AUTHORS NOTE (IMPORTANT): As some of you may know I have gotten a few reviews stating Rory's grandparents' reactions and Paris' reactions are not realistic and completely uncalled for. In my defense, they are hard characters to portray and secondly, for Richard at least, Rory is his granddaughter, she is supposed to have the life Lorelai never had, and he doesn't want to screw it up with a baby like Lorelai.
Then there's Paris, she is headstrong, and in a way thinks her opinion is the only opinion. When Paris reacts so rudely to Rory it is because she is freaked out thinking Rory is making the biggest mistake of her life. Paris cares about Rory, she doesn't anything bad to happen to her (remember season 6 episode 17 when Paris is angry with Logan for what he did to Rory- which is another complicated situation I don't want to get into).
To make my point clear, I would like your honest reviews to keep coming. This is not saying that I will make any changes, but I will possibly take them into consideration when writing more. I would like you, though, to take my prospective as an author before reviewing rudely and making me feel bad (remember: saying "no offence" doesn't take away the offence that has been given). That's all I have to say. Thanks for reading and enjoy chapter fourteen. R&R PLEASE!!!
Chapter Fourteen: Discussion
Paris looked at me as if I didn't belong there. This, however, was completely unreasonable considering Stars Hollow is my home town and my mother owned the property we where standing on.
"What are you doing here?" She bit my head off. Wow, Paris was either really ticked off at me, or something had taking over her body, my guess is the first one.
"I'm here to see my mother."
"Well, why? Don't you have classes today or something?!" Maybe it was something taking over her body.
"I needed to get away." I whispered.
"From Logan, right? I knew it, he's bad news Rory."
"Are you serious?" Seriously, what the heck.
"I am totally serious, Rory, he isn't good for you, remember the Funders Day Punch?"
"Wait a second," I held up my finger "that was a different situation."
"Then what's the situation now?"
"It's just different okay?" Paris sighed and huffed out of the room calling back:
"Lorelai? Would you come here a minute?" Mom started out the door to Paris waiting just outside.
"Wait, Mom, I've got to talk to you."
"Well, I came here to see Lorelai," Paris sneered.
"She's my mother."
"Oh, so there are dibs now?" she snapped.
"Well, she is my mom!"
"So what?"
"So, I get to talk to her first!"
"Is that like a rule or something? 'Cause I've never heard it before."
"Guys! Come on," my mother finally stopped our bickering "what's this about?"
"Its nothing, just Rory and her whole pregnancy thing," Paris said.
"You act like this fight is my fault!" I screamed at her.
"Stop!" But it wasn't my mother talking, it was Dean.
AUTHORS NOTE: I'm bored, don't feel like typing anymore, so I am going to post this short chapter. . .blah blah blah. R&R
