How should I put this, I guess long time no see? So for all the 'new' people who read this story I'm actually surprised some of you liked it . . . To tell you the truth I was only 11 . . .or 12 at the time and too mindless about my grammar mistakes. Let's just get one thing straight, my god people are so harsh on the internet! Thank heavens I wasn't as young and sensitive or else I would have taken those comments to heart. But, seriously people do you honestly think that telling me I 'fail' is going to help me get better?[yes I know you can't start sentences with a 'but' I just want to see which people have the time to waste a comment on that] I was 11 at the time give me a break. . . I understand my story was crap, but honestly wasting your time on 5-6 reviews? Why couldn't you just leave it at one and stopped wasting your time. Oh look I repeated myself, anybody wants to kill me with words? Look I didn't get on here just to get back at people, even though it seems like I did . . . but for the people who said I fail, I hope you understand by telling that too a little girl will honestly kill their hopes or dreams of ever becoming a writer. Young girls are sensitive and naïve, and wouldn't waste their time on doing something they 'fail' at. Okay I'm going to stop this soap opera now before another person kills me with my grammar mistakes.
Anyhow, as for the story, I'm actually stopping, but if anybody wants to re-create it or make it their own by all means I give you my permission; I'm done with my crazed out Twilight obsession. So thank you too the people that enjoyed it and thank you too the people who gave me actual good criticism.
Good Bye :)