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The Final Chapter

The party was awesome it had any and every thing you could ever hope for. There was booze, food, and the hottest vampire on earth.

"Alexander, are you about ready to go back to the hotel?" I ask.

"I am ready if you are," Said my prince of darkness, Alexander.

I grabbed Alexander's hand and pretty much dragged him to the exit. The car was parked down the block but the walk didn't take much time at all, but that could have been my anticipation for tonight back at the hotel room.

"What's you hurry Raven, it's a beautiful night out." Alexander said.

"Oh I just want to get back to the hotel and spend some time with a certain Goth mate of mine." I said back as nonchalantly as I could.

"Oh." Alexander said as we reached the car.

We both got in and the drive back to the hotel was silent. Alexander was concentrating on the road, and I was observing the scenery.

"Alexander, do you want to hang out with me in my room when we get back to the hotel?" I asked trying not to let my ulterior motives seep into my voice.

"I would love to my sweet." Alexander said in a very poetic way.

The drive lasted a few more minutes before we pulled up to the hotel and parked in a free space.

Alexander got out of the car and opened my door, like a real gentleman.

"Thank you."

"You're welcome."

I took Alexander's hand and started walking towards the hotel entrance.

Before long we were back in the hotel in front of my room door which incidentally is the farthest away from Jamison's room.

I unlocked the door and we both stepped in. Alexander walked ahead of me and I shut and locked the door.

"So what shall we do?" Alexander asked.

"Oh I think I have something in mind." I said.

Alexander walked over to me understanding the subtle innuendo.

When he reached me I pulled him into a deep passionate kiss. He kissed me back just as aggressively. We let that go on for a few minutes before I started walking backwards towards the bed.

I sat down and pulled Alexander with me.

"Raven." Alexander moaned woefully while I pulled back to unbutton his dress shirt.

I ignored the plea in his voice and ran my hands up his pale chest.

He got my idea and started to attack my neck with kisses and nips careful of fangs.

This soon got heated and I had the evidence Alexander liked it just as much as I was poking me in the stomach.

I broke apart from Alexander once again to pull my dress off.

Alexander leaned back against the bed admiring the sight of me in nothing but my risqué panties. "Like what you see?" I ask him my voice husky with desire.

"It is the most beautiful thing I have ever saw." he replied his voice deep and manly.

Alexander took advantage of my state of undress by feasting on my breast one after another causing me to moan his name to the heavens.

I use his preoccupation to my advantage by unbuckling his pants and pulling them down.

He helps me get them off and returns to my breast like a little kid with a new toy.

I reach down and pull off his boxers uncovering his large manhood. Then I reach down and start to stroke it.

"Raven!" Alexander hissed.

I did not stop because I knew he liked it.

Alexander took his free hand and gave me the same type of treatment.

When we were both hot and bothered we decided to go all the way.

"I am so sorry that I have to hurt you." Alexander said. Then he simultaneously sheathed his manhood inside of me and bit my neck. Taking my virginity and turning me into a vampire at the same time.

"Alexander." I screamed in ecstasy.

A half an hour later Alexander and I are both lying on the bed spent and relaxed.

"Alexander I love you."

"I love you too, Raven."

"Damn, but my parents are so going to hate you guts. You screwed me and turned me into one of the undead."

"All in a days' work," Was his smart-ass remark.

At that we both busted into hysterical giggles.

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