Chapter 13 is here. Please tell me if the chapters need to longer or are they fine the way they are. I ask this because someone reviewed my story yesterday and said that the chapters need to be longer. Please let me as soon as possible.
Serenity Motou: Are there any questions on this chapter? Looks around the room Yes Serena.
Serena: Why do we have to train for 3 hours?
Yami: Sere, stop complaining.
Serena: Yami, I'm not complaining.
Yami: Yes you are.
Serena: No I'm not.
Yami: Yes you are.
Serena: No I'm not
Serenity Motou: Stop fighting you two. I wrote the story so I chose 3 hours of training, Or…
Serena and Yami: Or what?
Serenity Motou: Or I could 5 hours instead.
Serena: No not 5 hours, I'll stop complaining then.
Yami: Good kisses Serena
Serena: On with the story.
Chapter 13 Everyone reunites
After the duel was over, Mai's soul was taken and SSM felt weak and fainted. Atem caught her and made sure she was okay. SSM woke up a little bit later and saw many different faces.
"What's going on Atem?" SSM asked
"Sere, Luna and Artemis found my brother, your sister, and everyone else." Atem explained.
SSM understood and remembered something her mother, Queen Serenity, told her about this.
Flashback
"Serenity, when the time comes new allies will appear and help you fight the evil that has risen on Earth." Queen Serenity explained to her daughter.
"Who are the new allies I will meet mother?" Princess Serenity asked her mother.
"Everything will become clear in time, daughter." Queen Serenity said.
End of Flashback
SSM finished remembering what her mother told her before all this chaos began. She finally understood what her mother meant be new allies. "So this is what my mother meant by new allies."
"Hold on, can we all get filled in here and what the hell is going on?" Darien asked.
So SSM explained everything from her being kidnapped to the duel with Mai. She also explained that the Seal of Oricalcose took your soul only through a duel.
"Wait, so hold up. So the only way to lose your soul is to lose a duel?" Oishi asked.
SSM and Atem nodded. After that, everyone understood what they were up against.
"Okay, now that we know what we are up against, let's go beat them." Tezuka said.
"It doesn't work like that Tezuka." Bakura said, "The only way to beat the Oricalcose is to take out Dartz and the Great Leviathan."
After, everyone agreed that they had to train. So they Sailor Teleported back to the temple and began to train. After 3 hours of training past everyone was dead tired.
Chapter 13 is done. Please review it. I like your reviews. )