A/N: Heres chapter 14, Like, the most dramatic chapter in the whole story! Enjoy!
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Chapter 14: Let it rain

"Damn, I still can't figure out what that scream was!"-usopp

"Why do you care?"-sanji

"..."-usopp

"?"-sanji

There was a long silence.

"Nevermind" -sanji

"where are we headed anyway?" Usopp asked

"Where the scream came from."

"I thought you didn't care."

"I don't."

"Then why are we going?"

"Where else are we going to go?"

"I guess you've got a point..."

"Now can you stop asking questions?"

"Whatever, heartless."

"You know who your talking to, right?"

"nevermind."

(to Luffy and Nami)

Birds flew overhead as the sound of thunder screamed at Luffy .

He turned over a few times trying to ignore the loud sound but it didn't work, and even if it did the shock of remembering Nami would anyway. Luffy slowly opened his evey to a crow looking him in the face as if he were dinner.

Luffy pushed it aside as he slowly woke up.

Wha..., Luffy slowly got to his feet, trying to remember what happened. He blinked a few times as he looked out over the mountain. What happened? He thought.
All of a sudden Luffy's eyes opened wide as he almost instantly remembered everything. NAMI, He thought as he turned around torwards the opening of the cave to see her.

She was still there. He ran up to her as rast as he could then got on his nees beside her. She still didn't move an inch, not one sign of movment at all.

He closely examined her face.

It was as pail as gray.

He softly touched her face.

It was cold as death.

Luffy felt as if he were going to cry. Nami...You can't be...NO! He thought this over and over again, each time making him hate himself even more.

He turned her over facing him then he examined her face again still not wanting to belive she was gone. Now, Luffy started to cry.

"Look what I've done..." He mutterd.
He carefully picked up Nami the walked torwards the edge of the large ledge thats view once looked so wonderful to Luffy.

Now, It looked like a nightmare that he couldn't get himself out of. Rain stormed down and lightning flashed against the sky. Luffy collapsed to his nees, Nami still in his arms. Luffy looked down at her white, pail face. Luffy looked up and screamed at the sky.

"WHY! WHY'D YOU TAKE HER! I DESERVE TO DIE!"

After Luffy was long sculding the sky he looked back down at her pail, blank face.

More Tears streamed down his depressed face. He Held her tighter then pressed his cheek against hers.

"Don't leave me..." He wispered.

(To Usopp and Sanji)

The Next hour or two of thier trip was quiet. Both of them didn't speek a word as if something horrible just happened that they could not explain. Why do I all of a sudden feel so depressed? Usopp thought.

"Hey, Usopp" Sanji said "Why are you so quiet, and don't tell me its because I told you to be quiet. You'd talk anyway."

"I Feel like some one just died or something..."

"Why do you feel that?"

"Thats the problem, I don't know."

"I feel the same way. Like something bad just happened and we missed it. What an anoying feeling."

"Is this the way zolo always feels?"

"He doesn't always have a problem."

"Where do you think the feeling is coming from?"

"Who knows."

"Do you think Luffy and Nami feel the same way."

"Mabie, but how are we sure they're still alive"

"You think they're dead!"

"No, but it's posible."

(To zolo)

Zolo slowly woke up as rain pored down. He sat in the shack stairing out into the ocean. What's taking them so damn long? He thought, Mabie I should go find em'?

For once in his life, zolo felt clueless, and hopeless.

He No longer felt confedent and like he knew what he was doing. Zolo also felt a strange depresion, one he had never felt before. sleep, He thought. Then he went back to sleep.

(to Luffy and Nami)

Luffy continued to cry as hard as he posibly could. Then he lifted his face and Shook Nami back and fourth.

"WAKE UP!" He yelled.

He stopped shacking her and hugged her even highter.

Its all my fault, He thought.

As he cryed on Nami's shoulder, Nami's hand budged. Just a little, But it was more than enough to get Luffy's attention.

"Nami?" he asked, demanding a reply.

Nami started breathing again, but not very hard. Luffy examined Nami, waiting for something to happen.

One of Nami's eye lids slowly opened.

"Luffy?" she wispered as he came into view.

Luffy smiled widly as he hugged Nami as tight as he could.

"Your alive!" He Yelled.

Nami's last words before she feel back asleep were," Why wouldn't I be?"

When Luffy brought himself to stop hugging her he picked her up and carried her inside he cave and sat down against the wall.

He didn't set Nami down though, but just keeped holding her as he feel asleep as well. That night, was very cold.

To be continued...(REVIEW!)

Authors Note: Dramatic, no? My friends thought so, chapter 15 soon so long as you review!