The Prototype Shinobi

by PlagueXRoamer

After the nuclear bomb was stopped, Alex Mercer contemplates what to do in the Web of Intrigue until a stray memory from a consumed 'innocent' passed...Naruto/Prototype crossover. Set 3 years before Naruto and after Prototype ending. UNDERGOING REWRITE.

14. Announcement: Rewrite

Plague: Alright guys, I made it known in Arcana Summoner, but I might as well make it official...

The Prototype Shinobi will be undergoing a rewrte.

In the beginning, when I first started, I only just wanted to try and get it as far as possible. Outside circumstances, however, have changed that. I have lost almost all inspiration for it for a while, and I've been putting this announcement off just to try to get around it, but I can't.

Going over it again, I've come to the conclusion that I've rushed Alex's powers too fast, making him THIS close to a Gary Stu already, as well as downplaying the shinobi (which rang a few bells in my head; they're the important part of the second series in the crossover, why the hell am I downplaying them?).

I'm going to start over, and I WILL put more focus on the shinobi (which I unfortunately had ignored in favor of Alex), as well as downplaying Alex's owning potential (Yes he will still be powerful, but not as fast/devastating as I've portrayed him so far). Alex's powers will be refreshed, but they will follow the same system as before, except that I'll be slowing down the frequency of the poll's update.

Another thing to note is that I've finally realized the problem with having a harem story: short of divine intervention, Alex won't be able to do that due to his nature, ESPECIALLY with multiple women. I will mention, as well, that Fu and Yugito will have to stand aside, as the problem with using the unimportant Demon Vessels is that we don't know ANYTHING about them. I may or may not include them sometime into the rewrite, but my decision stands. The rewrite will only have one pairing with Alex, although I'm open to suggestions.

I apologize again, but it has to be done. The original will be kept on the site, so that you guys have SOMETHING to read while I'm doing the rewrite (which will take some time, as I am more focused on Arcana Summoner).

Go ahead and flame me, I deserve it.

P.S. Yes Numbuh six-sixtysix, its Alex and Joshua Shepard. I will keep you in mind when I work on the rewrite, and you get first shot at his new first power.