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Alphonse and "kevin" stood in front of the door of the shack. Alphonse lifted his hand heitantly before knocking on the door. "GO THE FUCK AWAY!" a voice called gruffly from inside. Kevin turned to Alphonse eyebrows quickered up. "You gotta love his bedside manner." he joked sarcastically before he too knocked ont he door. the door banged open realing a disevaled middle aged man with an obvious sour diposition. "What the hell do you want?" he demaned glarring at them with his bloodshot eyes nearly causing Al to falter. "I am ALohonse Elric the soul binding alchemist You may know of my father whom is the fuher.."He rambled nervously. "get on with it young man I am not growing younger!" the doctor said gruffly. "Well Mr. Knox I have heard of your talents and I was wondering if you could help me out." Alphone said as he tried to gain a backbone.

Dr. Knox studdied the young man infront of him with a critical eye. "Your not sick." he stated mater a factively. "A little fatigued maybe but sick no. What the hell would you need my help for?" he asked getting impaitant. "No sir it's not me its my younger brother.. I think he maybe dying and the doctors say he is incurable and we dont know what else to do so i thought that maybe..." Alphonse explained. "That i would cure your brother?" the doctor finnised scowling to which Al nodded. "What do you say?" he asked bitting his lower lip. The doctor looked at him for a moment almost contemplating it however his look hardened. "I say that you can have your brother tell me what Hell is like." he said before he slammed the door in their faces.

"Well that was a waist of time wasnt it?" kevin commented as if he knew what was going to happen the whole time. "So yo are just going to go back n ow right? I mean he is obviously not going ot help you." he said loftily. Alphonse shook his head stobornly. "No i am not. I promised my family i would bring him back to central and I am going ot keep my promise." he said firmly a fire in his eyes. Kevin gave an eagerated sigh. "I swear your family is so difficult." he said airily. Alphonse turned his attention back to kevin and frowned perplexed. "What do you mean by that?" he asked studying the man before him who now held a cunning and very evil look on his perfect face. "I mean you should of gave up Al." he replied beofre changing back into his normal form reaviling himself as Envy. Alphonse backed up with widened eyes. "But your dead!" he stuttered. Envy gave an annoyed snort. "Next time make sure a person is dead before you call time of death." he replied as Al felt a prick in his arm and darkness consumed him.

Kimblee strolled into the hospital and made sure he snuck past the doctors and into the room that was Edward's. There was surprisingly no one in the room at the moment. His parents he knew were out getting something to eat and His self rightous brother was In steal but he had expected to of had to deal with losing his loser friends. i guess luck is on myside.. as ushual . He thought cockily. He smirked down at the freak laying down in front of him. He was so puny even more so than ushual which had to be an all time low. Hell He coudl even see his bones threatening to protrude in certain places. How did that woman expect him to taunt a idiot who is in acomma? just than he remembered a certain alchemic move that can temporarily wake a person up but it would require alot out of him in the equivalant exchange.. fortunently that Dante chick had given him a little present. he took the red stone and held it over the boy's head before he clumsily clapped his hands togeather. A strange red light glowed arround Edwards head before it subsided. the stone became more glossy and less impressive looking reminding KImblee that it only had so many useses left.

He didn't have to wait long for the stone to work. Edward' eyes opened part way. The normally lively golden eyes were now dull and lifeless. He turned his head weakly and starred at him blearily clearly not aware of his surroundings. Kimblee frowned and glared at the stone blaming it for the fact that his prey was obviously not all there mentially. It wasnt really all that strong as he hoped it would be. "Hey pipsqueak." he said cheerfully desipite his disapointment he was still going to have some fun. The boy didn't respond he merely starred unblinkingly at the bully. "I heard that you tried to save your stupid father." he quipped. "Too bad you failed." he lied deviously. He noticed a small flicker in the lifeless face. feeding off it he contiuned. "Yea hate to tell you this but he is dead now you have failed and soon your brother is going to join him too. Isn't that lovely they are all going to be in heaven togeather too bad your too much of a freak to be accepted but at least you will get to have my company in hell." he said off handedly. although Edwards face was unmoving Kimblee noted with great intreast that his heard monitar was rising espectionally high indeicating stress. it was getting dangerously high and his breathing was becoming fast and yet unnervingly shallow. Kimblee licked his lips in pleasure at the sight before him. "You'r dying Edward. how does it feel?" he asked tauntingly as he poked the boys gun wound cauing it to reopen. "Does it feel... painful?" he asked in a disturbingly sweat tone. Edward's lifeless eyes became wide as he screamed helplessly before he went into a cardiac arrest and kimblee walked out the door listening to the loud warning beaping noise comming from Edwards hear monitar. He began to hum a little tune to himself a little tune that morbidly mathced the beat of the machine. "I hope he dies." he thought as he humouriously watched the nurses and doctors franticlly rush into the room however quickly hid when he noticed Winry and LIn's hurry over frantically with a look of fear and worry filling their faces as they heard the doctors frantically yell "heartfailuer We need a crash cart stat!"

Winry covered her mouth as she listened to everything going on. She and Lin had heard Edward scream but they didn't expect to see this! "Edo... don't die!" she pleaded. Lin looked over at his freind and than back at the door where the doctors were inside trying desperately to reive the boy. "Winry you don't have to hear all this lets just go to the waiting room." lin said gently but firmly. "But Edo..." She said tearfully. "Edo is dying!" she said a little louder now in a somewhat frantic tone. "Edo is dying!"