Okay guys, I have something important to tell you. Um, well it's not really important, but still.
Okay shugo1obsessed suggested I go Google "How to Write Fluff", considering the fluff failure I am X3
So I found out, writing in third person gives you "more flexibility". Therefore, this story is officially third storied now.
Yeah, that's it…
Day Six. You all know where :3
A blonde girl woke up this morning, feeling like she had just caught a glimpse of heaven. A girl can never feel so relifted in her life. She had the most remarkable dream a girl could have. Well, every girl has this dream, but Rima felt as though this one were real. Every element of this dream felt real.
But then just as Rima had reopened her eyes the other way and saw it.
Mr. Panda.
She allowed a shrill shriek of joy to escape her lips, fully aware that someone was asleep right next to her. Or, more precise to say, her new boyfriend. She turned face-to-face with him on the bed, completely content that it was him lying right besides her, not some other creepy person. She smiled at him while reaching out her hand to touch his.
Feeling his warmth, Rima blushed even more, which made her smile become almost unlikely. Nagihiko opened his eyes at the girl, and stared in her golden eyes, with a mesmerized look in his. It was heaven.
But after 5 minutes of silence and "heaven", Nagi spoke up, much to Rima's dismay.
"Good morning, princess."
Rima chuckled at his comment, now unafraid to open up to him. They were still holding hands, in lovey-dovey mode. The girl slowly unglued her hands from his.
"I'm going to take a shower, ne Nagi-koi?" she announced playfully. As soon as Nagi heard the honorific in that tone, and saw the play on her smirk, he remembered going into Amu-Tadase mode was definitely not going to be part of their relationship.
Nagihiko stood up.
"Would you like me to accompany you, madam? A pretty lady like you shouldn't be taking showers by yourself."
Both of their smirks had increased in length, doubled maybe. Quickly, Rima uncontrollably flung herself over to the opposite side of the room, throwing her arms around his neck, pushing him back onto the bed. She let her lips explore his face, with the lightest, but sweetest touch. They both loved each other all too much. As soon as Rima opened her eyes, she could sense the extreme lust penetrating through Nagihiko's.
His soft kisses in return began to convert into lustful nips on her face. Rima moaned in response to his sudden action. Nagi could tell Rima was loving this. He loved that. Rima, on the other hand, was so willing for a moment like this ever since she realized she loved Nagi. She was ready.
"Nagihiko…" she moaned.
"Rima…" he said in response.
"Take me…"
He nodded and stared so warmly at Rima. She returned his glare. Slowly, he began to grip the rim of her night dress, and lifted it up, with such passion, it was almost impossible to describe the romantic tension scene portrayed. The girl had her delicate petite hands clamped around the back of Nagihiko's neck. She knew what she was going to lose. Now she was half exposed, only wanting more—
Okay, you see? I'm trying the best I can at fluff. Don't just tell me I can't do it! At least give me some pointers! And before you go around critically judging my story, make sure you go read yours first! At least my story is practical~*cough*
So that little ecchi passage above was to tease you yucky people. Making these poor young tweenagers doing all sorts of mature stuff. Just let them act their age! Yeesh.
And just so you know, this story will continue to be first person. Completely Rima's POV. Just bear with me here.
The Way Things REALLY and APPROPRIATELY Went Down
I just had the weirdest dream ever. I thought it was too good to be true. There was just something about how perfect that dream was to be real. I loathed that fact. I closed my eyes, allowing my mind to be sent away, which will redeem me into slumber. But then I opened my eyes again, and to my surprise, saw…
Mr. Panda.
I let a small scream of happiness escape my lips. But to my dismay, it wasn't small enough.
"What was that?! You totally woke me up, Rima!" that boy complained. I got out of bed to get the big panda he won for me. Maybe he thought it was a dream, too? Carefully, I placed that oversized stuffed panda on the bed, right next to Nagi.
"You mean you and I are--," he started. I nodded before he continued, because I already knew what he was going to say.
"Yeah, but aren't you happy?" I asked. I saw a glance of confusion surface in his eyes. I felt betrayed. But then at that moment, as in response, I saw him smile. That smile.
"I'm overjoyed, Rima." he responded, pulling me into his arms. I hugged him back. "And I'm sorry for acting like such a jerk before. It's just that I was bored is all." I wanted to kick him so hard right now. He was bored and that was why he flirted with me. I'm happy that he's not doing it to bother me, at least. But he did it because he was bored?!
"Why didn't you just watch TV like any other civilized person would do?" I tested. He gently pushed me back. I saw disparity in his eyes. And he was panting like a mutt, too. "Hello? Earth to Nagi…?"
"We had a TV and I never knew!?"
I got off the bed and walked only seven steps to a tall closet. I turned back to make sure Nagi was watching. Then I yanked open the handle of the closet, revealing a black LCD HD Plasma TV.
I turned around, once again, but I wished I didn't. He looked angry at me, yet relieved, but stupid all the same. It was one of the "rabid bull" looks.
"Um, how about we find something else to do until you get over your freakish TV obsessed looks?"
First, Nagi and I made the bed. Then, we just lied down and stared at the ceiling.
But then, finally, I remembered something. Flipping over on my side, I turned face to face with him and smiled. Hopefully, it looked teasing.
"So you want me to be your bride, eh?" I smirked at him. I saw him blush, trying to hide it with his sleeve. But then, like the Nagi we all knew, he recovered just a split second later.
"I'd think you'd make a brilliant wife." he said, flashing a smile in my direction. Now, I blushed. I mean who wouldn't? "Also, our children would look really cute, if you're the mom…"
He was doing it again. Or maybe I should reconsider. Maybe it's just my mentality. Maybe he's just trying to be sweet, not a player. I should just appreciate it, not push it away. Suddenly, I remembered something that my mom had told me…
"Rima…" my mom said while driving.
"Yes, mama?"
"Nothing, I was just thinking how your name is so bland, is all."
So that's when I realized, if Nagi and me want children, they have to be beautiful, unique names. Once I told him what I thought, he just responded like how he would respond to anything.
"Sure, Rima-chan! If it's alright with you, then it's alright with me."
And soon enough, we were jotting down all these names on a notepad Nagi found in a drawer.
"Aidou?" Nagi suggested.
"No." I replied bluntly.
"Ichiru?" What the hell? Zero's brother who made him suffer?! O_O
"No." Duh.
"Kaname?"
"OH HELL NO. YOU'D NAME OUR KID AFTER THE GUY WHO WOULDN'T LET ZERO BE WITH YUUKI. WELL YOU KNOW WHAT? ZERO HAS NO FRIENDS, NO FAMILY, BARELY ANY HOPE, AND HE CAN'T EVEN HAVE THE ONE HE LOVES. THAT'S A LOAD OF—"
I was seriously sweating by now. I felt so stupid for sweating. All we were doing was giving names for a baby, right? I know I want something unique, but not notorious. It has to sound graceful, and successful. And cool, too. Nagi spoke up.
"Maybe it'll be easier to decide names for a child once we determine the quantity of the lot…?"
Huh?
Translation: Tell him how many babies I want and it'll be easier to name.
Honestly, I had to think about this for a while. Maybe longer, since Nagihiko was watching me think with that impatient look in his eyes. It's not that I'm dumb or anything, but I'm seriously stressing the answer.
If we have a lot of kids, then they can take care of each other while mommy and daddy strip down dirty.
If we have a little bit of kids, then less diapers.
Both solutions seemed extremely tempting, but in the end, I just had to think of other solutions.
"How about two females?" I finally said. If the two girls get along, great. They'll leave me and poppa alone.
"Oh, but Rima, I'll be the only guy in the family then…" he said trying to kiss me. I quickly moved my hand over his mouth.
"Tell you what. We'll get two male goldfishies."
"Deal."
Then this new proposal lead to a whole new list of female names. Except this time, it was my turn to pick.
"Kasumi?"
"No."
"Haruka?" Haruka's always been a lovely name to me.
"No."
I just decided to blow up then.
"Screw you, hunnie." I added to lighten the mood. "You name one kid, and I'll name the other.
"Fine."
I ripped half of the page he was on, grabbed a pencil, and stomped over to the coffee table while Nagi was still lounging on the bed.
I brought the pencil up high above my head, hoping that once the pressure in my arms allows it to drop, some good ideas were going to pour out.
None did.
So I decided a new naming technique.
Magazines.
I remember once, I read this article in a magazine from America, and it had just the most lovely name ever.
Is this it? Has Whitney Houston suffered from too much tequila?
There it was. Tequila was just perfect. It had the pretty ring to it, and it sounded foreign. I loved it. Tequila. I just love Tequila. (I love writing that. "I love Tequila" XD)
But then I remembered a few pages after that, I saw an even prettier name. It was Crystal…
Then again, Crystal might be too plain also.
So then I thought that maybe if I combined two names together, it'll be beautiful, like "Mary-Sue". Mary-Sue is such a gorgeous name. (X3)
So then in the end of the "Crystal" catastrophe, I ended up with "Crystal-Meth"
I learned the name "Meth" from the same magazine from which I learned "Tequila".
Britney Spears. The Sex. And Meth?!
Meth would be a wonderful half-name for a child, since it's basically "math" with an "e". It was all too perfect. I was ready to show Nagi my names.
I smiled to myself, sounding almost evil, but not intending to. If anyone heard me right now, they would think I was crazy, with the exception of Nagi, who know pretty well I am crazy.
"What's going on, Rima?" he asked.
"Nothing…Except I have the best names in the world in the palm of my hands!" I replied, holding the half-paper up, smiling widely.
"Hm, Tequila…OH MY….Meth….Yep, Rima I'd say these are the most original names I have ever heard! But honestly, I favor Tequila over Crystal-Meth…"
"Why?" I don't get it! It's perfectly beautiful name, what's the big deal? Was it because he assumed it would be too inappropriate, too simple, what could be the problem?
"Meth sounds more like a guy name, Rima. I thought you said you wanted two girls." I gave in. He liked Tequila, though. I'm glad. As soon as I saw his, list, I saw that it was….blank. How strange. "I like the name 'Corona'."
Hey, Tequila and Corona. I like that.
This chapter wasn't to offend anyone, btw. Wasn't to support anything either, so don't get ideas XD
I heard the most beautiful song yesterday, and it totally suits Rimahiko. It's "Never Knew I Needed" by Neyo. Seriously, look it up. You're going to cry. I'm going to AMV it~
Okay, you know the drill!
Review, for the sake of Tequila and Corona!
Btw, Corona is a sort of beer X3