Error in the Code

by AC75

A Bloodborne players falls into a death game of another game, he must then find a way to escape this hell and be free of the penalty of death. But then again... Wasn't Bloodborne already hell? First Fanfic, please leave any constructive criticism, hope you enjoy. Note: October 11, 2016 Entire story was reformatted

14. Response to review(s)

Response to Review(s)

To Student

Hello there, I'm amazed and surprised that you researched on that stuff! But I seem to have a problem, when I paste the YouTube link, it only send me to the YouTube homepage and not the video itself. I was able to see the other link, which was a post and I didn't know what they were talking about, apologies. o_o

To salomjesus3

Yeah, it would be an understatement if he ever encounters the Laughing Coffin guild.

To Pan302

Thanks! I'm thankful you like the story and stuck here till now, your support is much appreciated!

To Guest

I'm sorry to hear you no longer/don't like the story. I managed to understand your review after a bit of reading, please make your review a bit clearer. "You need to read a few about how to write." This part got me rather confused, read a few what? I'm assuming lessons or guides. Another one that had me confused is "Simply put this story is 'primitive'." I managed to get it after I rephrased it into: "To simply put it, this story is primitive." I don't mean any hate on your review, I'm only trying to clarify what you said, apologies. Also changed "Full of plot hole" into it's plural form "Full of plot holes". I'm sorry if I have to point these out, I would've sent it through private messaging, but you have no account.

1. Obviously no proofreading - I do apologize since I don't really proofread, I somewhat rush chapter updates to meet a deadline (which is every week) and that's why I left a note saying my errors should be pointed out, so that I may correct it.

2. Plot holes - Please point them out, so that I may resolve this.

3. Changing POV without a warning/heads up/notification - For the story, I don't know if this will answer to that segment of your review. But I'm using a 3rd Omniscient POV, a narrator that knows everything, but isn't a character in the story. If you want to see different perspectives using the "I" voice (1st person) then I'll have to think about it if I plan on turning it to a 1st Person point of view.

That's all.

Question: How big do you guys think a city-sized safe zone would be in Sword Art Online? I'm interested to know what you guys think.

Thank you to all those who favorited and followed my story, your support is appreciated. Thank you to the people who gave out some suggestions as well, it has helped the development of the story!