STEPHENIE MEYER OWNS EVERYTHING TWILIGHT. I added a new point of view, let me know what you think of it and if I should do more or not.

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I told John to hide the flag inside the pool. I know what you're thinking, way to easy because they'll see the flag, however even though you see it, it may not be as easy to get it. Consider swimming, the fact the vision blurs in the water and leaving plenty of time for John, Dad or Mom to catch them, they're all going to guard the flag. I must say I'm a little worried that John might put his life at risk saying something a little to… inappropriate about me, but at least it wouldn't be Jake cause then there would be no risk. He would be dead. Haden, Holly and I are going to scout for Shawn's team flag.

"Good luck baby" Jake said kissing my forehead.

"Bye" I sigh into his chest. He walks away to sit on the bleachers.

"Alright both teams have placed there flag you are allowed to run when the buzzer on the score board sounds. In the gym we will be able to see what's going on viewing the video cameras with the projector so we can make sure the game is played fairly" Mr. O announces setting the time for 10 seconds.

"Look at them, We could totally kick there asses to get to that flag. I want the brunet" I heard someone say across the gym. Wait, wasn't that the same person who Holly was arguing with earlier. Haha, She has no idea what she's in for.

8 seconds.

"Holls (nickname), look out for that girl over there" I told her pointing the girl by the opposite gym doors. She looked where I was pointing and started laughing; she turned back around to face me and mouthed 'I'll try not to kill her'. I rolled my eye in a playful way at her and got in a ready position.

4 seconds.

"Where do you think we should try first?" Haden asked Holly and I.

"Not sure let's play it by ear" I said. They have no idea how real that statement was.

1 second.

Buzzer!

Cue pain, dammit I should have remembered to cover my ears, stupid sensitive hearing. The pack was screeching as well. Being half and half something can be painful at times, not always knowing what may or may not affect your special adaptations.

Holly, Haden and I took off! I heard footsteps heading towards the track outside. I directed Holly and Haden to follow me.

When we reached the doors that lead to the track we saw the girl that wants Holly and this other guy.

"I don't see the flag" Haden whispered to us.

"Me either. We obviously know the flag is somewhere by them. The question now is how do we get pass them?" I told them.

"Fight" Said Holly about to open the door leading to the outside. I grabbed her arm and pulled her back.

"No that would only last for 5 seconds before they would be back again. We need a distraction then one of us could start looking for the flag" I told her before releasing her arm.

"Good idea, Holly and I will distract while you look. Since you're a faster runner, you could take off faster once you've found the flag." Haden said.

"Sounds like a plan, let's go" Holly says grabbing Haden's hand and heading outside.

I stay back waiting for a good opportunity to sneak in.

JPOV (John)

I'm a little worried about guarding the flag with Nessie's brother and sister, I mean I like Nessie but the rest of her family kind of creeps me out though I can't pinpoint the exact thing. Oh well, I'm sure once myself and Ness are married I can convince her to drop her family. The moment that thought goes through my head Nessie's brother, Edward I think his name is, gives me one of those 'are you serious' look. When he catches my eye he averts his eyes on Bella, Nessie's hot sister. If things don't work out between Ness and I, things will definitely occur with me and Bella. I could have sworn I heard a growl but it was probably just my imagination.

Mr.O just set the clock for 10 seconds.

"Are Bella and you good swimmers?" I ask Edward trying to make conversation.

"Yeah, were not to bad" He replies, barley looking at me. I saw Bella roll her eyes, I wonder why?

7 seconds.

"That's good. Do you think one of us should stay underwater?" I ask both Edward and Bella, trying to get them to warm up to me.

"What about the whole breathing thing?" Bella says to me, finally one of them looks at me.

3 seconds.

"I've been known to stay underwater pretty long. I think I can handle it" I say pointing my fingers at me face.

"Whatever you say" She says shrugging and leans back into Edward. What the hell is with that anyway? There related aren't they? Well I guess if I had a relative as hot as her I would be with her too.

Buzzer!

"You go ahead and take off to get ready to be in the pool" Edward says to me. I nod and take off running.


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