Edge leaned against the wall and shook his head. Rey sat on the floor with
his back against the wall, Edge turned around and looked at him, he looked
a bit remorseful about what he had said to Nidia, but he hadn't seemed too
upset.
"Dude, I think you've been a little too hard on Nidia." Edge admitted with a sigh.
"Please don't tell me your on her side too!" Rey exclaimed.
"I'm not on anybody's side, I'm just saying she has feelings, and maybe you should take that into consideration." Edge explained.
"She likes it when people are mean to her. Maybe if I'm nice to her she'll get off my back." Rey exclaimed.
"Is that all you care about? Look, I can respect the fact that you don't like her, but that's no reason to treat her like that." Edge offered.
"This is because of that Katie girl huh?" Rey asked "Besides, I've said worse things to her in spanish and she's said worse to me." He insisted.
"I think you really hurt her." Edge admitted. Rey cupped his head in his hands and let out a frustrated sigh.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Crystal and Taker actually got into a deep personal conversation. She began to act as if she were about to cooperate and then slyly struck up a conversation about something else. It was amazing how much they had in common.
"I've never told anyone that." Taker admitted after telling her a story about his past. She couldn't believe he had shared a private moment with her. "I love Sara, we have our problems but everyone does." He added.
"You met her too soon." Crystal replied.
"What do you mean?" Taker asked curiously.
"Cause you didn't get the chance to meet me first" Crystal frowned. "I know what I want for the notebook." She added. This would completely betray her friends, but they would understand, right? She loved Taker, so they would definitely understand, but what if they didn't? After all, she would be betraying them.
"Name it" Taker answered finally realizing he had forgotten all about the notebook. How could he forget something like that, and how long had they been talking?
"I can look at you, but I can't hold you. Even if I did hug you, I'd never truly hold you. Sara has something so special, something I'd give anything for. I'll never be able to have you for the rest of my life because your married to her, but I want you tonight. Give me what I want, and I'll give you what you want." Crystal offered.
~*~*~*~*~
Sam and Staci spotted Mollie talking to Trish and Bubba. It was as if sunlight had hit Staci's face for the first time. She ran up to them with anticipation filling her chest, this was the moment she had been waiting for. She stumbled over her own two feet and fell right at Bubba's feet. Trish, Stacy, Mollie, and Sam all laughed. Mollie and Sam tried to hold it in but they couldn't help it. Bubba slightly chuckled as well. He and Mollie bent down and began to help her up. He was actually touching her!
"Are you ok?" Bubba asked
"Yeah, that was a pretty nice fall." Mollie grinned "Guys this is Staci, and she's practically in love with Bubba." She added. Staci's eyes bulged out, how could Mollie tell them that?! Sure, everyone else knew, but now she didn't know how to act around him, she blushed as he glanced at her.
"Sorry, he's taken" Trish smiled, holding his hand. She normally didn't mind Trish, but right now, she couldn't stand her.
"And this is Sam" Mollie added. "Their my friends." She explained. Sam also shook their hands. She stood slightly behind Stacy and couldn't help but laugh, she didn't mean to draw attention to it, but she couldn't hold it in.
"What?" Bubba asked
"Yeah, what's so funny?" Trish questioned.
"Oh, nothing" Sam insisted, but everyone knew, whatever it was had to be about Staci.
"What is it?" Staci asked looking back. Her pants had split down the middle in the back. It must have happened when she fell. Soon enough Mollie caught a glimpse of the embarrassing moment, and she couldn't hide it from any of them, and she struggled to hold her pants together. They tried to hold back any laughter, as her face turned red.
"It's nothing to be embarrassed about, it happens to a lot of people" Bubba reasoned
"Red hearts huh?" Trish giggled referring to her underwear. Mollie, Sam, and Stacy giggled as well.
"I have heart underwear" Sam lied, trying to ease the embarrassment. This was Writie's fault! It had to be! She was never that bad of a cluts, maybe it was because she was so nervous to be around Bubba.
"Me or Trish probably have some pants or something you can wear." Stacy offered.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Rachel stumbled to her feet.
"Ouch, that was a stiff closeline, one point for Lita" Matt announced.
"I barely even touched her and she can hardy walk" Lita complained.
"I was caught off guard!" Rachel protested. "Matt, you know you should choose me!" She insisted with a huge smiled, displaying her cute dimples. Matt grinned at her.
"One more point for the cuteness" He decided. She continued to bat her eyes at him as Lita looked on in anger.
"Matt, do you really wanna leave this?" Lita asked as she grabbed him and passionately kissed him. Rachel's mouth dropped open. Lita released him with a big smile.
"Whoa, 5 points for that." Matt gasped.
"You bitch!" Rachel yelled angrily. She suddenly kicked Lita in the stomach and delivered Matt's finishing move, the Twist Of Fate, with electrifying "Mattitude." Matt's mouth hung open in shock. She stood there proudly as Lita struggled to get up. Lita hadn't even been paying attention to the little runt, and now she had gotten in a cheap shot!
"Wow." Matt began in surprise Rachel cut him off by cupping his face and delivering a kiss of her own. Now, Lita was back on her feet and more pissed off than ever.
"that was 10 points" Matt admitted trying to regain his composure.
"10 points!" Lita cried outraged.
"A Twist Of Fate, followed by a kiss, it doesn't get much better than that." Matt reasoned. Lita speared Rachel onto the floor and they began to roll around and pull each other's hair. Lita gave her a few chops in the chest, and the delivered a DDT. She ran to a near by table and climbed on top of it. She flew through the air performing an amazing moonsault, and Rachel was unable to avoid contact. Rachel could barely defend herself as she laid on the floor weakly. She figured she's get her ass kicked, but damn! Lita threw her to the floor as Matt looked on intently. What was she thinking?! She could never beat Lita! Lita left her in the middle of the room, as Matt checked on her. She came back with a chair.
"Oh god!" Rachel groaned.
"Lita, ok, you won, it's going too far." Matt insisted
"No, she didn't win!" Rachel cried
"I told you I wasn't going to fight her, you insisted, so, now I'm gonna finish it!" Lita declared as she raised the chair above her head.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Steph and Kerry walked down the hall with Shelton.
"So, you wrestled with Brock?" Kerry asked thinking of the vicious monster.
"Yeah, we were roommates." Shelton answered.
"Oh, can you guys wait here for a second, I forgot my jacket back there." Kerry asked
"Ok, just try not to get lost." Steph warned
"You two behave while I'm gone." Kerry joked
"You have amazing eyes" Shelton smiled "Steph, I think we really could have something" He added as he pulled her close.
"We just met" Steph gulped
"Yeah, but I like you, and you like me, what do you say we make it official?" Shelton proposed.
"Um." Steph began nervously. She couldn't turn him down she'd feel awful! She was just too damn nice! But she could just be with him, she had a crush on someone else. "Maybe we should." She began again but his puppy eyes got to her, as his grip got tighter.
"Should what?" Shelton asked
"Ok, yes, it's official." Steph sighed. He excitedly hugged her and just as he was about top seal it with a kiss, Kerry returned.
"Alright, let's go!" Kerry chirped.
"Now, I need to be excused, I really need to use the bath room." Steph admitted as she walked down the hall.
"Hurry!" Kerry urged.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Katie hugged Nidia as she cried on her shoulder. Nidia was the last person she ever thought she'd be comforting. She actually really felt bad for her.
"I really liked him." Nidia sniffled
"Why don't you tell him that? Instead of trying to rape him, maybe you should be real with him, so he'll take you seriously. I didn't know if Edge would like me, but I was just myself and we hit it off great." Katie suggested
"You see the way he treats me, he's never gonna take me seriously. What's so bad about me? What's wrong with me?" Nidia questioned. Lots of people would have had answers for this, but she had to be supportive.
"Nothing, you're a pretty girl. If Rey doesn't like you, it's his loss." Katie reassured her.
"How?" Nidia asked "He should have never made the deal if he didn't want to go through with it. He must be gay." She added.
"I doubt that." Katie responded. "He was probably just mad, he probably didn't even mean what he said." She insisted. She hugged her once more. "Wanna go back now?" she asked
"No, you go ahead." Nidia sighed
"Are you sure your gonna be ok?" Katie double-checked
"Yeah, thanks" Nidia slightly smiled.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~ "Caitlin, Jade, Tracy and Test walked down the hall.
"So, what type of game are you talking about?" Test questioned
"Possibly one that involves kissing or touching of some sort." Caitlin admitted
"Who do you have so far?" Jade questioned
"Jeff, RVD, HBK, and now Test" Caitlin smiled
"Oh my." Tracy began
".god!" Jade finished
"Do you need more? I can probably hook you up" Test offered
"Well, the other guys said the would look for some other WWE superstars, but the more merrier" Caitlin smiled "We need to find some of our friends too" She added
"Well, if Shaaira is with Kurt, she's not going anywhere" Tracy chimed in.
"Same for Katie if she met Edge, and Rachel if she met Matt. There's still Crystal, Mollie, Steph, Kerry, and K9" Jade added
"Mollie is gonna be mad if she finds out, and that I didn't tell her, not only that, but she's with Stacy, and we don't need Stacy around, if we want Jeff to forget he has a girlfriend" Caitlin reminded
"You girls are naughty" Test grinned
"Well, we can try and find the others" Jade reminded.
~*~*~*~*~
Shaaira and K-9 walked down the hall with Charlie and Kurt. Shaaira held Kurt's muscular arm, while K-9 cuddled closely to Charlie.
"So, where did you get a nickname like K-9?" Charlie asked
"My friends call me that because it sounds like my name" K-9 smiled
"Your not gonna bite me are you?" Charlie joked with a grin.
"Only if you want me too." K-9 laughed. He was such a cutie.
"I'll never understand why some people don't like you. Your so awesome, and incredibly sweet." Shaaria smiled
"Thanks, you seems really sweet too." Kurt admitted slightly blushing.
"Maybe we should split up." Shaaira suggested. She liked K-9 and Charlie but she really wanted to be alone with Kurt.
"Sounds good to me." K-9 agreed. This was the perfect opportunity ro be alone with Charlie.
Thanks to: Hearts Desire, Jade, Caitlin714, Mollie, DeadGrlWalkin89, Speedy, hardyzgirl, DreamLover684, Sara Blaze, Louise N, AIRColtan, HBKSteph and Dee, and katyg-uk for the reviews. PLEASE READ AND REVIEW! I'd also really appreciate it, if you would check out my other stories if you haven't gotten the chance. I'll add Katy, Coltan, and Robert to my next chapter if you all get a chance to review this chapter. Unfortunitly, in the next chapter I'm gonna HAVE to start removing people who are not reviewing. I haven't heard if anyone knows where Tracy is, and she hasn't reviewed, so if this continues, I'm gonna have to start yanking people out. I'm writing for about 13 people right now, and adding more, so if some people aren't even reading it's only fair to take them out. Shaaira, no I didn't receive your e-mail, but I understand, I won't take you out.: ) Now, on to a more serious note. For the first time ever, since I started writing fanfiction, I've received my first bad review. Let me start off by saying, I am open to any kind of critism, and opinions whether they are positive or negative, BUT, however, I do have the right to defend my work. Speedy, I don't understand many parts of your review. It didn't make sense, how can having a wwe superstar interact with a fan be a "bad" thing For the character? I think I've done an ok job on giving each person their own personality. I also don't understand where you think I'm making the wrestlers seems "stupid" obviously the notebook controls things, but how's is that not using deceny? I think I've given them a human quality instead of the unreachable star status. It seems like the reason you don't like the story is because Spike was in the beginning and I haven't used him recently. First of all, not EVERY character can be a main character. There are a lot of people I haven't used in a while, yet Spike is the only one you mentioned. I haven't used Torrie, Maven, Stephanie, or Brock in a while. You biggest problem seems to be not enough Spike, and if that's all it was all you had to do was ask to see more of him, not bash my writing. Other people have mentioned things they want to see more of which I plan on including in the next chapter, such as Steph/Brock. And for a while I didn't use Bubba or Trish. But the only one you mentioned was Spike. I didn't leave out the "little guys" I have little guys in there, but the only one you've mentioned Once again, is Spike. "Impossible to get wrestlers?" Your making wrestlers sound like their not human being. They bleed like us, they breathe the same air, and maybe the chance of being with one of them is unlikely, but their just like us, so it's not impossible. Many of them have married women who are not in the business. Then you say that they "get them to with little to no effort" that's not true, the story has been going on for 13 chapters, and none of them have gotten one of them. They've flirted, but that's all. Then you say I make the wrestlers a little too hard to get. You just contradicted yourself. First you say I m,ake them too easy to get with little or no effort, then you say their too hard to get(?) that just doesn't make sense. My priorities are completely arranged, I'm open to whatever anyone has to say, but I think you need to take some of you own advice as a reader. You shouldn't judge someone's writing ability based on one story you've read by them. I have seven other stories, so to say that I'm a bad writer, or that I don't deserve your readership isn't a fair judgement unless you've read all of my stories and don't like any of them. If you wanted more Spike that's all you had to say. I thank you all for you, and everyone else for their reviews, I hope someday I do "earn" your readership, but I understand that not everyone is going to like my work and I respect that. Katy, I need to know your fave wrestlers. THANKS.
Preview: New people added, How will Shaaira react to being alone with Kurt, what about Charlie and K-9? What will Rey do about Nidia? Will Lita demolish Rachel? Will Crystal tell Taker? Much more!
"Dude, I think you've been a little too hard on Nidia." Edge admitted with a sigh.
"Please don't tell me your on her side too!" Rey exclaimed.
"I'm not on anybody's side, I'm just saying she has feelings, and maybe you should take that into consideration." Edge explained.
"She likes it when people are mean to her. Maybe if I'm nice to her she'll get off my back." Rey exclaimed.
"Is that all you care about? Look, I can respect the fact that you don't like her, but that's no reason to treat her like that." Edge offered.
"This is because of that Katie girl huh?" Rey asked "Besides, I've said worse things to her in spanish and she's said worse to me." He insisted.
"I think you really hurt her." Edge admitted. Rey cupped his head in his hands and let out a frustrated sigh.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Crystal and Taker actually got into a deep personal conversation. She began to act as if she were about to cooperate and then slyly struck up a conversation about something else. It was amazing how much they had in common.
"I've never told anyone that." Taker admitted after telling her a story about his past. She couldn't believe he had shared a private moment with her. "I love Sara, we have our problems but everyone does." He added.
"You met her too soon." Crystal replied.
"What do you mean?" Taker asked curiously.
"Cause you didn't get the chance to meet me first" Crystal frowned. "I know what I want for the notebook." She added. This would completely betray her friends, but they would understand, right? She loved Taker, so they would definitely understand, but what if they didn't? After all, she would be betraying them.
"Name it" Taker answered finally realizing he had forgotten all about the notebook. How could he forget something like that, and how long had they been talking?
"I can look at you, but I can't hold you. Even if I did hug you, I'd never truly hold you. Sara has something so special, something I'd give anything for. I'll never be able to have you for the rest of my life because your married to her, but I want you tonight. Give me what I want, and I'll give you what you want." Crystal offered.
~*~*~*~*~
Sam and Staci spotted Mollie talking to Trish and Bubba. It was as if sunlight had hit Staci's face for the first time. She ran up to them with anticipation filling her chest, this was the moment she had been waiting for. She stumbled over her own two feet and fell right at Bubba's feet. Trish, Stacy, Mollie, and Sam all laughed. Mollie and Sam tried to hold it in but they couldn't help it. Bubba slightly chuckled as well. He and Mollie bent down and began to help her up. He was actually touching her!
"Are you ok?" Bubba asked
"Yeah, that was a pretty nice fall." Mollie grinned "Guys this is Staci, and she's practically in love with Bubba." She added. Staci's eyes bulged out, how could Mollie tell them that?! Sure, everyone else knew, but now she didn't know how to act around him, she blushed as he glanced at her.
"Sorry, he's taken" Trish smiled, holding his hand. She normally didn't mind Trish, but right now, she couldn't stand her.
"And this is Sam" Mollie added. "Their my friends." She explained. Sam also shook their hands. She stood slightly behind Stacy and couldn't help but laugh, she didn't mean to draw attention to it, but she couldn't hold it in.
"What?" Bubba asked
"Yeah, what's so funny?" Trish questioned.
"Oh, nothing" Sam insisted, but everyone knew, whatever it was had to be about Staci.
"What is it?" Staci asked looking back. Her pants had split down the middle in the back. It must have happened when she fell. Soon enough Mollie caught a glimpse of the embarrassing moment, and she couldn't hide it from any of them, and she struggled to hold her pants together. They tried to hold back any laughter, as her face turned red.
"It's nothing to be embarrassed about, it happens to a lot of people" Bubba reasoned
"Red hearts huh?" Trish giggled referring to her underwear. Mollie, Sam, and Stacy giggled as well.
"I have heart underwear" Sam lied, trying to ease the embarrassment. This was Writie's fault! It had to be! She was never that bad of a cluts, maybe it was because she was so nervous to be around Bubba.
"Me or Trish probably have some pants or something you can wear." Stacy offered.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Rachel stumbled to her feet.
"Ouch, that was a stiff closeline, one point for Lita" Matt announced.
"I barely even touched her and she can hardy walk" Lita complained.
"I was caught off guard!" Rachel protested. "Matt, you know you should choose me!" She insisted with a huge smiled, displaying her cute dimples. Matt grinned at her.
"One more point for the cuteness" He decided. She continued to bat her eyes at him as Lita looked on in anger.
"Matt, do you really wanna leave this?" Lita asked as she grabbed him and passionately kissed him. Rachel's mouth dropped open. Lita released him with a big smile.
"Whoa, 5 points for that." Matt gasped.
"You bitch!" Rachel yelled angrily. She suddenly kicked Lita in the stomach and delivered Matt's finishing move, the Twist Of Fate, with electrifying "Mattitude." Matt's mouth hung open in shock. She stood there proudly as Lita struggled to get up. Lita hadn't even been paying attention to the little runt, and now she had gotten in a cheap shot!
"Wow." Matt began in surprise Rachel cut him off by cupping his face and delivering a kiss of her own. Now, Lita was back on her feet and more pissed off than ever.
"that was 10 points" Matt admitted trying to regain his composure.
"10 points!" Lita cried outraged.
"A Twist Of Fate, followed by a kiss, it doesn't get much better than that." Matt reasoned. Lita speared Rachel onto the floor and they began to roll around and pull each other's hair. Lita gave her a few chops in the chest, and the delivered a DDT. She ran to a near by table and climbed on top of it. She flew through the air performing an amazing moonsault, and Rachel was unable to avoid contact. Rachel could barely defend herself as she laid on the floor weakly. She figured she's get her ass kicked, but damn! Lita threw her to the floor as Matt looked on intently. What was she thinking?! She could never beat Lita! Lita left her in the middle of the room, as Matt checked on her. She came back with a chair.
"Oh god!" Rachel groaned.
"Lita, ok, you won, it's going too far." Matt insisted
"No, she didn't win!" Rachel cried
"I told you I wasn't going to fight her, you insisted, so, now I'm gonna finish it!" Lita declared as she raised the chair above her head.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Steph and Kerry walked down the hall with Shelton.
"So, you wrestled with Brock?" Kerry asked thinking of the vicious monster.
"Yeah, we were roommates." Shelton answered.
"Oh, can you guys wait here for a second, I forgot my jacket back there." Kerry asked
"Ok, just try not to get lost." Steph warned
"You two behave while I'm gone." Kerry joked
"You have amazing eyes" Shelton smiled "Steph, I think we really could have something" He added as he pulled her close.
"We just met" Steph gulped
"Yeah, but I like you, and you like me, what do you say we make it official?" Shelton proposed.
"Um." Steph began nervously. She couldn't turn him down she'd feel awful! She was just too damn nice! But she could just be with him, she had a crush on someone else. "Maybe we should." She began again but his puppy eyes got to her, as his grip got tighter.
"Should what?" Shelton asked
"Ok, yes, it's official." Steph sighed. He excitedly hugged her and just as he was about top seal it with a kiss, Kerry returned.
"Alright, let's go!" Kerry chirped.
"Now, I need to be excused, I really need to use the bath room." Steph admitted as she walked down the hall.
"Hurry!" Kerry urged.
~*~*~*~*~*~
Katie hugged Nidia as she cried on her shoulder. Nidia was the last person she ever thought she'd be comforting. She actually really felt bad for her.
"I really liked him." Nidia sniffled
"Why don't you tell him that? Instead of trying to rape him, maybe you should be real with him, so he'll take you seriously. I didn't know if Edge would like me, but I was just myself and we hit it off great." Katie suggested
"You see the way he treats me, he's never gonna take me seriously. What's so bad about me? What's wrong with me?" Nidia questioned. Lots of people would have had answers for this, but she had to be supportive.
"Nothing, you're a pretty girl. If Rey doesn't like you, it's his loss." Katie reassured her.
"How?" Nidia asked "He should have never made the deal if he didn't want to go through with it. He must be gay." She added.
"I doubt that." Katie responded. "He was probably just mad, he probably didn't even mean what he said." She insisted. She hugged her once more. "Wanna go back now?" she asked
"No, you go ahead." Nidia sighed
"Are you sure your gonna be ok?" Katie double-checked
"Yeah, thanks" Nidia slightly smiled.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~ "Caitlin, Jade, Tracy and Test walked down the hall.
"So, what type of game are you talking about?" Test questioned
"Possibly one that involves kissing or touching of some sort." Caitlin admitted
"Who do you have so far?" Jade questioned
"Jeff, RVD, HBK, and now Test" Caitlin smiled
"Oh my." Tracy began
".god!" Jade finished
"Do you need more? I can probably hook you up" Test offered
"Well, the other guys said the would look for some other WWE superstars, but the more merrier" Caitlin smiled "We need to find some of our friends too" She added
"Well, if Shaaira is with Kurt, she's not going anywhere" Tracy chimed in.
"Same for Katie if she met Edge, and Rachel if she met Matt. There's still Crystal, Mollie, Steph, Kerry, and K9" Jade added
"Mollie is gonna be mad if she finds out, and that I didn't tell her, not only that, but she's with Stacy, and we don't need Stacy around, if we want Jeff to forget he has a girlfriend" Caitlin reminded
"You girls are naughty" Test grinned
"Well, we can try and find the others" Jade reminded.
~*~*~*~*~
Shaaira and K-9 walked down the hall with Charlie and Kurt. Shaaira held Kurt's muscular arm, while K-9 cuddled closely to Charlie.
"So, where did you get a nickname like K-9?" Charlie asked
"My friends call me that because it sounds like my name" K-9 smiled
"Your not gonna bite me are you?" Charlie joked with a grin.
"Only if you want me too." K-9 laughed. He was such a cutie.
"I'll never understand why some people don't like you. Your so awesome, and incredibly sweet." Shaaria smiled
"Thanks, you seems really sweet too." Kurt admitted slightly blushing.
"Maybe we should split up." Shaaira suggested. She liked K-9 and Charlie but she really wanted to be alone with Kurt.
"Sounds good to me." K-9 agreed. This was the perfect opportunity ro be alone with Charlie.
Thanks to: Hearts Desire, Jade, Caitlin714, Mollie, DeadGrlWalkin89, Speedy, hardyzgirl, DreamLover684, Sara Blaze, Louise N, AIRColtan, HBKSteph and Dee, and katyg-uk for the reviews. PLEASE READ AND REVIEW! I'd also really appreciate it, if you would check out my other stories if you haven't gotten the chance. I'll add Katy, Coltan, and Robert to my next chapter if you all get a chance to review this chapter. Unfortunitly, in the next chapter I'm gonna HAVE to start removing people who are not reviewing. I haven't heard if anyone knows where Tracy is, and she hasn't reviewed, so if this continues, I'm gonna have to start yanking people out. I'm writing for about 13 people right now, and adding more, so if some people aren't even reading it's only fair to take them out. Shaaira, no I didn't receive your e-mail, but I understand, I won't take you out.: ) Now, on to a more serious note. For the first time ever, since I started writing fanfiction, I've received my first bad review. Let me start off by saying, I am open to any kind of critism, and opinions whether they are positive or negative, BUT, however, I do have the right to defend my work. Speedy, I don't understand many parts of your review. It didn't make sense, how can having a wwe superstar interact with a fan be a "bad" thing For the character? I think I've done an ok job on giving each person their own personality. I also don't understand where you think I'm making the wrestlers seems "stupid" obviously the notebook controls things, but how's is that not using deceny? I think I've given them a human quality instead of the unreachable star status. It seems like the reason you don't like the story is because Spike was in the beginning and I haven't used him recently. First of all, not EVERY character can be a main character. There are a lot of people I haven't used in a while, yet Spike is the only one you mentioned. I haven't used Torrie, Maven, Stephanie, or Brock in a while. You biggest problem seems to be not enough Spike, and if that's all it was all you had to do was ask to see more of him, not bash my writing. Other people have mentioned things they want to see more of which I plan on including in the next chapter, such as Steph/Brock. And for a while I didn't use Bubba or Trish. But the only one you mentioned was Spike. I didn't leave out the "little guys" I have little guys in there, but the only one you've mentioned Once again, is Spike. "Impossible to get wrestlers?" Your making wrestlers sound like their not human being. They bleed like us, they breathe the same air, and maybe the chance of being with one of them is unlikely, but their just like us, so it's not impossible. Many of them have married women who are not in the business. Then you say that they "get them to with little to no effort" that's not true, the story has been going on for 13 chapters, and none of them have gotten one of them. They've flirted, but that's all. Then you say I make the wrestlers a little too hard to get. You just contradicted yourself. First you say I m,ake them too easy to get with little or no effort, then you say their too hard to get(?) that just doesn't make sense. My priorities are completely arranged, I'm open to whatever anyone has to say, but I think you need to take some of you own advice as a reader. You shouldn't judge someone's writing ability based on one story you've read by them. I have seven other stories, so to say that I'm a bad writer, or that I don't deserve your readership isn't a fair judgement unless you've read all of my stories and don't like any of them. If you wanted more Spike that's all you had to say. I thank you all for you, and everyone else for their reviews, I hope someday I do "earn" your readership, but I understand that not everyone is going to like my work and I respect that. Katy, I need to know your fave wrestlers. THANKS.
Preview: New people added, How will Shaaira react to being alone with Kurt, what about Charlie and K-9? What will Rey do about Nidia? Will Lita demolish Rachel? Will Crystal tell Taker? Much more!