Forever in the Never After Extra Chapter.
Ok as promissed this is the lemon chapter. You can find the lemon under mature section in Soul Eater. Labled Forever in the Never After Lemon Sequence from Chapter 14.
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Spoilers Do not read this before you read chapter 14 if you are going to read Chapter 14.
Most of the time when I read really good things on they use the cop out of having the character having already having sex. Or for some reason they are magically empowered with the ability to have mind blowing sex scenes even though it is there first time. That part while great to read just isn't realistic to expect from two virgins, especially a prude like Maka, and a socially inept guy like Kid, who is more likely to fall apart during sex than have a good performance without doing some homework first.
As a author, I found writing awkward teenagers exploring sex for the first time was a hard write. I'm more of smut fan myself and found that a Anita Blake hardcore romp with hormones is easier to write than trying to make a gentle explorative sex scene with little biting scratching or out a little domination. The whole time I was writing this, I kept saying "this sucks!"
I wanted a nice sweet little love scene, I got two sloppy teenagers trying to awkwardly figure their way through things. In a way that is what I think your first experience with a guy or girl is like. Way too awkward, and confused about what to do and how to move.
Hopefully it will read ok even if it did feel kind of clunky repetitive and started and stopped too much.
I promise later chapters, that contain more lemon will become more cleaner, more fluid less talk and more action, but I wanted them to learn a little at a time. I think a lot of writers forget that sex when your first starting out is mess uncomfortable and when both parties are virgins it's just plain clunky.
So overall I hated this chapter I apologize for it in advanced, I let someone talk me into publishing it even though I feel its hardly good enough to let out. I have decided "I Suck writing teenage sex ." So Gomen Nasai please don't drop me from favorites for this chapter, next chapter will be back to plot and action, later lemon content will be better because the first attempt is out of the way and I'm sending Kid to Hentai land to be re-educated since he is a boy and now he has had a small taste of what he wants.
So end the end I probably cop-out and gave you another lime but it still was to explicit to be classed as Teenage so Sumimasen I will continue to improve.
SOUL EATER MST3K of Chapter 14
Death the Kid: I'm never going to get any am I?
Neko: God damn it I'm trying! You got a little didn't you?
Death the Kid: I'm a boy I'm never content and why the hell did you make me cry after.
Neko: I just wanted you to seem a little more, in touch with your inner goddess.
Death the Kid: I'm a god not a goddess why do you people do this to me. You make me look like a damn Yaoi boy! I'm a man do you understand that? A man! God damn authors are always de-emasculating me!
Maka: I thought it showed how gentle you are how much you trying to feel loved. It's like Kid-kun is hungry for love more than anything else. I thought it was cute.
Death the Kid: [blushes a bit] ok your forgiven only because Maka thought it was ok.
Soul: What the hell are you complaining about? I didn't get to do anything in this chapter or the last!
Black Star: Yeah and it's obvious that I'm the god damn Hero how come Kid got the girl!
Soul: Yeah I'm kind of pissed at that too!
Black Star: I say we stomp her head in!
Tsubaki: Let's not be so hasty!
Black Star: Have you read her rough draft on what she's going to have happen to you? You aren't going to be so happy with her if you start reading her notes.
Soul: Why what happens to Tsubaki?
Maka: Shut up your going to ruin the plot!
Tsubaki: Is something bad happening to me?
Maka: Not you particularly but...
Black Star: See I told you she is evil incarnate but you ass holes didn't listen to me.
Neko: I think I'm going to run a way now and find some hole to hide in till the holidays are over. OH one more note! I'm baking and its Christmas, so I will try to get out another chapter before the holidays but hubby, in laws and cooking take precedent over fan fiction.
Soul: Your such a liar, your going to be making cookies what a couple of day, your just planning to drink too much, and gamble more because its the holidays.
Black Star: She's already making plans to go to the casino with her in-laws.
Neko: I never drink too much!
Tsubaki: What about thanksgiving?
Maka: Sangria...
Neko: But I got a chapter out the next day! I wrote all night.
Black Star: On a buzz!
Neko: I was not buzzed! Normal people get tired when they have too much to drink. I just had a glass.
Maka: It was a sports bottle sized glass!
Neko: Well the damn turkey was dry!
Kid: Wait till she gets a hold of the eggnog.
Maka: I thought only old people drink eggnog.
Soul: Look who we are talking about here! She's got more gray ones coming in than I do!
Neko: Cries, I'm not a old gambling lush!
Maka: Maybe we should start calling her Grandma Tsunada!
Black Star: That fits perfectly...
Neko: No it doesn't! no it doesn't!
Black Star: Yeah she married Perv Sage too...
Liz: This is what happens when old women have no Kid's to take care of, and live with gamer husbands and ferrets! They become Josei reading housewives with too much time on their hands.
Neko: I love my ferrets though!
Soul: Sleep it off you damn lush, and don't come back till you find a way to fix the plot and make sure I'm back with Maka!
Black Star: NO way dude I should get Maka. I'm the nice one!
Death the Kid: Fat chance, Plot seems fine to me except I keep turning into a cry baby after sex!
Black Star: No )*&^ Way. I think we have all had enough NERD on NERD.
Maka: WE DIDN'T HAVE SEX!
Soul: What you had sex last chapter! Where the F)*^ was I?
Death the Kid: Yes Maka took my virginity!
Black Star: What I should have been the one to tap that! NO Nerd-boy! How the hell did you even pull that off as neurotic as you are.
Liz: [laughing so hard she is buckling over] I can imagine that... Maka your too far to the left. Maka you are too far to the right. Maka god damn it why can't you stay symmetrical for me!
Maka: It wasn't like that at all!
Patty: [pouts]Maka how come you had sex with Kid-kun instead of me?
Maka: Err because were girls!
Patty: But I like Maka the most! Neko-sama can I have Maka in the next story?
Maka: [blushing and looking frightened and confused]
Black Star: I think I'd like to see that!
Soul: Strangely I think I would too as long as I don't have to get beat to death by Patty.
Liz: Quit having perverted thoughts about my sister and Maka. Kid say something.
Death the Kid: I kind of have to agree with Soul and Black Star on this one.
Tsubaki: Boys are such scumbags!
Liz: Say something Neko!
Neko: I really liked Utena and Bamboo Blade, I think you can have love between two girls and it be a beautiful thing, it doesn't have to be sexual it can just be deep friendship. Like Sakura and Tomoyo from Card Capture Sakura. And Anthy and Utena, she chose her best friend over the guy who loved her. It was so beautiful!
Soul: Well than why waste time on neurotic Death the Kid! Let see some girl on girl.
Neko: You completely missed the point of what I was talking about.
Liz: You expect them to understand that concept.
Neko: [sighs] probably not.
Liz: Just finish writing the Kiddo fic than.
Tsubaki: It's probably the safer choice of the two.
Black Star: but I wanna see Patty get fresh with Maka!
ALL Girls: Shut up! Your opinion don't count.
Soul: That could be sooo much better than this fic. I'd like some late night reading.
Maka: [snort] As if you know how to read.
Death the Kid: But I do...
Maka: [blushes] You'd read something like that!
Kid: Anything with you Maka!
Soul: [snidely] Anything with you Maka.
Kid: If we are diving into the deaths of darkness and are going to turn into a Anita Blake smut story can I be Jean Claude?
Neko: You think you can handle that role.
Kid: I would like try! What do you think Ma Petite?
Maka: HELL NO! KId-kun can not be Jean Claude. I'm not going to be called My Petite ever other sentence, and I'm not going to do all that naughty stuff Anita Blake does. Her boyfriends are into whips and chains and stuff!
Liz: What are they talking about?
Tsubaki: Dirty house wife fiction! I love Jean Claude! I think the story should go that way!
Kid: See someone is on my side! Come on Neko make me cool! I want to be slick and...
Neko: And get laid, I know I know you want to get laid and you don't want to look like a girl! I get it. I'll write you a damn chapter.
Soul & Black Star: What about us!
Maka: [stomping her foot ]Nobody is screwing me!
Neko: Sorry Maka...
Kid: YES!
Maka: What the hell is that suppose to mean?
Kid: You will find out later! Ma Petite.
Maka: Quit talking like that! Your making me nervous!
Tsubaki: So this is going to be a love story?
Neko: Supernatural, Love story but a love story!
Tsubaki: I love it.
Black Star: You aint gonna love her soon.
Tsubaki: Shut up Black Star I don't want to hear anymore! Your going to ruin the plot.
Soul: What happens to Tsubaki?
Black Star: Come here I whisper it into your ear.
Soul: OH god Tsubaki I'm sorry...
Tsubaki: Your not going to trick me, I don't know whats going to happen, I know Neko won't kill me will you Neko!
Neko:...
Tsubaki: Your going to kill me?
Neko:...NO not kill you.
Black Star: You want to see it I stole her pages I got it here somewhere.
Neko: Quit reading ahead, I don't even know if those pages are going to be part of the story or not!
Black Star: Here Tsubaki read this right here!
Tsubaki: Gets wide eyed. How how could you!
Neko: Its not like I'm killing you or anything! I like you your my girl!
Tsubaki: And you find this acceptable? {Tsubaki complains wadding up the script}
Neko: Its a drama no one really dies in real life, its a play... Just like acting on stage or watching TV.
Tsubaki: I hate you your just plain evil just what Black Star says!
Neko: I'm only giving you this role because you have the range to play it! I know you can do this in the fashion I have it written, and since it's just a script you can perform it perfectly with your subtle acting. We are talking academy award winning drama stuff here.
Soul: Your not that good of a writer.
Neko: But She's that good of a character. She's going to make it better even if my writing is shotty.
Tsubaki: It's not real life...I'll get to be a dramatic lead.
Neko: Yes, you're the painful character, and some of the most dramatic stuff in the story is going to rotate around you...
Tsubaki: {smacking her fist} I proudly accept this role!
Neko: Thats my girl.
Soul: Your so damn manipulative!
Neko: If you keep running that big mouth of yours sharky I'm duck taping you to the ground. In my opinion you're the most annoying of all the characters here! Your manipulative, you endanger peoples' lives, you hurt Maka nearly constantly and if any character is getting killed it's going to be you.
Soul: So you think your man enough to Kill me off!
Neko: No I'm woman enough to throw you in the back ground and make you not even noticeable.
Soul: Is that a threat.
Neko: God I hate you! I should make you fall in love with a minor character and write your ass out of the story. You do nothing but just get in my way.
Soul: Well the show is called SOUL EATER. I am the damn lead, and your making Kid the lead.
Neko: That's not even your real name, Your last name is EVANS. You come from a rich family and your just running away because you can't deal with your brother.
Kid: Here they go again...
Maka: Do you think we should stop them. He's going to piss her off and she will write him out.
Kid: I'm not going to stop her, Souls been a pain in the neck to me since the beginning of the script, This would have been a nice little fluffy love story between the two of us had he not been involved.
Maka: Then the story would have had no plot.
Kid: I don't need plot I just need you.
Soul: Enough with the panty dropping lines Maka aint buying it.
Maka: [blushes scarlet]
Neko: You leave him alone he's not doing anything to you!
Soul: OH for gods sake just write your next chapter.
Neko: Fine
Soul: Fine