YEAH! I GOT A FLAME!!! I think it so cool sometimes ya need the harsh crtics right? Although I wish it could have been more insulting...Oh and Barbies are awesome! they make great slingshots. And well I have a right, I mean I think he's really cool and just wanted to make somethin up for his past since it was never shown. Its just for kicks really, writing isn't exactly my thing but as long as some people enjoy it I feel good about it. Also I'm more into painting, drawing, stuff like that. Errr I just wish you would make more scense and actually tell me what my story could use.

Sorry this chap took a little longer that it should of! I updated my web page a little; just put a little more backgrounds and links. Please take a look at the links on it there are some really greatartist there like schneeflocke or Lora I also got a quizilla page with a quiz I did! It would be cool if you could give a opinion on it!

Lilly!


Everyone took thier seats. The man had a scary face, and didn't look like the guy you wanted to mess with. Komi sat all the way in the back middle row, Deidara sat next to Zimoru in the middle row. He didn't notice Zimoru sitting there until he was comfortably seated and decided to check his surroundings.

"All right! Now that your all seated let me explain the rules..." Deidara groaned only enough so that the two people next to him could hear. He hated rules, they were so plain and boring.

He went on and on, Deidara only caught important stuff like, time limit, ten questions, but he finally snapped back out as something more important caught his ears.

"And if any of you are caught cheating on the third round..." He paused and smirked and the tensed students. "Your entire team will be eliminated!" A brave boy stood up out of his seat and spat at the instructor "What! That's unfair!" The guy growled and gave him a glare that made him sit back down.

"Oh well! That's just too bad...deal with it life isn't going to be hand that shows you where to go!" He passed out papers that were flipped over so you couldn't see the words written on it.

"On your marks, get set, go!" Those were the last words he said for the time being. Deidara panicked as he flipped the sheet of paper over. The equations were so difficult, he sat in frustration holding his head. He scanned the paper one more time and then found one question he could answer. He scribbled away at it, Komi told him about it once! 'Thank god, your the best Komi'

Zimoru looked over as Deidara moved his paper a little so he could see the answers. He copied them down. Deidara kept glancing up making sure that no one saw.

He looked over at Zimoru he wasn't doing any better. He tried to sneak a glance at Komi but couldn't turn his head around when he saw some of the instructors smirking at him. This was impossible he was going to fail his team. He needed to cheat. But how? Those guys had eyes like hawks. He put his hand into pocket opposite of they watching him and grabbed some clay. His hand chewed on it obnoxiously. Clamping his hand on the other one he yelled at through his mind 'stupid hand shut the hell up!' His hand finished and he fisted his hand. Deidara re-opened his hand and revealed a spider. Good this was the perfect creature for this kind of thing.

Zimoru took a glance at him and saw the spider he smirked and faced his test again. 'Go to Komi' he mentally told it. As if it heard him speak, the tiny spider hopped down and crawled it's way to Komi.

Komi was whizzing through this stuff. The questions that were on here were things that she studied all the time. Distances for throwing knives, best combat, all of it. She felt something pull on her leg she saw the spider and grinned. 'Guess thier having a hard time'

She made a hand sign and placed her hand on the test. All the answers on her test began to fade away. Quickly they disappeared, she pulled a piece of paper out of her bag and made another hand sign. All the letters were re-written on the paper. Before she placed the paper in the spider she wrote the answers that she'd gotten so far on her test.

Once done, Komi place the slip in the spider as it scurried off.

The spider just about there Deidara tensed. He looked at the spider, instead it was in shatters and there was a man standing over it with a Kunai in hand.

"Well, well it took me while to realize," he said sneering at Deidara.

"That's two strikes...one more and you and your teammates will have to leave." Deidara gulped.

"Yessir, yeah."

"Good, very interesting technique, don't ruin it for yourself," He walked away leaving Deidara in a cold sweat.

Zimoru glared at Deidara. 'Shit Shit Shit what I'm going to do, un'

"You have ten minutes! There I will give out the last question!" The Instructor yelled.

Zimoru jumped as Deidara smacked his hard on the desk. Everyone that could looked up at him. Deidara slid the paper over to reveal a crack in the desk.

"HEY! Quit it!" One of the guys sitting in chairs on the wall yelled at him.

Zimoru took a good look around the room he hadn't even notice the many teams that left. 'seven, eight, nine, ten, and counting us eleven...' He continued to look over his paper.

"Times up!" Everyone dropped thier pencils.

"Very, very good," The teachers began collecting the papers.

"If anyone on your team fails, the whole team is out. Alright?"


It was a bit different because you know Ibiki isn't there...unfortuantly!I love that guy.

And err...I need to complain about...DISCO MUSIC!!! I use to not mind it but my mother...has been travelin back to the Donna Summer...oh my god she's been dancing disco it's so creepy! AND singing it! I've been ripping my hair out and hiding in emo corners!

Oh and my grandma's dog Tobi is driving me nuts too damn dog...yes it's name is Tobi.

LIlly! PS Sorry for short chap