Hmmm. If you have multiple chapters to read, I would be happy if you left a review on every one! ;) Also, good job Guest! You are excited! :) Sorry, this one is not still kinda a cliffhanger. :)
Spiders. Great, big, hairy spiders. The dwarves valiantly, but there were too many of the creatures. They were soon overpowered. A part of the spider was stabbed into each of the dwarves.
Brynn could soon no longer feel her legs, and the numbness creeped up her body. She was completely paralyzed. Panic rose within her. Even if Bilbo managed to save them, would the feeling return or were they paralyzed forever? The spiders wound them up in a cocoon, which Brynn thought was incredibly disgusting. It was sticky, wet, and it was coming out of their bodies.
Then the creatures dragged the dwarves away to what seemed to be their home. There they were strung up. Brynn had the misfortune of being hung upside down. Blood rushed to her head, and she felt as if she would explode.
That's when they were saved.
For an unknown reason, all the spiders scuffled off. They ran in the same direction, away from the dwarves. Brynn didn't have time to see what had caught their attention, because all of a sudden, she was falling. She fell through several other webs which broke her fall. She heard a loud 'umph' when she landed. There was movement, and somebody pushed her off of them. Apparently she had been laying on someone. Finally somebody ripped the webbing off her. It was Kili. He looked concerned when she didn't move. Of course she couldn't tell him anything since she couldn't talk. Brynn could see the dwarves fighting the spiders, and oh how she wanted to help! But for the life of her she couldn't move. Dwalin paused fighting to look at her.
"Perhaps since she's younger, it's harder to shake off the poison." He said to Kili.
Then he was gone. Kili grabbed Brynns hands and hauled her up. She was completely limp.
"Brynn, I know it's hard sweetie, but I need you to move."
"I kn-kn-know, Kili. I'm t-trying."
"Well you can talk. That's a start.
Brynn managed to stand, still with the support if her brother. The feeling was coming back faster every second. She took a few shaky steps forward.
"There you go. I'll be right back." Kili said.
And then he left her. To be honest Brynn felt very exposed. She could barely move. Finally she was able to draw her sword. She made quick work of any spider near her. But then the dwarves worst nightmare happened.
The elves came. Swinging from the tree tops, they killed the remaining spiders and surrounded the dwarves, pointing their arrows at them. A blond one stood in front of Thorin.
"Search them." He ordered.
Brynn growled at the elf who was searching her.
"You are out of line elf. Get your filthy hands off of me!"
She squirmed as reached his hand inside her coat, removing a knife.
"This would go a lot faster if you would stop moving." He said.
"It would go a lot quicker if you would stop. We have not done anything wrong."
"You are trespassing."
Brynn groaned as the elf found more and more of her weapons. She looked over at Fili, watching as he tried to keep even one of his hidden weapons.
"How do you expect us to get to the other side when your blasted forest is in the way?" She asked.
The elf ignored her, inspecting her sword.
"This is a fine blade."
"Do not try to compliment me elf. I will not appreciate it."
The elf smirked at her, making Brynn even more annoyed.
"What is your name?" He asked.
"None of your business." Brynn scoffed.
"I am Lindeen."
Brynn sighed.
"My name is Brynn. And I'll have you know I am only telling because my mother would not approve of my rudeness."
"Help!" The cry rang out.
"Kili!" Fili yelled.
Brynn turned. She could tell where the cry had come from and Mahal kill her if she was to leave her in danger. She took of running.
"Brynn, no!" Thorin yelled as an elf took aim with his bow.
"Please don't kill her!" Fili begged to the blond elf." She is my sister, and my brother- he is the one she is going for."
"M'lord? She is getting out of range." The young elf said.
"Let her go."
"Thank you." Fili muttered, not happy about thanking an elf.
But as the blond gave the order, the young elf slipped, and the arrow shot off his bow.
Fili yelled and tackled him to the ground, punching him as hard as he could. He got several hits in before the fight was broken up.
"If my sister is dead, there will not be a place you can hide where I will not find you. And when I do, I will kill you in the slowest, most painful way I know." Fili growled.
Thorin could not help but be proud of his nephew.
Thats it! Next review gets a chapter. I believe that will be 28. But I welcome more than one.