A Mother Who You Forgot

by Temporary Permanent

A backstory on Ramsey, My Unit's mother, and what she did after leaving the Grimleal. This story has both a male and female avatar. The female playing a sister who is three years older than her brother. I plan to do a continuation of their adventures after this. Think of this a prologue to start covering up plot holes and even creating new plot points. Rated T for mild cursing.

14. Update 2- The Results Are

Update: PLEASE READ!

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Hey there you...fans? Readers, maybe? Its another update from that lazy guy that wont post another chapter!

Alright, so first I want to say thank you to everyone that answered the poll, you know who you are, but I don't! By a landslide, the majority of you want to see Shimei and Ayaka to share the lead role. That's good, because that gives me the direction to go with the rewrite. Speaking of which, lets talk about what you need to know about that rewrite.

The full story wont be rewritten. I'm satisfied where everything is up to chapter 7. As I've said multiple times, the amount of Sumia x Robin that I bled into the chapters was a bit much to take in, let alone work with. I have a better idea for what I want to do for chapters 8-13, but lets put some things to rest.

I will not be removing any characters that have appeared, however their role in the story can change drastically.

Their will be a diverging point. What that means is that Ayaka, Ramsey, and Shimei will separate at chapter (Spoiler) and then will receive one or two chapters about them followed by the conclusion chapter that's sets up for the beginning of the game/ re-telling.

Going to be honest...a little itty-bit disappointed in the lack of suggestions for marriage and class. I got two...from my friends...

As for the writing itself, I'll redo the chapters and then do chapter 14. So that way you can read all of them to your heart's content.

Its fine. Its fine. I have to do the work or it will never be as satisfying.

Onto other news, I will be finishing Festive Aftermath and Love By Every Other Name this week hopefully. School starts back soon for me, and I wont be able to give exact dates on postings.

However, I would NEVER forgive myself if I left it both of them on the cliff hangers they are on right now.

Anyway, thank you every one for the follows, favorites, supports. Had no one been behind me and wanting more, I would have given up on this.

So...I'm Temporary Permanent. You're reading my work, and your viewing is appreciated.

Later!