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And im hoping that each chapter from now on will receive 10 reviews. The past 2 have.

I'm sorry if its taking a while for me to update, since im always thinking of cool ways for things to happen in the chapter.

So probably the next chapter or two will be the last ones in Hawaii.

Im hoping to get more and more people into the story as it goes on.

I have to admit that the first 2 chapters are the worst….but the cool thing is, that they are almost somewhat EXACTLY like breaking dawn!! DON'T YOU AGREE? (:

Hehe anyways…

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This morning I woke up refreshing and relaxed.

I looked over at the bedside table, while the alarm clock flashed the time in big red blocks of light.

10:23. Wow that's kind of late.

Rolling back onto my side, I opened my eyes, and met with a pair of topaz ones.

"Good morning sleepy head, I didn't know when you would wake up. I thought I was going to have to saw good afternoon."

"Mmm I'm sorry, I was just tired from yesterday, and this bed is too comfy to move in." I grabbed the covers and pulled them over my head, hoping that the sunlight would go away.

"Edward.." I groaned from underneath the covers, "we cant go out today, it's sunny."

I was kind of bummed that we weren't going to be able to spend another beautiful day out here In Hawaii.

"I know.." his voice sounded melancholy, "But they have an indoor water park here, so I was thinking maybe we should do that."

A smile burst out from my lips. I had always wanted to go to a water park.

I popped my head out from under the covers.

"Really? Were going to a water park?!" I sounded like a 5 year old kid being taken to a candy store to buy as much candy as I could.

"Yes, if you want to."

"Are you kidding me? OF COURSE!" I squealed, wrapping my arms around his waist.

He chuckled, kissing the top of my head, stroking my hair.

"Im going to go get ready," I said, heading towards the closet to grab my bikini.

The one I chose to wear, shouldn't even be considered a bikini. It was only two pieces of fabric.

The top was blood red, and a bit tight, which pushed up my breasts, making them like, twice as big as before.

The bottoms was a triangular cut, and tied on both of the sides.

"Alice…" I muttered walking into the bathroom. It was all her doing.

I put the bikini on, and looked at myself in the mirror.

I was shocked to say that I actually looked a bit sexy. And for some reason I was totally looking like I had sex hair.

Regardless, I knew it would drive Edward crazy, which is probably why Alice decided to pack it for me.

I stepped out of the bathroom, looking over at Edward.

He didn't seem to notice me come into the room, but he looked breathtaking in his black swim suit, with his sculpted chest showing, the muscles peaking out from his skin. It made me just want to go over there and run my hands all over him.

I hear him take an intake of breath, I was too mesmerized in his chest to notice that he had turned around.

"God Bella," he said running up to me and grabbing me by the waist, "Its gonna take so much restraint for me to not just keep you up here and fuck you."

I giggled, I loved it when Edward would start thinking or talking dirty.

"I wouldn't mind that at all, Eddie…" I moaned into his ear.

"We have time for that later…" he gulped, seeming nervous, " let's go to the water park."

His arm still around my waist, and the other in my hand, we went to the elevator and down to the lobby, we weren't sure how to get to the water park so we would have to ask for directions.

The doors slid open and Edward pulled me up to the front desk, unfortunately that was were Jareth was standing, watching me come over.

"Hello Jareth." Edward smiled over at him. I was surprised that he hadn't noticed that Jareth was an evil perv that wanted me.

"Hello Edward, and Bella." he said. I could see his eyes going up and down my exposed body, himself licking his lips.

"I was wondering how we were to get to the water park?" Edward asked him.

" Oh, the park isn't open yet, but it will be in about 15 minutes, " Jareth said, "The keys that you shall use to get into the water park are actually in your room, next to the small board in the kitchen. Do you have it with you?"

"Oh no, Edward we forgot to grab them." I sighed.

"Don't worry love, you say here , and ill go grab them." Edward said, running off.

"So we meet again, sexy." Jareth said, pulling me around the desk to the other side.

"Stop touching me! Or I'll tell Edward."

"Oh so you haven't even told him yet? You naughty girl." Jareth smirked, as his hands went over my waist and down to my hips, near the knotted part of my bikini bottom.

"Well I am, don't you worry," I gasped, as his hand slowly slipped into my bottoms.

I tried slapping him away, but with his other hand, Jareth held my arms above my head, and placed some cloth in my mouth, to keep me from yelling out.

"Don't worry about anything, baby. This is will fast and hard, just for you. I bet your super tight and wet for me." He said, slowly rubbing his thumb on my clit.

I squirmed underneath him, trying to get away.

Tears were forming in my eyes.

"Stop it!" I tried to yell, but it all sounded muffled from the cloth.

"I can't hear you, slut. But that doesn't matter, because my cock is hard for you." He said, rubbing himself against me.

That's when I realized that my legs were free from his grasp.

I brought my knees up, and kicked him hard in the crotch.

"oof!" he yelled, leaning back away from me, leaving me with enough space to run off.

Before leaving, I took the cloth out of my mouth, and spit at him.

"That teaches you to stop trying to get me to fuck you." I said, heading towards the elevator.

As I reached them, the doors opened and Edward came out. I ran to him and hugged him tightly.

"Whats wrong, love?" he asked, wiping the tears that flooded my eyes.

"It was Jareth…" I said between sobs, "He tied me up, and tried to fuck me. I didn't want to, but he was about to! But I kicked him and got away! Edward im sorry, but im scared!"

Edward's face was full of rage and anger.

"That fucking bastard. How dare he!" He said, pulling me closer to him.

We walked over to the couch, farthest away from the front desk and sat down.

"Bella, my love, wait here, and let me go have a word with Jareth," he hissed when he said his name.

"Ok…"I whimpered, trying to stop myself from crying.

Edward walked over to the desk, where Jareth was, and leaned over, talking to him in a whisper.

I could tell that whatever Edward was telling him was pretty intense, since Jareth was beginning to open his eyes from shock.

With a smile and a smirk on his face, Edward walked back to me, and together we walked to the entrance of the water park.

"Everything is alright, baby." Edward said, planting a sweet kiss on my lips.

"Thank you Edward." I said, leaning up to him and giving him another kiss.

We both gasped at the size of the park.

There were multiple different colored slides everywhere, each ending up in a different pool. Some of the slides had tubes with them, which held two people, and would twist and turn with the water, ending up in the big pool.

There was also that cool funnel ride, where you would walk up to the top with your tube, and slide back and forth in a funnel type shape, and fall through.

We chose two lounging chairs, and threw our towels onto them, claiming them as our own.

"Come on, Bella! Don't be such a slow poke!" Edward mimicked a five year olds voice.

"Edward, patience is a virtue," I said, grabbing some lotion and putting it on.

"Ok Bella, why are you putting on lotion? Were indoors?" Edward smiled down at me.

"Because I love the feel of it." I said, finishing off rubbing my legs.

Edward brought his head down next to my ear.

"Too bad you didn't tell me before, I would have gladly rubbed your legs for you." he said, leaving me on the chair, feeling hot and wet…

I growled softly, damn Edward and his underlying words.

I ran up to his back, and jumped on.

"Piggy back ride, Eddie!" I screamed, while rubbing myself onto him.

"Bella, your making it quite difficult to carry you while your moving." he said, sounding desperate.

"Now whos the wet one…"I whispered into his ear, a tone screaming sex.

Just then Edward dropped me.

I walked over to the stand where you would grab your tube, and got 2, one for me and one for Edward.

"Let's go! Hehe," I yelled, walking up the stairs to go to the top of the slide.

Once we go to the top, there were two slides to choose from.

I picked the pink one, while Edward chose the black one.

"See you at the bottom Edward, last one their looses, " I said, pushing myself off, taking the lead.

I squealed as the slide had its twists and turns, the water flowing underneath me, the feeling energizing me.

As I could see the pool in front of me, I saw that there was no one there yet, but as I exited the slide, Edward came out of the black slide, to bump into my tube, sending us both under water.

I swam up to the top, taking a deep breath.

"That was so much fun!" I yelled, grabbing a hold of Edward.

"Yes, it was!" he laughed, pulling me into a secret little cave that was behind a gushing waterfall.

The fake stone that the cave was made out of looked very realistic.

Edward grabbed me by the hips and pulled me to the side of the cave, and then got himself out of the water, lying down on top of me.

"I thought we should have a little privacy now…" he said, latching himself onto my neck.

I closed my eyes, the sensation of the water tingling underneath me send me over the top.

Edward's kisses were getting more urgent, as I held onto his shoulders.

"Edward…" I moaned, my legs going around his waist.

I was getting really wet, and I couldn't take his teasing.

But all of a sudden, Edward got off me, and began floating in the water.

"Edward, please…what are you doing?" I asked him, kind of angry that he left me like this.

"Im swimming…where at a water park you know."

"So your going to leave me wanting you? Please Edward…I want you, I need you…so bad…"I grabbed his arm, pleading him to finish.

"Well I wanted you last night, but you were too tired…" he licked my earlobe, and swam off away from the cave.

So that was his revenge plot? Oh I see how it is. Tonight when we go out for dinner, oh you just wait Edward Cullen…you will have a huge problem…

I got out of the cave, swimming underneath the waterfall.

The water pounded on my back, sliding up and down my body.

I saw Edward in the middle of the pool, smiling at me.

I swam up to him, giving him a small chaste kiss.

"Edward, let's play basketball or something." I pointed to the nets, "it would be so much fun playing in the water."

I went to the basket, and grabbed a small ball, and jumped back into the water.

"Ok, Edward, First one to 5 points wins." I said, swishing the ball into the hoop.

"That's Bella, 1, Edward, ZEROOOO!" I yelled.

Edward got the ball, since it was his turn to have access. He got ready, threw the ball up, and tried to shoot it in the hoop, but I was too quick.

I jumped out of the water and intercepted the ball, my chest hitting Edward almost in the face, as I turned around and through it in the hoop.

"OHHH! And the crowd goes wildddd! Bella 2, Edward STILL ZEROO!"

We were having so much fun.

The ball began to go back and forth from that point on, either having me take it from Edward, or Edward intercepting it from me.

By the end, it was tied 4 to 4.

"Edward, you can give up you know…" I tried to provoke him.

"Now why would I do that? I can win…" he said.

"Are you sure about that?"

"Positive."

Edward had the ball.

He positioned himself to get it straight into the hoop. He shot it, but the ball luckily went into the wrong direction.

I lunged forward and grabbed it, and saw Edward swimming towards me to steal the ball.

I held onto the ball tightly and went underwater, flashing past Edward.

I emerged from the water on the other side of Edward.

Pushing down on my toes, I wanted to get the best jump I could.

Bending my knees, I pushed off with a great force, and from all the great work, dunked the ball into the hoop.

"YES!" I screamed, throwing my hand into the air, my fingers into a fist.

"I, BELLA CULLEN, BEAT EDWARD CULLEN IN WATER BASKETBALL! WOOO HOOO!" I yelled, "What are you going to do now, Eddie boy?"

I stuck my tongue out at him, and threw the ball into the basket where all the other balls were.

Again I made it in.

"Wow, I would have to say that I could totally beat your ass in basketball." I smiled at him, wrapping my arms around his neck.

"Alright, alright, I admit that that was a pretty fair game."

"Yay, now say it."

"Say what?" he said innocently.

"Say that I beat you, and that im better than you at basketball."

"Do I have too?"

"Yes"

"Now?"

"Edward!" I laughed.

"Okay…Okayy.." he said, looking down.

I brought his chin up and looked into his eyes.

"Bella Cullen beat her husband, also known as myself, Edward Cullen, in water basketball and she is better than me in it." his smile grew even larger.

"Arent you sad you lost?"

"No, im happy, because you called yourself Bella Cullen."

"Well that's what I am now, and what ill always be…" I embraced him.

"I love you Bella."

"I love you Edward."

"Do you want to get out and dry a bit?" Edward asked, taking my hand.

"Sure", I said, getting out of the pool and running towards the lounging chairs.

Edward smacked my ass as I passed him.

"Edward!" I laughed.

"What? You do have a nice ass…" he said, looking at it.

"Thank you? Haha" I grabbed the towel on the chair.

"Well then, let's get heading up. Remember were going to dinner tonight?" he reminded me.

Oh yes, Edward, I do remember. And I will get my revenge for you from earlier on today, for leaving me helpless. Oh yes…you wont see it coming to you…

I giggled silently, plotting out what I was going to wear.

I took a hold of Edwards hand, and together, we walked back into the room, not knowing the surprises that were going to happen in the evening.

Next Chapter! YAY

So yeah I have some ideas for whats going to happen in the upcoming chapters already (:

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