her body.
Kagome surprised both Inuyasha and herself when she willing spread her legs apart for kind mouth, inviting him. But that had not stopped Inuyasha. He continued on with his venturing, stopping only to stroke the soft curls protecting her most sacred of flesh. Blowing cool air onto her budding flower, Inuyasha smiled to himself when he saw Kagome twitch in response with chills and anticipation. Spreading the petals guarding her warm center, Inuyasha carefully placed one of his strong fingers inside, touching the walls in a swift sweeping motion and running them along the sides. Moving his other hand upward, Inuyasha gently fondled her left breast, cupping the mound within his entire palm. He tweaked the nipple very so slightly with his fingers before placing his mouth to the tiny pink nub and devouring it hungrily. After a quick attack with his tongue, Inuyasha let his teeth graze sharply on the sensitive nerve, all the while relishing in the responses he received from Kagome.
A low guttural moan escaped Kagome's mouth as she felt this insane pleasure being wrought on a hanyou whom she once despised…my how the tables may turn. He explored her shamelessly and she opened herself to him, begging and willing for more, whilst sighing deeply in pleasure. Desperate now, she placed a hand on his head, needing him completely. "Please," she whispered, caressing his hair both roughly and soothingly at the same time. "Please, I need you now…"
This request brought a lecherous grin to Inuyasha's lips, one that Miroku would be quite proud of. 'Not quite yet,' he thought to himself. He wasn't quite ready to delve himself into Kagome just yet. Removing his focus from her breasts, he brought his head back down to where his fingers were buried deep in her flowing center. Once more blowing cool air on her core, Inuyasha replaced his mouth to where his hand previously occupied, ravishing her most sensitive nerve with his tongue. Circling the area, he eagerly lapped up the warm juices that constantly flowed his way, darting his tongue in and out of her opening at rapid speeds. He sped up his movements, licking faster and faster, desperate to taste every bit of her. Repositioning his tongue only a little bit, he placed it upon her tiny receptive bud hidden deep within her core. Now touching the most responsive spot on Kagome's body, Inuyasha brushed his tongue across it in a fast flicking motion, causing her body to spasm uncontrollably at the contact.
Placing her hands on her head, Kagome felt the need to rip every strand of hair out. An intense heat, unlike any other, was rising in the pit of her stomach, seeming ready to explode. Her legs twitched and felt ready to give out, as her pelvis rose off the ground slightly, moving closer towards Inuyasha's ever moving tongue. The heat was becoming more intense and boiling, clouding Kagome's senses and making her mouth parched and dry. She wasn't sure what this new feeling was, but she didn't hate it. The faster Inuyasha moved the more extreme the liquid heat became. Closing her eyes, Kagome felt about ready to burst. Her breathing quickly became a short and unsteady pant as she felt the heat rising in the pool of her belly. Just as it felt as if the heat were about to detonate into a million tiny fragments, Inuyasha backed away, removing both himself and the painstakingly wonderful heat his mouth had been giving off.
Before she could steady her panting in an attempt to protest, Inuyasha silenced her by kissing her strong and deeply. He wanted to tease her a bit; make her last as long as possible before allowing the two of them to receive ultimate pleasure from the other.
Succumbing to the sheer force and will of the kiss, Kagome latched on to his body, pulling him closer; drinking in his toxic form in every way. The anticipation of knowing that in a few moments he would fit inside of her like a tight lock and key was almost too much to bear. Reaching her hand down below his waist, she stroked him intimately, noticing the hunger in his eyes. "Please…" she whispered.
Inuyasha smirked. He liked her begging, but enough's enough. 'I'll give her what she deserves…' Devious thoughts of how to make the night more interesting began roaming through his mind.
But first…
Carefully, lovingly, he gently pushed inside of her, eliciting a short gasp and groan from her rosy lips. She was trembling; not from pain, but from the pure need. The incredibly exquisite pleasure, of which she felt, caused her to all but whimper as Inuyasha slowly slide in and out. She held him close, kissing whichever skin her lips would touch, knowing there was much more to come and being hardly able to contain herself for the wait.
Muscles straining, Inuyasha fought to keep control over their bodies, setting them into a slow rocking motion. Two as one; in both body and soul. Breathing deeply, Inuyasha pushed in much harder, savoring in her slight gasp and shudder.
All the pain melted quickly into pleasure as Inuyasha moved faster within her. Never could she have fathomed how everything around her could feel so totally unending with a beautiful sensation of rapture and joy. It felt serene and immoral, divine and wrong all at once. As he sped up even more her body began to shake in complete ecstasy, and almost instantly, she cried aloud as the familiar heat begin to spread in her body once more.
Hearing her cries, Inuyasha lost all control. He drove in deeply, sparing no expense in the attempt to make their body's one; wanting to fill her up with both him and his devotion for her. The awareness of her beautiful sweating body tightly clinging to him, her panting cries of delight and joy, the thought of how much pure pleasure she received from him that moment…it was all so much to endure, almost orgasmic.
Not stopping his movements, he lowered his head, placing his lips near her ear. "I am your, and your alone, Kagome. I love you…"
Kagome's mind began swimming with images and thoughts of happiness from the words he uttered. Tears glistened in the corners of her eyes and her heart began beating rapidly simply because of what he had said. She felt a wonderful consciousness of being whole. Pain no longer registered. Placing her hands on his hips, she thrust against him, allowing him deeper access to her untainted chasms. Now was her turn to allow him as deep entry as possible.
In broken untamed pants, she replied softly, "I love you as well; I have always loved you and always will…"
Heart pounding, his body shuddered with the feeling of returned love. It was nearly overwhelming. A faint trace of moisture could be seen near his eyes as he endured a horde of emotions. No one would have thought Inuyasha capable of crying had they seen this scene
His mouth was dry and he felt as if he were on fire. He had been trying to hold back his release until Kagome received the enjoyment she truly deserved, but the pleasure was unbearable now. No longer as tight as when they started, Inuyasha gave one final thrust into woman he loved. Bodies, emotions, and feelings locked together, they each cried out the others name, arching their backs as they reached a mutual climax simultaneously.
Blissfully, they laid together on the ground of the cave, Inuyasha's arms wrapped tightly around Kagome, while still inserted within her body. The only heard sounds were the chirping crickets and the slowly steadying breathing of the two teens engrossed in a passionate chain of love.
Leisurely, without a care in the world, the pair gradually slipped into darkness, welcoming the well deserved sleep their way…
Back at Kaede's hut
Sango rolled over in her sleeping and would have toppled onto Kagome, had she been there. Yet the sudden subconscious realization that she was alone woke Sango from her slumber. Lazily opening her chocolate eyes, she glanced to her left at Kagome's sleeping, and jumped out of her own at the harsh reality that it was empty. "Kagome?" she quietly questioned, somewhat hoping that she would walk into the hut that minute. "Where are you?"
She glimpsed around the room, and grew even more wary when the when Inuyasha was no where to be seen either. Silent suspicions slowly grew in Sango's mind. Deep down she knew what was happening; she had been suspicious of certain unveiling events for quite awhile.
Normally, Sango would not care if they were off having their little 'fun,' but the fact that both Inuyasha's Tetsusaiga and Kagome's bow were still safely inside the hut, away from their wielders. That was what worried her.
Tiptoeing across the room, Sango stepped over to Miroku and gently tapped him on the shoulder. She kept her voice low, careful not to wake either Shippo or Kaede. "Miroku psst, Miroku, wake up."
The lazy monk rolled over and grumbled a groggy, "wha?"
Sango continued tapped, now slightly harder and more forceful. "Miroku!" she whispered loudly.
Finally realizing who was standing over him, Miroku grinned widely. "Ah, Sango, my sweet. Have you come to join me for a little night time fun?" he asked, lecherous smirk pasted immovably across is lips.
Sango snorted, "Yeah, you wish. Have you seen Inuyasha or Kagome? They're missing and their weapons are here, and honestly, I feel kind of uneasy about that fact."
Miroku stretched his arms out and made a soft grunt, gradually waking up. "Why do you care? She's with Inuyasha, so you know Kagome's safe."
Hesitance briefly brushed over Sango's expression, "yeah…but still…" She stood up tall, leering over Miroku's relaxing form. She walked over and grabbed her armor and Hirakotsu and began adorning it, Kirara standing sleepily by her side. "I don't care, come on. Let's go look for them."
"Now?"
"Yes, now. Come on; let's go before everyone wakes up. There won't be any need to inform Shippo and Kaede." Reaching the entrance to the hut, Sango turned to the lounging monk, "you coming?"
Miroku sighed. He knew there was no way around Sango's stubborn personality. Reaching over to grasp his staff, Miroku grew to his full length, mimicking Sango's and the neko-youkai's actions near the door. "Alright, let us get this over with."
Grinning widely, Sango led Kirara and Miroku outside, where Kirara fully transformed, transporting the two high into the sky.
Even at such an early hour, lecherous thoughts swarmed throughout Miroku's mind. With Sango sitting square in front of him, Miroku removed his hands from around her waist and carefully began moving them towards her backside.
But before he could even make it past the curve of her hips, Sango's harsh demanding voice stated, "Don't even think about it, Miroku."
With but a frown, his hands resumed their rightful position near her stomach.
"I can't believe you, Miroku. Thinking like that during a time such as this. You should be keeping your eyes pealed for Inuyasha and Kagome, not trying to touch me." She sighed in near annoyance, half debating on whether or not to slap the monk. Stroking the fur on Kirara's head, Sango said, "Kirara, keep searching for one of their scents. They couldn't have gone far."
As if on cue, Kirara made a descending swoop in the air, declining towards the ground somewhere deep in the woods. With a graceful landing, Sango and Miroku disembarked off Kirara's back, stepping onto the dark cushiony grass and bits dead branches and leaves.
Glimpsing around, Miroku turned to Sango, asking, "are you sure they're here? This is an awfully quiet place, and there's no where they could be."
Not glancing back, Sango said, "I'm not sure. This is where Kirara took us, so they should be somewhere around here." She took a few steps deeper into the dismal forest, ignoring the bored sighs emitted by Miroku. "Let's just take a look around. It won't kill either of us."
"That's what you think…" the tired monk silently grumbled.
"Kirara, stay here. We won't be long." Adjusting Hirakotsu on her back, Sango strayed further into the black-covered woods with Miroku trailing in her wake.
It took no longer than a few minutes of walking before the two came across the familiar grove that Kagome and Inuyasha had stumbled upon only hours ago. The area still looked quiet and undisturbed; obtaining no sign of moving life.
Without so much as a glimpse, Sango noticed the silent dank cave, suggesting that she and Miroku have a look.
Too tired to object, Miroku easily agreed. "If we must…" he had said.
From the small amount of light inside, both could tell the cave was tiny; no noises were being emitted from within the darkness.
Squinting his eyes, Miroku could make out some large form on the ground near the center of the cave. "Sango," he said. "do you see that?" His question was merely to settle his own curiosity, yet he got more than he bargained for.
Copying Miroku's actions, Sango squinted her eyes. And it only a split second to come to the realization of what the large dark figure was. Stifling a gasp, Sango whirled around quickly, turning her back to the figure and causing Hirakotsu to fall to the ground, emanating a large clang as it meshed with the rocks and dirt.
Meanwhile…
Hearing the loud noise, both Inuyasha and Kagome awoke from their deep slumber with a start, rotating their heads towards the entrance of the cave.
Mouths mutually slack-jawed, Inuyasha's eyes widened at the full prospect of what was transpiring. Before him stood two embarrassed characters; Sango blushing with her back turned, and Miroku standing frozen yet still offering the same lecherous smile that had become identified with his name…
Well there you go guys, Chapter 14. Sorry it took me so long to write it, but at least I hope it was well worth the wait!
ReViEw ReSpOnSeS
AnimeMaster168 – Yeah I guess I have a thing for ending chapters at weird times. I always loved a good cliff hanger, but only if I knew the answer was going to be revealed soon. I hope you enjoyed this chapter. Please review if you liked.
lyn – Your wish is my command, dear lyn.
Inuyasha's Only Daughter – I love it when Shippo pulls crazy little stunts like that. It's his complete and total innocence that I get to play with in this story.
www.lovergirl12 – Thank you. Sure I can read your story. I'll send you back some feedback if I have any time.
Liz – Thank you. Yeah I live on Long Island. You say you were just in Manhattan? Were you visiting from New York, or some place else?
Drake Clawfang – Haha, yes I agree. Lol.
Anime-Devil-101 – I hope you guessed right. Thanks for the review. Oh and by the way…I love your cheerleading skills!
bscloveblue – Thank you, I plan to.
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only – I hope you got what you wanted in this chapter. As long as you're happy, I'm happy.
inuyasha's2hotmiko – Oh well you MUST tell me whenever you have a new story posted. I would be nothing but honored to read and review it for you. And I'm sure yours is probably better than mine. I know that lemons or limes can be hard for some people to wrote, mainly because people feel too embarrassed. But if you are truly a romantic at heart, then writing them should be really easy. Just give it a shot; I'm sure it'll sound fine when finally written.
mishy – Thank you, although I've never heard it being referred to as warm before.
fluffyrachel – Well I hoped you enjoyed chapter 14, don't forget to review.
Youkai Koinu – I agree, I'm not the biggest Kouga fan either. His actions tend to get me slightly agitated. Lol.
Inu-Baby 18 – Yeah I know my chapters need to be longer…and more detailed. I should really work on that '
kitsunetsuishi – Thank you very much!
wolf of raven – Hmmmmmmm…well…I guess you'll just have to guess. Actually, now that you mention it, that is a really good idea. I just may do that in my future chapters.
kilara899 – Thank you. Yea, I noticed a lot of reviewers saying that. I honestly didn't realize they were that short. But to please my fans, I will try to make the chapters a little longer.
Jessi – SORRY! But personally, I LOVE cliff hangers don't you? Well I hope you liked this chapter. Thanks for being my loyal reader!
Aqua Gomez – Thank you, and I agree.
Raven 0f Azarath – Haha, I intend to.
Felina Noctis – Thanks, I plan to continue it for a few more chapters.
Ashley Berry – I tried keeping most of the minor characters personalities somewhat the same when I wrote this story. The only tweaking I did was to Inuyasha's and Kagome's character. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed this chapter update!
Hanyou Girl – Yes this story was my first lemon attempt that I posted. I would seriously love as much review that you could give me. Sure, I'd be happy to e-mail you each time I do a chapter review, and I'll do my best not to forget…(I'm not the brightest and sharpest crayon in the box.) '
