First I want to apologize for the long wait, I don't really have much of an excuse other than distraction and listlessness. This isn't a big update, but I present to you an omake! It is set just after Kid leaves the restaurant he first went to with Law! :D I really hope you all enjoy, it's short, but I hope you like it!
And now for review responses!
sa-mu-uu
Ohhhh my god I had to hide my face in a pillow for a solid five minutes when they were fumbling over their words before the movie thing, that was so cute aaaaagh A This fic is so great that I don't mind waiting for updates at all; I could wait forever and still be super hyped! Keep up the amazing work!
I know right?! Much fluff, utter cuteness. XD -hugs you tightly- I'm happy to have such loyal readers, I always feel so bad about taking so long to update. xnx Thank YOU for reading and reviewing!
Aerle
I'm proud of you for finishing :d And good luck with your Bigbang. I hope you'll have less trouble than I have XD So, no cockblocking in this chapter but that doesn't mean I'll stop watching you -gets her own toothpick- don't make me slap you with a glove to challenge you to a duel XD
As for the responses, I think keeping them where they are now would be best ;)
Bring it on! -throws glove at your face- But thank you so much :'D I really struggled with that chapter and AP, like I am with BigBang right now. xnx And for small chapters like these I will put the responses at the top so I don't give false hope for a long chapter. -dies- But medium and long chapters will have responses at the bottom!
Racelett
YEY! *-*
Oh god this is all so cute I don't know how my heart will cope with that... *-*
This is maybe my favourite chapter so far, because you can finally see Laws human side and like he even trips because of Kids ass xD
So keep going on Harley, you rock it!
-throws fluffiness into the air- I hope your heart survives :D I'm happy you loved it so much! -cackles- Yesh, Kid has a very nice ass *w*
-smooches you- THANK YOU AND I SHALL CONTINUE TO DO MY BEST :D
AriesDanger24
YESSSSSSSSS! KYAAA! So cute! Law stumbling over small gestures and Wire figuring out there was more to Kid's story, but now I am interested in the pendant! I have been waiting soo long for this and I fangirled the moment I saw it. Breakfast at Law's mansion I wonder what that will be like! I love you Ms. Luna! Thank you! *rubs cheeks against you like a cat!* I am purrfectly content with this! Yay! One year anniversary!
Aryes
*hugs* I can't wait for the next update Luna-chan! Law isn't used to being relaxed or very affectionate to lovers, as he rarely does anything more than share a bed with his past conquests. It's fun to watch him stumble and figure things out. ;D He is trying very hard not to insult or aggravate Kid; he wants a lover, not a pet. Breakfast is going to be fun!~ -rubs cheek back- I hope this chapter isn't disappointing. D: And the tin has a little significance, I wonder what it holds?~
loogoo
The driver part was hilarious. Now i know why he always took the long routes.
I know. X'D -kicks the douchebag driver-
Ace's Shadow Girl
Hiya, great to see you back and read the next chapter! It was awesome!
Oh, I usually like this sort of comments before the chapter starts, or it looks longer from the way the bar on the side shows, and you're disappointed when it 'suddenly' ends
But btw ... you do know that you can just reply to reviews by klicking on the speech bubble in the review, right ...? (sorry if you already know. I'm just always wondering why people reply to reviews in the chapters, since it seems so much more effort to me)
-salutes- Noted! From now on the responses will be at the top when the chapters are short like this, but still at the bottom for long or medium sized chapters. :) Glad you liked the chapter! Hope you enjoy this one. .
velonicaSushi
I found this story through the Lawkid tumblr! And needless to say I'm very pleased to have found this gem! And although I'm all down about the idea of bottom!Law, some top!Law in my life would certainly spice things up! While I'm reading this, I couldn't help but think HOW GLAD I WOULD BE IF I COULD FIND ONE TRAFALGAR LAW TO FUND MY STUDIES (university student struggling here !)
And yes I'm waiting for Shachi to be recruited as Law's driver!
Also I hope that Heat, Wire, the twins and Killer to move in into Law's mansion, that'd be nice!
All in all, please keep up the good job! I'll await your next update!
ZOMYGOODNESS :D YOU FOUND ME! I'm so happy to have a new fan! Yes, and don't worry, there will be a mix of both in this story once we get around to the sessy times! ;D Yes, yes, we all want to be wonderful independent people, but also LAW PLEASE FIND US TAT Life is hard -sniffles- -cackles- As for Shachi and the others, we shall see. owo Thank you so much and I hope you enjoy this chapter and any of my other works. :)
Kpuffs
i love this story! I cannot wait to see what happens between them next! :D
Thank you and welcome! I hope you like this little omake. owo
FracturedMirror
(I read this and Artist's Patron when wasn't letting you log in a few days ago and I made a mental note to go back and review both of these wonderful stories so excuse me while I spam your inbox) THIS WAS EXACTLY THE AU I NEEDED. The way you write Law in this series is utterly gorgeous. Now that Law's making Kid work for it a little he's actually going to appreciate it when he gets it. * wiggles eyebrows * You're wonderful and I loved reading through your story. Can't wait to see what direction this is going.
Thank you so much for finding the time to come back and review! And it's always good to see fans who are also fans of my other works as well. :D SPAM AWAY *A* I'm so happy you like the AU idea! I've just always seen these stories where Law is the one in need and someone else with power and money comes along, that I was finally like... -kicks aus and knocks them upside down- 'Let's put Law back in power shall we?' Law is just so refined, manipulative, and cunning that I just don't see him being on the ropes for long, so I rarely ship him as straight up bottom. A power bottom maybe, but not a completely submissive one. He's not one to take orders after all. ;) I'm very happy you like Law :'D I'm always ALWAYS worried about characterization, I stretch their personalities and such to fit a story within reason, but I don't want to turn them into something they would never be. And yes, Law is making absolutely sure that when Kid and he start to 'press forward' that Kid KNOWS he's not doing anything he doesn't want too. -wibbles and blushes- I'm not wonderful ya jerk, compliments don't make me happyyyy~ -squeals- Here's the omake everyone! Hope you all like it enough to tell me what you think. D:
Nezumi sighed in exhaustion, as he had been running around like a madman to make sure everything was seen to before being presented to Trafalgar and that punk of his.
He had made the chefs throw out anything that seemed even an inch away from pure perfection, he didn't care about their outrage at the 'waste of food'. 'If they want to keep food on their own plates they'll damn well do as they're told!'
The rat-like man was now scurrying around and doing some paperwork for stock. Normally he would just have someone else do it after 'trimming' just a tad of the assuredly unnecessary excess funds for silly things like 'repairs'. 'It's a kitchen, what could they possibly need repairs for? Spoons?!' But the boss had been around all day, checking on things since this morning when they had been given the notice that the head of Heart enterprises would be joining them today.
But, finally, Trafalgar and his 'guest' had left, he himself having seen them walk out.
"Of all the company to bring with him. Can't say I'm really surprised, not the first elite I've seen that enjoys the company of the young. Barely legal that one, but I guess that's the allure. Heaven knows there couldn't possibly be another good enough reason to bring trash to a fine dining establishment such as this. In broad daylight at that! Most have the common sense to keep their 'indiscretions' to nightfall in the confines of their own home. What on earth could he be thinking?!" He shook his head in exasperation.
"I suppose he was thinking he would like to take a prospective romantic partner out to lunch so they may enjoy what he has to offer. But that would not be any of your business, now would it..." The dark voice sent chills down the restaurant manager's spine, cold sweat breaking out all over his body.
Nezumi was torn between turning around, much like in those terrifying horror movies he had seen as a child, or just taking off at a dead run.
A hand suddenly rested on his shoulder, feather light and almost companionable, and the rat gave up any hope of running.
"A-ah, M-M-Mr. Trafalgar, I had thought you had left us for the day! I hope everything was to your satisfaction?!" The hand tightened slowly on his shoulder until it became a vise-like grip.
"Oh, I was simply escorting my guest to his ride, I am on my way to speak with the owner before leaving myself. And the food and service was wonderful, as always." The surgeon's tone was dry but taunting. "I wonder what we shall discuss..."
"I-I apologize for any misunderstanding! I was speaking of another couple, of course, I would never presume to question the decisions of such a refined man!" The panicking man was scrambling for a way to climb out of the grave he had dug himself.
"I believe we should talk about an employment change, don't you think, Mr. Nezumi?" The respectful address was obviously mocking, but the spineless man couldn't bring not an inch of himself to be offended, far too overcome with terror.
"S-sir?"
"Tell me, have you ever considered a job tied to the medical profession?"
Should anyone have cared to look in on the rodent of a man past that day, which many would not, they would find that a very large hospital had gained a new janitor for the night shift at the morgue.
To make up for this very short chapter, please look forward to a smutty KidLaw oneshot I'll be posting soon! It will be a part of a compilation of oneshots with much smut. owo The chapter is currently with my beta, Mai, to be looked over and hammered into something readable. XD I am also working on a blog for Waiting Game and my other stories! There my readers can come and talk to me and I'll post all my thoughts and such while writing!
Again I am so sorry it's so small... When I'm done with One Piece Big Bang sometime in April, I will come back at this story 100% with a big update! :D Until then please don't lynch me. :'D
May your Muse be inspirational and your Plot Bunnies carnivorous