Hey guys, I'm writing this before school and I have a little boost of energy so… yeah. People PMd me saying I had to continue. I'm not going to name names but yeah.

Universe-is-a-Mystery: thank you, also pleaaase update! It was the first thing that made me smile yesterday. I mean like a real smile not that shit I have to do to hide my actual feelings from people. ANYWAY that got kind of dark…

Guest1: thanks for not being mad

Guest2: not trying to be rude but…do I know you?

BooksLover2000 : my dear BooksLover2000, I always push myself. You know this. Anywhozyz much luv gurl.

FOUR POV:

Tris looks back at me and smiles every so often. I would make a funny face or wink just to see her laugh or blush.

"Four, come here." She says and everyone stops walking. I jog up beside Zeke and Tris tugs the collar of my shirt, bringing me close to her. I smirk and softly press my lips to hers. Zeke makes fake vomit noises and I hold up my middle finger, not pulling away. He stops and I pull back.

"Yes Trissy?" I smile and she giggles.

"Don't call me Trissy." She says and I pout.

"But I like calling you Trissy, Trissy." I say and she rolls her eyes.

"Four, you can handle the pain of holding her right?" Zeke asks and I shake my head.

"No I got sho-" I'm cut off by Tris screaming.

"STOP. STOP. STOP. STOP." She shouts and Zeke's eyes go wide. He sets her down on the ground and kneels down in front of her.

"Marlene!" He shouts and she blinks rapidly, staring at Tris.

"Tris, calm down, block them out, come on Tris you'll be okay, Tris!" I start shaking her shoulders and she shakes her head, tears streaming down her face.

"Mom I'm sorry…I-I didn't mean to hurt you." She whispers. Will rushes over and cradles Tris in his arms. I feel a pang of jealousy but now's not the time.

"Tris, shhh it wasn't your fault. Tris it's going to be okay." He whispers into her hair and she starts calming down. Oh yea urm. There will be no romance here hes more of a brother figure. I'm just informing you guys. "Tris, are you okay now?" He asks and she nods with a hiccup. "See, you're fine, you know what you need?" He asks and she shakes her head with a small smile. "Cake."

We walk into an old building with a small sign that reads 'The Pit' I've heard of this place but never been here before. It's an old empty pub with just one girl behind the bar.

"Hey, welcome to the pit. You guys look a little underage…" She eyes us suspiciously and Zeke shrugs.

"Just here for cake." Uriah says and we nod.

"What's with the gun wounds?" She asks and I sigh.

"Long story."

"I've got nothing but time hun. I'm Nita by the way." She says winking at me. I roll my eyes and take a small look at Tris. She's glaring at Nita. I sit down at one of the stools and Zeke sets Tris down next to me. "So… what's your name?" Nita asks me, leaning over the bar.

"Four." I say simply and she puts a hand on my arm.

"Well… Four… I like you, you like me too, I can tell." She says and I try to hold in my laughter.

"Really? Well I don't think my girlfriend would be okay with this" I say, my eyes flicking to Tris for one second then back to Nita.

"She doesn't have to know." She says and leans in for a kiss. That's when I lose it. I start laughing and pull Tris onto my lap. I kiss softly behind her ear and trail kisses down her neck. She shivers and I smirk against her neck. I hear Nita scream in frustration.

"So, I never did get to properly ask, will you be my girlfriend?" I whisper into Tris' ear, causing her to shiver again. She nods and I grin.

HEY GUYS. I WILL BE UPDATING BECAUSE I HAVE NOTHING ELSE TO DO. AND I HATE NOT DOING ANYTHING.