221: Making s'mores with a candle is actually fairly easy. Not hard at all.

222: Max kisses Dylan.

223: When they hear the alarm and run to the window, Nudge see's Fang. Dylan, with his great sight, should have seen Fang and had some type of reaction, but there isn't a reaction from him, which means he either is a flipping good actor (which he isn't, with his heart on his sleeve) or Nudge has better eyesight than Dylan.

224: Nudge wore a nightgown. Now that you mention it, in book one Max also wore a nightgown, even though Max hates dresses AND nightgowns are impractical in case, you know, something ATTACKS THEM!

225: If Mark was in charge, who brainwashed Mark?

226: They don't kill Mark the second they see him

227: They freak out because they see two feathers in clamps. How did these feathers not burn? And why would this worry them? There's no corpse! That's a good thing!

228: After getting Angel back, the first thing Fang does is tell Max "we need to talk. About us." I'd think that ANGEL would be more important, but no, apparently not!

229: Max says "I remember what he wrote on a cactus once: Max and Fang forever". When was this? Where were they, for there to be a cactus? Also, this is untrue, since he leaves all the damn time. Also, Max, you just saved your baby. Why are you doing this now, of all times?

230: Dylan destroys a town then leaves. They are trying to save the world (though there isn't a lot of that stuff going on anymore, wonder why?) and he destroys a town.

PS: Sorry about the Henry/Harry thing. That was my fault. Sorry!

-Iggy

A/N: Hey! Hiiiii! Yes, this is based off Cinema Sins. Thank you, Cinema Sins! I was thinking of doing some bonus chapters. Like "proof that James Patterson was originally going to have Ari fall in love with Max and then realized that since literally everyone else was in love with Max it would be weird". Also, there's a Maximum Ride MARVEL COMIC out now! It's called "Maximum Ride: First Flight", and it is completely different then the series. I was thinking of doing a chapter for each comic, so this thing can go on a lot longer. What do you guys think? Should I do it?

I'm also going to do a chapter based only on what guest reviewers and regular reviewers have told me what they don't like about the series.

Anyways, have a great first few weeks of summer, 'k? I love you but not in a weird way! Bye!

-FireStarRD