Hey guys! Welcome to the fourteenth chapter of "South Rain"! In the last chapter, we saw Kyle have a weird panic attack that involved Pip appearing out of thin air and humans collapsing just from Kyle touching them. He also found a shoe box in a locker, and in this chapter, Kyle has checked into a motel to hide from the annoying paparazzi and he is going to see what the crap is inside of his shoe box. By the way, thank you all so much for 171 views! It means so much to me that so many of you care about this story that I admit I thought was crap when I first got around to writing it! Anyways, I hope you all enjoy this chapter!
Note: I do not own "South Park" or "Heavy Rain".
Warning: Kyle watches a video on a phone that ends with some asshole making a rude comment about Jews being dumb. For my Jewish viewers, I do not believe that Jews are either dumber or smarter than other people, I believe that it depends on who you are, not about what you believe. Unfortunately, whoever made this video is anti-Semetic (for those of you who don't know, that means someone who hates Jewish people), so there is the explanation for his rude comment. I feel really bad about writing stuff against a specific race, religion, sexuality, or gender, so I will try to limit stuff like that as much as I can in this story. If you ever think that I have gone overboard (which very well could happen), please let me know in the reviews right away and I will fix it as soon as possible. Again, I really do not feel comfortable writing hate against a certain group of people, but if I am going to write a "South Park" fanfiction, then it wouldn't be the same without this kind of stuff.
Wednesday, 9:31 a.m., 1.836 inches
Kyle's P.O.V.
I sit in front of a desk in my new motel room. The shoe box sits in front of me. I still don't know what is inside of it, I haven't even tried to peek at its contents. I guess it won't hurt to take a look, right? If there was a bomb or something, it would have exploded by now, or at least I would have heard it ticking. I finally pick up the lid of the box and put it down on the desk. The box's contents both surprise and shock me.
Inside of the box is: five origami animals, a cell phone, two memory cards that I assume belong to the cell phone, and... a GUN?! I vaguely remember how to check if a gun is loaded or not, so I check, and to my surprise, the gun is loaded! "What the fuck is going on? Is this some kind of sick joke?" I think as I look at the origami figures more closely. They all are numbered, which is odd. I then pick up one of the memory cards, slide it into the cell phone, and a video loads on it instantly. The video must have been taken from an old camera because there is a lot of static and I can barely see anything, but what I see next stuns me.
"Dad!" a young boy shouts. I see a familiar face sprint across a busy street and a red headed man shoving him down as a car hits them both. A man's voice is heard next, saying "That dumb Jew... doesn't he know to look both ways before crossing a street?" before laughing hysterically. The video ends and I feel my hands shaking from anger. "Calm down, Kyle, it was probably just some anti-Semetic bastard. Just... just look at the other video. Maybe... maybe it'll show me where Ike is?" I slowly eject the memory card from the phone and slide the other one in its place. This video was also taking with an old camera, so of course there is a lot of static and the quality of the video overall is horrible. But once the image focuses, my face pales and my hands shake as I clench the phone tighter.
"Dad?" another familiar voice calls. After a minute, a storm grate appears. From what I can tell, it's closed tightly. "Help, Dad, where are you?" the voice calls again. I gasp as the camera zooms into a spot under the storm grate. What I see next is probably one of the worst things I've ever seen in my life.
"Dad?" Ike calls out again. His small, pale face is bobbing up from the water and his dark hair is pushed back against his skull, soaking wet. "Ike!" I call out, forgetting that there's nothing I can do about a video. "I'm so cold, Dad... Dad..." Ike says, and then the video bursts into static. Tears build up in my eyes as a message appears on the screen. Through blurry eyes, I read the message that says "How far are you prepared to go to save someone you love?" That message disappears and another takes its place. The second message reads "Five origami figures. Each figure is a trial. Each trial provides letters. The letters reveal an address." Underneath the message is a series of dashes, as if I am playing some kind of really fucked up Hang-Man. Then, the screen goes black.
I put the phone back onto the desk, wipe my eyes, and look at the five origami figures that lie in front of me. The animals are: a bear, a butterfly, a lizard, a shark, and a rat. I pick up the bear and notice the number one written with black Sharpie on its hind leg. Curiously, I unfold the bear and find a message that reads "Are you prepared to show courage to save your son? Joe's Garage and Parking Lot 4988 Roosevelt Avenue Lexington." I then grab the unfolded bear and the gun and put them into my pockets. I shove everything else back into the shoe box, close the lid, and shove it underneath my bed. I stand up and bolt out of the hotel room, nearly falling flat onto my face as I run outside and slam the door behind me.
Hope you guys enjoyed this chapter! Basically, Kyle opens up his shoe box surprise and finds a bunch of random crap, which include a free cell phone... and a gun? The crap? Anyways, I haven't decided yet which idea I am going to write for a new fan fiction story to go along with this one. If you have not seen my ideas yet and would like to vote, then here they are:
1. "The Walking Dead" (the game only! I do not know anything about the T.V. show)
a. Facebook (What would happen if the characters from "The Walking Dead" got Facebook accounts? What would they post?)
b. Truth or Dare (What would happen if the characters, and possibly walkers, all get together to play some Truth or Dare?)
c. One shots (One shots of scenes of romance, friendship, or hatred between two characters of your choosing.)
2. "South Park"
a. Facebook (What would happen if the characters from "South Park" got Facebook accounts? What would they post?)
b. Opposite situations (What would happen if things in "South Park" reversed? Such as: Kyle is racist, Kenny is rich, Token is poor, Stan and Kyle hate each other, etc.)
c. One shots (One shots of scenes of romance, friendship, or hatred between two characters of your choosing.)
3. Skylox/Youtubers
a. The whole story of Skylox (How it began, the struggles in and out of it, etc.)
b. Frozen Skylox (What would happen if a bunch of Youtubers became the characters in "Frozen"? Basically, this will be a novelized version of "Frozen", except with Youtube gamers.)
c. One shots (One shots of scenes of romance, friendship, or hatred between two Youtubers of your choosing.)
Reminder: all of these will become fan fictions on my profile one of these days, it just might not be soon. I just would love your opinions as to which one I should write and upload first. So please leave me a review on which topic and idea you'd like to read first! And as always, please leave me a review if you are enjoying this story as much as I am writing it, and also do let me know if you have any suggestions, remarks, or even complaints about my story. I know that no story is perfect and I can handle criticism, so if you think it needs it, do let me know! I am open to all suggestions and opinions and I would love to hear yours! Anyways, I will see you all soon in the next chapter! Have a great day/morning/afternoon/night!