The Founding of Brokenclan
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Chapter 13: paradise
Brokenwings POV
We finally found it, the perfect place for our clan it's a large clearing with a river about six tail-lengths away and a large rocky cliff in the distance. There aren't very many trees but there is a lot of bushes which prey could hide under.
I can imagine this place full of cats I have a good idea of where the dens will go, the nursery will be right at the back of the clearing next to the warriors den so that we can protect it if there is a battle.
The elders den will go right next to the path we will use for the camps main entrance and exit so they don't have to walk as far to go to the river and fish if they want.
The apprentice den… Oof! I'm knocked over by Bat who has stalked up on me while I was imagining the camp as it one day would be, Bat pins me down with her needle sharp claws and purrs.
" I got you Brokenwing! I got you! I got you!" Bat hops off me and helps me up out of the dirt when I shake the dirt from my thick white fur I'm surprised to see her staring anxiously at me.
" Was I good enough to be a warrior Brokenwing? I heard Robin saying we need to have a medicine cat somecat who can't be a warrior, I thought he was talking about me!" I purr and place my tail on Bats tiny shoulder.
" You were great! I didn't even hear you coming! You'll be a great warrior and Robin would never make you be the medicine cat if you don't want to be" Bat perks up almost immediantly she starts to run towards the cliffs where Robin is exploring before turning back.
" Thanks for helping me Brokenwing! Robin won't even know I'm coming!" she meows excitedly before skittering up the cliffs and onto the top where I lost sight of her.
I didn't have to wait long before I heard Robins grunt of surprise and Bats squeal of joy purring I groomed my fur until Robin came down with Bat trailing after him.
The sun shone off his brilliant ginger fur and his green eyes glowed I rose and greeted him with a rasp of my tongue across his ear as I had when he had been chucked into the prison den with me, looking at him now I couldn't believe he had once been a tiny terrified kit, he was so strong, so sure of himself.
Later when Bat had fallen asleep and it was just us looking up at the stars he whispered in my ear,
"How did I get so lucky? If my mother hadn't dumped me in the river I would never have met you" I let out a playful growl and launched myself at him we rolled across the clearing until we stopped with Robin pining me down.
The moonlight made his eyes look darker a clean, leafy green instead of the bright, fierce green they usually were. I almost got lost in them but knew what I had to say to him, I leaned upwards stretching so I could reach his ear.
" If your mother hadn't dumped you would you still be happy right now?" Robin purred and got off me as he helped me up I saw pure unrelenting joy and something else that I couldn't name.
" I don't think I would be that happy because how could I be happy without you?" warmth spread through me here was a cat who really wanted to be with me, me!, twisted back leg and all.
As we curled up together in the tiny nest we had scraped together earlier there was nowhere I wouldn't go with Robin, because as long as we were together everything was perfect and even the streets of Twoleg place seemed like paradise.